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Potions Under Duress Death Looks so Good on You
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Death Looks so Good on You

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Death Looks so Good on You

Siryanne

4 Reviews   |   4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potions Under Duress 1,486 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus' funeral day. His life partner Hermione stands quietly above his coffin, thinking about their life together. Death looks so good on him. How could she be unhappy?

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0/10

EverMystique

That was sad. Watching the wasting away of a loved one will change anyone's mind about 'mercy killing.' Glad you brought them back together in death.

9/10

Southern_Witch_69

I was quite surprised that she "put him out of his misery." Did she use a poison? How did the dang Wizengamot find out? LOL Good story.

Response from Siryanne (Author of Death Looks so Good on You)

Thank you! :)I have not really thought about how she killed him. Maybe she used one of Severus' potions. In any case, she did it with his consent. Well, I mean that he wanted to die, not that he told her to kill him! :) As for the Wizengamot, I think she confessed what she did to someone she should have not trust. Harry or someone else. I don't know ;)

0/10

Anijade

Some how I never got the impression that she had physically killed him and was left in the dark on how she did so. The emotions were well expressed but the ending came out of left field for me

Response from Siryanne (Author of Death Looks so Good on You)

Arg, I'm embarrassed because I don't understand well your review but I think it is interesting. So I don't know if I'm going to answer your question :)! Hermione has indeed physically killed him and she knows how she did it, but she "forgets" it during a few minutes. Reality comes back to her at the end. I don't know what "left field" means but I think it is not positive! lol! In fact, when I wrote it into French, I hesitated to write the last paragraph, I didn't thought it was necessary. But finally I prefer to end the story like this, rather than with "how could I regret to etc...". It was a choice, I don't say it was good ;) Thank you!

Response from Anijade (Reviewer)

Left field isn't bad per se just unexpected with no lead up to it. Can you tell me how she killed him?

Response from Siryanne (Author of Death Looks so Good on You)

Look at my answer to southern_witch. I understand now what you meant ;) Cheers

10/10

azulkan2

I loved it!

Response from Siryanne (Author of Death Looks so Good on You)

thanks ;)

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