Invitation to the Dance
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Lucius and Cho are not a pairing that I have seen before, but somehow you make it work. Thank you.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Invitation to the Dance)
Thanks for the review. The idea was to bring out Cho's character that is in canon but not visible to Harry Potter, although the portrait was a bit exagerated for comedic effect.
Love the incorporation of the prompts along with the growing affable relations between Lucius and Cho--it seems that they both can help and contribute to the other, and I'm really enjoying them enjoy being and discovering things together. Looking forward to here their enterprises will lead them!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Invitation to the Dance)
As you observed, after a stormy beginning, their compatibility is beginning to show itself. Thanks for reading.
That was utterly unexpected, but it worked. Thanks for sharing this little bit of fun. And hopefully they can avoid unwanted trouble this time.
Response from Fairfield (Author of Invitation to the Dance)
Thanks for taking a chance and reading. The story asks if we are no longer Harry- centric, how would a girl look who attracts two Triwizard champions, who is a Seeker, and who is an intellectual?
Excellent usage of the prompts! I was chuckling at the very first sentence and laughing aloud by the third--really enjoyed the biting, piquant humour and sauciness both Lucius and Cho were dishing out. Loved the street action and fight scenarios with the thugs, both Muggle ones and wizard ones, although Cho's dance for all the boys (and hidden wand reference) was a classic.
There's a fascinating, feisty chemistry between these two--looking forward to more!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Invitation to the Dance)
Thank you very much. This section was a bit over-the-top, but it got Cho out of the weepy-girl category. It tried to be an accurate character portrait. Any extension will be less madcap.
Great usage of the prompts, incorporated in! Again, the dynamic energy and chemistry between these two stands out and is so delightful; this, along with contemplative zingers meshed in with their escapades, is so enjoyable! Thank you for giving us a fresh glimpse into this rare pairing!
Response from Fairfield (Author of Invitation to the Dance)
Thank you for the kind comments. The story tried to portray a dynamic instead of sentimental attraction. The story also tried to portray the true Cho Chang. The pairing may be rare, but there are few wizards who could cope with this mercurial lady.