Chapter Two
Chapter 2 of 5
articcat621Hermione begins to receive notes from her secret admirer. As the Masquerade Ball draws closer, she hopes to find out his identity.
A/N: A huge thanks to JenniferLupinBlack for being my alpha and to Craftsman for being my fabulous beta.
Disclaimer: JKR owns the world and characters of Harry Potter, not me. I also do not own Shakespeare's sonnet. I am making no money from the posting of this story.
Chapter Two
The next day, Hermione sat down with Ginny for breakfast. The redhead looked glum, so Hermione decided she would share her news with her. Maybe a little gossip would cheer Ginny right up?
"So, guess what!" Hermione said, smiling cheerfully.
Ginny looked up from her porridge. "What?" she asked, curious about Hermione's cheery attitude.
"So, I opened up my Charms book last night and a letter fell out," Hermione whispered, leaning forward so only Ginny would hear.
Ginny's brown eyes widened. "What?" she hissed, grabbing Hermione's arm and pulling her even closer. "What kind of letter?"
A blush crept across Hermione's face. "A love letter."
"A love letter! From who? Was it for you?" Ginny exclaimed in a whisper.
"Of course it was!" Hermione whispered back excitedly. "It had my name on it and everything."
Ginny let out a small squeal of delight, gaining a few stares.
Hermione quickly shushed her. "Don't tell anyone ... especially Harry and Ron," she pleaded.
"Of course not," Ginny promised. "So who was it from?"
"I don't know," Hermione said. She frowned. She had spent most of the night lying in bed trying to figure out who could have written her the note. She truly had no idea. "It just said from my secret admirer."
"This is so exciting," Ginny pressed. "I wonder who it is. Do you have any guesses?"
Hermione shook her head.
Ginny frowned. "Really? No idea at all."
Hermione gave a dejected shrug. "No idea." She frowned. "Maybe it's just Lavender playing a mean joke on me."
"No!" Ginny hissed. "I don't think she'd stoop that low."
Hermione arched her eyebrow. "She can be pretty vindictive."
"No, don't think like that. Is it so hard for you to believe that someone likes you?" Ginny asked, getting a little flustered at Hermione not seeing how beautiful she really was.
"Yes," Hermione admitted.
"Well, that's absurd. You're gorgeous, Hermione." Ginny gave Hermione a quick hug. "Don't ever think otherwise, okay?"
Hermione nodded. The two of them stood, knowing it was time to go to class. "Were you all right earlier?" Hermione asked as they made their way into the halls.
Ginny gave a shrug. "Dean and I had a row earlier, big surprise there."
"Do you want to talk about it?"
Ginny shook her head. "Not at all. He's just being an arse for no reason."
Hermione was quiet. "Well, this is my stop. I'll see you later." The two of them lingered outside of the classroom door.
"Bye!" Ginny said, hugging Hermione before continuing down the hallway.
Stepping into the Transfiguration classroom, Hermione saw she was the first one there. She was usually early for all her classes so it wasn't too out of the ordinary. However, what was out of the ordinary was the small piece of paper at her usual seat.
Walking over, Hermione looked at the paper. It was blank. "Weird," she muttered. Picking up the paper, she gasped when words started to appear. A smile appeared on her face when she realized it was from her secret admirer once more.
When, in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,
I all alone beweep my outcast state
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries
And look upon myself and curse my fate,
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,
Featured like him, like him with friends possess'd,
Desiring this man's art and that man's scope,
With what I most enjoy contented least;
Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,
Haply I think on thee, and then my state,
Like to the lark at break of day arising
From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven's gate;
For thy sweet love remember'd such wealth brings
That then I scorn to change my state with kings.
Hermione sighed. Whoever her admirer was, he was obviously a fan of Shakespeare. The sonnet he quoted was one of her favorites, but she couldn't help but wonder why he specifically picked that one. There was a certain sense of darkness there that intrigued Hermione. She needed to find out who her admirer was.
The rest of the class filed in, and Hermione frowned when she realized Harry and Ron weren't going to sit with her. She looked at them with a forlorn expression on her face. Neville noticed and took the vacant seat next to her.
"They'll get over it, Hermione," Neville said apologetically. He had heard what had happened from Seamus and Dean. They had witnessed Hermione sticking up for a Slytherin and word had spread like wildfire.
Hermione frowned. "I can't believe they've allowed it to go this far." Many of the other Gryffindors were giving her dirty looks. "I'm some sort of pariah simply because I wouldn't lie to Professor Snape." She shook her head. "Ridiculous."
Professor McGonagall entered the room and class began. They were learning how to transfigure their hair into different colors, lengths, or styles. It was harder than she had anticipated it to be.
Neville and she practiced together. Neville had tried very hard to change his hair color but ended up failing.
"It looks a little lighter," Hermione said, trying to make him feel better.
He shrugged. "Let's see what you can do."
Hermione closed her eyes and imagined her hair as blonde. A small "whoa" from Neville alerted her to her success. "How does it look?" she asked, reaching from the mirror.
"Your hair is very blonde," he said. His eyes flicked to something behind her.
"What?" Hermione asked, turning her head to see what he was looking at. She glanced backwards and found a pair of grey eyes looking at her. Her brown eyes widened in surprise. "Why is Malfoy staring at me?" she whispered.
Neville laughed. "Well, your hair is the same color as his. That might be why."
She found herself smiling. Malfoy quickly tore his gaze away, returning his attention to Pansy. Hermione turned back around in her seat and looked to Neville. "Why don't you practice some more?" she suggested after she turned her hair brown once more.
"All right," Neville replied. The two of them spent the rest of the class practicing the charm some more.
Once class ended, Hermione and Neville made their way towards the Great Hall. Since Transfiguration was a double period, it was now time for dinner.
"You know, I'm surprised you're not wearing a paper bag over your face," a shrill voice called out.
Hermione stopped, turning around. Neville paused beside her.
Lavender stood with her hands on her hips, drawing the attention of some of the other students. Even the Slytherins stopped and stared.
"So why did you betray your fellow Gryffindors?" Lavender asked. "Are you whoring yourself around with a Slytherin?"
Hermione's face burned with anger and embarrassment. How dare she stand there and say those things?
"That's it, isn't it? You're a traitor and a whore?" Lavender smirked, enjoying the public shaming of Hermione.
"You have no idea what you're talking about, Lavender!" Hermione retorted with a glare. "None of that is remotely true."
"Of course it is!" Lavender said, laughing. "So, which one is it? Crabbe? Goyle? Or maybe Parkinson is more in your taste."
"None of them!" Hermione shrieked. "I'm not sleeping with anyone!"
"Lavender, that's enough," Neville said, stepping in. "There's no need for this. Back off."
"She's a slut! First Ron, now the Slytherins. No shame, huh, Hermione? Who's next? Professors? Perhaps Professor Snape?" Lavender taunted. Hermione heard the whispers forming around her.
"That's how she gets her good grades." someone spoke in a loud whisper.
Hermione, unable to take anymore, turn and ran down the hallway. She ran until her lungs grew heavy, and then she slowed into a walk. Not wanting anyone to see her cry, she wandered about the halls aimlessly. She just needed some alone time.
Eventually, Hermione made her way back to the dorm. Everyone was still at dinner so she was able to slip into bed without being noticed. As she was about to close the curtains, she froze. There was a single rose on her nightstand. A small note was attached.
Don't let what Lavender said bother you... You're worth so much more than that.
Hermione smiled but she couldn't help but wonder how her secret admirer managed to get into her dorm. Maybe a girl brought it up? Or maybe it was a house-elf? She was hitting a dead end in her conclusions.
Bringing the rose to her nose, she sniffed it. Its sweet smell calmed her nerves. Her admirer was right. She shouldn't let what Lavender said bother her.
She knew none of it was true and that was all that mattered. Eventually, Hermione drifted to sleep feeling better about herself.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Her Secret Admirer
19 Reviews | 7.53/10 Average
Great story so far.
So sweet.
Sequelllllllll??? I'd forgotten how much I used to be obsessed with Hermione/Draco stories before I discovered Hermione/Snape haha.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Yay! Thank you so much! Unfortunately, there's no sequel in the works, but I appreciate you telling me how much you enjoyed it! So thank you! xx
The plot thickens. I love the idea of a masquerade ball to get Hermione closer to her admirer. And the journal is a great idea. Something tells me she'll be using it a fair bit.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thank you very much for the review! I appreciate it! xx
Confirmare intacta - swish, flick and point. Tip of wand glows to show if unsullied or not.I know how the wantip would glow if cast on Hermione, pure white, pure, untried, virginal intact -- but how would the wandtip glow if the spell was cast on Lavender? Bright scarlet red? Too bad Hermione didn't know that little spell? Of course it's my gift to you, articcat621I feel sorry for Hermione, but at least her admirer lifted her spirits. House-elf. sent to her room by house-elf. that's my vote.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Ohhhh, that's very nifty! It will definitely make an appearance in some of my future works ;) Thank you! Xx
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
If you ever need a spell, there are online English - Latin transaltors, and If you'd like, you can reach out to me, I'll help. Also for potions ingredients - looking up herbs online can be fun. I keep a infor sheet of herbs on my thumbdrive. Same for any unusual plants, creatures, sea life, bugs, etc that I find while bumming around on the internet. I keep a bunch of little pics and title them with the botanical names and common nanes - then match it up with a inforsheet as well. After a while you emass quite a list. lol But writer to writer, if you want a hand, email me anytime. Hugs. bea~
Girls can be so vicious, little Lav-Lav must be really afraid of Hermione to go after her like that. I hope Ron and Harry will stand up for her this time.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thank you very much for the review :) I appreciate it! Xx
That's Ron alright, all the grace and tact of a flobberworm, and as for Harry he needs to learn to fight words with words, not hexs. Hermione is not to blame for their lack of control.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thanks for taking the time to read and review! I loved your comparison of Ron to a flobberworm ;) xx
Response from mick42 (Reviewer)
I hope the flobberworms don't get mad.
None of Lavender's assertions are true but baseless lies don't hurt any less. Poor Hermione. At least, so far she seems to have Neville and Ginny on her side along with her secret admirer. Considering that Ron's her brother and how much she likes Harry, though, I have to wonder how long Ginny might hold up against the vicious onslaught that has begun courtesy of Ron's bitchy little girlfriend.
Maybe, hopefully, someone will devise the magical equivalent of super glue to shut Lav-Lav's obnoxious mouth every time she opens it to abuse Hermione. There's Silencio of course but perhaps something that can't be canceled by a simple Finite.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
:D Thank you very much for reviewing! I appreciate you taking the time to do so and I hope you continue to follow and enjoy the story :) x
Yeah, that sounds like Ron alright. He'll sit back and lazily watch Lavender trash Hermione to all and sundry without a qualm but once she refuses to back up him and Harry in a lie, Hermione's instantly branded a traitor.
And I'm sure once Lavender knows her Won-Won and Harry are on the outs with her, she won't hesitate to take full advantage and do her level best to make Gryffindor Tower as inhospitable as possible for Hermione.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing:)
Lavender showing her ugly face. What was Hermione thinking when transfiguring her hair??
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thanks for the review:) and who knows... maybe a certain someone was on her mind ;) hehe
Poor Hermione. They used to just ignore her and whisper about her, now they are getting downright vindictive. Of course, I've never been a big fan of Lavender anyway. Someone always needed to put her in her place.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thanks! I'm also not a huge fan of Lavender, which is why she happens to be "nasty" in a lot of my work. :x hehe
Interesting mystery that's been set up. I can definitely see her wanting to get to the bottom of it.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thanks! Our Hermione is always up for a challenge:)
What a fun story. I look forward to more.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thank you very much! :)
Nice to see his plan of charming her to win her over worked. Must have been tough for him to know that there was the chance she would just reject him because of who he is. I think they make a much better couple than Hermione and Ron, of course I think she'd be better off with just about anyone else.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thank you very much. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story :D
Can't wait to see how he's going to pull this off, with all the" Slytherin Whore" talk still so fresh in Hermione's mind.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
:D Thanks for reading & reviewing! xx
Hermione is taking a big chance, anyone could have sent that journal, remember the trouble Ginny got into with a journal.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
I agree, but I figure Hermione's willing to take a chance. She's being daring for once ;)
And the plot thickens. So nice for Hermione to have found someone who actually treats her like a girl. And Ginny made the right choice. Can't wait to see how the first in person meeting goes.
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thank you very much for the review! I'm pleased you liked it and hope you enjoy the next & final chapter! xx
Well done
nice start indeed. I hope we also get to hear Dumbledore's announcements. A pity, though, that you gave away who the admirer is in the list of characters. Or at least I think so...Maybe you want to quickly change that to "name withheld"?
Response from articcat621 (Author of Her Secret Admirer)
Thanks for the review! And for the suggestion. I felt kinda derpy when I realized I did that. Haha, but thank you! xx