Chapter 7
Chapter 8 of 9
Proulxes"I've read her notes," he grated through his teeth. "And I've seen your machine. But it's all about the outward journey. What do you need to do to recall her?"
"Wait! What? Recall her from where?" Weasley's voice was high with fright. "What the bloody hell is going on, Snape?"
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A/N: I know it's been a ridiculously long time since I updated this story and I am so sorry about that! Thank you to those of you who sent me messages of support and have waited patiently over the past six months while I got my act back together. This chapter comes to you courtesy of beaweasley2, nagandsev and Clairvoyant, without whom... without whom....
Hermione is missing and a reluctant Severus has been dragged to the Department of Mysteries to find her....
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Ron recoiled in shock as he saw Hermione's apprentice master grovel at his feet on the patterned blue carpet of the Time Room. The forced transformation had left Peverell breathless and Snape clearly badly drained, half-collapsed on the benches beside them, his laboured breathing harsh and painful.
He watched, unable to move, as Peverell clutched at the carpet beneath his pale, thin fingers. The sight reminded Ron suddenly of the moment when Sirius and Remus had transformed Scabbers into Pettigrew all those years ago in the Shrieking Shack. The memory of that horrible time made him feel a bit sick, and he stepped backwards a little to where Snape was slumped on the benches next to them.
Ron rolled his wand between his fingers. "What do we do now?" he whispered at Snape, uncertain.
Snape's eyes were squeezed shut, and he was pulling air into his lungs through his teeth with an audible hiss. His lips moved. Ron leaned closer.
"Aurors," he heard the older man whisper harshly in his ear. "Coming soon... illegal spell... ask him!"
Peverell coughed, a dry and hacking sound, and began to lift himself onto his knees. Ron turned away from Snape and held out his wand in a shaking hand. "W... where is she?" he stammered, cursing himself for a prat.
The old wizard recoiled, his face slack, eyes bulging as they focussed on the tip of Ron's wand. "Don't...! Please!" the old wizard gasped, pushing himself backwards onto his heels and blinking rapidly, both hands held out before him like captured Muggles in a war movie. He was shaking badly, as though terrified, as his eyes flicked between Ron's face and his outstretched wand arm.
Ron felt a wash of guilt wash through him. He hadn't threatened anyone since the War, and the realisation that Peverell was shaking with terror, kneeling before him, made him feel ill. He lowered his wand, holding his other hand out instead in what he hoped was a soothing gesture.
Behind him, he heard Snape hiss again in annoyance.
"Master Peverell?" he asked, ignoring Snape.
"Ronald?" Peverell's thin voice quavered.
Ron's insides twisted again. He shoved his wand into its sheath in his jeans and reached forward to try to help the small man rise to his feet. Peverell clutched at Ron's arm, his thin, bony fingers digging painfully into the exposed flesh.
"Ronald? Is it you?" Peverell asked again, blinking myopically up at the tall redhead.
"Oh, for fuck's sake...!" Ron heard Snape mutter behind him.
"Yes, it's me, Master Peverell," he said loudly and, he hoped, soothingly, to the old man. "Hermione's boyfriend," he added deliberately for Snape's benefit. "Are you alright? Let's get you sat down, shall we?"
He carefully manoeuvred Peverell to the dentist's chair, feeling Snape's exasperated stare of disapproval burning into the back of his neck.
"You came, you came!" The old man was still grasping Ron's wand arm and breathing heavily, a thin whistle of air, but he stared trustingly into Ron's eyes as he sank into the cracked leather seat. Gripping Ron's forearm with his fingers, he turned his head to look at Snape. "She said that you would!" he added.
There was a pause, and Ron looked on in confusion between the two other men as Snape glowered back at Peverell, his eyes bright and black in the dancing light from the Bell Jar. The Potions master had collected himself, but it still looked as if every breath he took was an agony. However, his eyes burned with a fierce intensity as he stared back at Peverell.
"Um, yeah," Ron stammered, turning back to face Hermione's Apprentice Master, placing himself in the old man's line of sight.
Peverell focused again on Ron, then dabbed at his eyes with his crumpled sleeve, his other hand still clutched hard on Ron's forearm.
"Weasley...," Snape's voice was harsh, "the Aurors are coming...."
Ron gestured irritably behind him for the man to be quiet.
He cleared his throat. "We're looking for Hermione, Master Peverell," he began. "D'you know where she is?"
Tears spilled from Peverell's pale blue eyes, glinting on the rough texture of his stubbled cheeks. "I told her not to," he whispered, leaning forward, his thin fingers digging further into the flesh of Ron's wand arm. "We needed to run more tests, but the algorithms were lost... I'm so sorry...."
A sense of terrible dread settled in Ron's stomach. He shook his head, as if to clear his thoughts. "I don't understand," he blurted out. "What the hell has happened? W-where is she?"
Peverell flinched, but did not speak, eyes wide in horror and panic. Ron drew in his breath to try again...
"Oh, for fuck's sake, get out of the way, Weasley!"
Ron felt himself shoved roughly to the side as Snape pushed past him to grab the little old man by his collar. Snape was clutching his side with his other hand, digging the fingers into his stomach, and his face was shining with sweat. He looked dreadful, his face contorted and his lips pulled back from uneven, yellowing teeth in a snarl.
"We don't have much time, Peverell," he growled. "Answer the fucking question, and no more of your fucking delaying tactics. I've been manipulated by a master, and you're not even fucking close. The question isn't where is she, is it? It's when? And how are you going to get her back?"
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Hermione came back to herself slowly, her consciousness swirling and coalescing as her senses began to orientate themselves once more.
Oh, Merlin! She had a headache. It pulsed and throbbed from the back of her head through to her temples. She pushed herself shakily upright, her fingers digging into the rough fibres of the rug beneath her body. She could still feel the tingling running through the nerves of her skin.
The sharp prickle through her fingertips focused her memory.
Wards. On the door.
She looked about herself, remembering her disorientation, stumbling to the tent's opening, the sight of ancient Alexandria and that feeling of savage joy that she had accomplished everything she had hoped to do then, suddenly the shock of the wards on her fingers, falling to the floor...
Her fingers scrabbled uselessly in the sheet that was wrapped about her, but after a few seconds, she caught herself sharply, feeling foolish and panicked.
She fought to calm her racing heartbeat, to take deep, meditative breaths. Just because your wand is gone and there are wards on the tent doesn't mean you're a prisoner, she told herself, but the words rang hollow and unconvincing in her mind.
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Severus knew the Aurors were on their way - the sudden onset of the pain in his guts a few minutes ago had told him that his doppelgänger's mind-block had broken, which could only mean that the Trace was active on him once again. Forcing Peverell's Chameleon Charm to break in clear contravention of his parole was a sure way of pointing the fucking boys-in-brown straight towards him. How long will it take? he thought to himself, half-surprised that the idiots weren't already trying to bash the door down to arrest him.
He had to find her!
The cramping in his stomach was so bad he felt as if any further movement might cause him to actually vomit. What the fuck is the matter with me? he thought, baring his teeth against the torment in his belly. In vain, he tried to reestablish the Occlumency shield that the other Snape had put in place to reduce the impact of the pain, but his focus was in tatters. Hadn't his other self told him that the pain was something to do with the fact that the stupid girl was missing? He was disturbed that Peverell had recognised him, that he had been sure he would come why the hell was that?
"Watch the door, Weasley," he gasped.
"Why? What're you...?" The redhead closed his stupid mouth when Snape flashed him a savage look. If Peverell would not tell him directly.... He stared into Peverell's eyes, silently casting Legilimens while damning himself for a fool. Legilimens would land him in Azkaban for sure.
Peverell struggled beneath him, but he kept his fingers tightly wound into the old man's robe. The strange anxiety that he was feeling about Granger redoubled in force, and he twisted Peverell's collar tightly, the material digging into the soft flesh of the old man's neck. He struggled to connect with the old man's mind. There were defences there that he had not seen since...
A sudden thundering impact on the door to the Time Room interrupted his concentration.
Snape recoiled.
Oh, Fuck!
Fuck it!
The Aurors had found him. Thank the gods they had thought to ward the doors to the Time Room when they arrived.
His hand clutched tighter at Peverell's throat.
"Professor Snape!" Peverell squeaked in alarm, his rheumy eyes darting from side to side.
Snape could feel time passing with every thump of his heart. "I've read her notes," he grated through his teeth. "And I've seen your machine. But it's all about the outward journey. What do you need to do to recall her?"
"Wait! What? Recall her from where?" Weasley's voice was high with fright. "What the bloody hell is going on, Snape?"
The door thundered again. "SEVERUS SNAPE!" a magically amplified voice reverberated in the room. "WE KNOW YOU ARE IN THERE! COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP, OR WE WILL BE FORCED TO USE FORCE TO APPREHEND YOU!"
Snape rolled his eyes. "Forced to use force?" Do they always have to speak in clichés? he wondered
"Weasley..." he began.
"I'm on it," Ron interrupted, and Severus shot him a surprised look. The younger man's face was flushed but determined, his freckled jaw set.
Ron turned away from Peverell and Snape and pointed his wand through the open screen towards the door at the end of the room. Severus watched, nonplussed for a moment, as Weasley's lips began to move, sending strengthening spells towards the ancient wooden doors. Who knew that the boy could actually do something?
Peverell wriggled under his grip, and Severus' stomach clenched violently again. He shook his head. Concentrate. He redoubled his grip on Peverell's robes, virtually hauling the old man out of his seat, focusing his will on pulling the truth out of the cowering wizard beneath him.
"Speak," he enunciated clearly. "Where may she be found?"
Peverell licked his lips nervously. "You know already, Professor Snape," he said hoarsely. "Miss Granger has gone into the Temporal Accelerator... into the machine."
Snape nodded. That much was obvious. All Granger's notes, the machine itself with it's use of the quantum gases from the Bell Jar... the odd allusion to her secretive research going on at the Ministry... the owled requests from Peverell for him to... wait!
Snape twisted his fingers harder, looked deeper into Peverell's mind. "You...she wanted me here why?"
Peverell had the nerve to smile in response to his question, but then he began gagging ineffectually. Snape realised that his fingers were so tightly wound into the man's robes that they were choking him. He relaxed his grip a fraction. "Why, Peverell?" he snarled.
"Please, Professor Snape! May I explain?" the old man wheezed. "We seem to have got off on the wrong foot, so to speak!"
"Snape! I can't hold them for much longer!" Weasley shouted, his hand wavering under the strength of the Auror's assault.
"Up!" Snape ordered, pulling Peverell out of the dentist's chair and to his feet. "And don't lie to me,"...he hissed...Merlin! This fucking hurts!..."I've been lied to before, and I can recognise bullshit when I hear it. Now where and when is the bloody girl, and what's this got to do with me?"
Peverell fussed with his robes, straightening them. "Mister Snape, if she has survived the journey, she should be exactly where she planned to be." The old man paused, his eyes narrowing shrewdly. "And judging from the connection that you still clearly feel to her, she has indeed survived the transfer."
"What's he saying?" the boy shouted, pausing between the incantations he was using to shore up the wards against the Aurors.
"Weasley, keep your wand on the door!" Snape bellowed back above Weasley's spell casting and the sounds from outside the Time Room.
"What connection?" he hissed at Peverell. "What did she do to me?" His mind was whirling with the possibilities, fearful of the answer.
At the end of the cavernous room, the door heaved and groaned under the Auror's spells.
Once again, the magically magnified voice of one of them echoed through the room, "OPEN THE DOOR, SNAPE! DON'T TRY TO RESIST ARREST!"
"Peverell...," Snape growled, advancing again. "They come for me they come for you, too. Judging from the way you were hiding before we arrived, I think you know that your experiment wasn't exactly legal. What bloody connection?" Merlin, his stomach!
Peverell held up his hands, and they were shaking. "Why, your New Year charm of course!" he babbled. "The one that you shared with Miss Granger!"
Snape froze in surprise. The Redemption Charm? How is that possible?
"What?" Weasley practically howled. "What's he on about!"
"Have you not wondered why you did not return to Spinner's End, Professor Snape?" Peverell continued, "and why you feel her... loss... so keenly?" Peverell leaned forward, his eyes alight with something like excitement. "We believe that your Semper Meminere created a bond between yourself and Miss Granger which in some way linked you together, much in the same way as... your previous experiences." Peverell's eyes flicked pointedly to Snape's left forearm.
Severus' hand instinctively covered the remnants of the Dark Mark, his stomach churning and cramping.
That was what his other self had meant!
There was another crash at the door. The floor shook, and a few clocks on the wall began to shake and fall, smashing on the desks and floor.
"Snape!" Weasley bellowed, "They're coming!"
Fuck! Severus ripped his attention back to Peverell.
"How can we get her back?" he snapped, already knowing the answer. Adrenaline pumped through his veins, adding to the pain in his nerve endings, making him shake and quiver with anxiety.
Peverell's shoulders slumped. He shook his head. "The Temporal Accelerator acts like a slingshot, providing an uncontrolled method of time travel. It can move a witch or wizard far beyond their own timespan far further than the old small-scale Time Turners! This machine enables us to travel to a time far, far in the past. The body is projected backwards or forwards in time, but there was no telling where it would end. It could be thrown into free fall, or find itself emerging deep in the ocean... even buried in the earth! To fully function, it required a navigational device, to focus the energy to a specific place much like the chain on a Time-Turner anchored the user to that very spot."
"She found it." Snape stated flatly. "A way to fix the arrival point."
"I... I think so," Peverell's voice quavered a little.
Snape remembered Hermione's research, the genealogical tables... the genetic studies.
"Blood," he said with sudden inspiration.
Peverell looked startled, but nodded again. "Quite so... quite so. Hermione posited that she could form a temporal bond with someone who shares her genetic signature or part of it."
"A relation? I was not aware that Miss Granger had a family?" Snape had a vague memory of her being an only child whose parents had been lost in the War.
"No! Further than that! Miss Granger is an academic, Professor!" There was reproof in Peverell's tone. "The opportunity to study the distant past! To meet those people that we can only read about in the historical records. That is what she is was consumed by!"
Snape gave a cynical snort. Consumed...! But then he had a sudden vision of her earnest face, open and passionate... the way she spoke of her desire to be useful, to make a difference... and then the careful notes in her diary....
"An... ancestor, then?" Snape frowned. "How could she trace her roots back so far...?"
Peverell leaned forward. "Indeed! She believed that she had found a way to link with the famous Hypatia of Alexandria herself!"
Whatever Snape was going to say in response was lost as another deafening crash echoed throughout the room, sending more clocks tumbling to destruction from the walls and cabinets. The Aurors had finally overcome the wards on the door. They burst in, shouting loudly, their wands spitting spells into the Time Room.
Weasley cried out, falling backwards through the ornate screen towards where Snape and Peverell were standing. He was breathing heavily, and his hair was plastered to his forehead with sweat.
"Sorry," he gasped.
"Severus Snape! Show yourself!"
Severus recognised the voice of the smarmy git from Level Two.
"What now, Snape?" Weasley wheezed.
Snape heard the Aurors muttering among each other. He knew that they would be spreading out now, cautiously moving forward, nervous of cornering him... Snape the murderer... Snape the Death Eater....
He grabbed Weasley and hauled him to his feet. "Don't come any closer!" he yelled out. "I've got Ronald Weasley here with my wand to his throat!"
"Wha...?" Weasley sputtered.
Snape rolled his eyes. "Shut up, Weasley!" he hissed. And now I'm a kidnapper, he thought wryly. But it might buy us enough time.
The muttering from the Aurors in the main body of the room took on a more urgent tone.
Severus turned to Peverell. "What now? Quickly!"
Peverell spread his hands widely in gesture of hopelessness. "I told you! She was so stubborn... We needed to run more tests on the machine to be sure. It's not like a Time-Turner, you know the power and unpredictability of the quantum mist is so great... sand is so much more stable... but we only had a tiny amount left, and she used it all in her transference...."
Snape suddenly remembered the golden pendant about his neck, thrust upon him by his other self. He scrabbled to pull it out of his shirt. Glistening sand filled its hourglass core.
He shoved it towards Peverell, who took it with eyes bulging. "Where did you get that?" he breathed.
"You have one minute to let him go, Snape!" The Probation Auror's nasal whine called out.
"Can you use it?" Snape snapped at Peverell, beginning a silent countdown from sixty.
"Yes... yes...." The old wizard tilted the little device, eyeing the contents critically. "But it will only help to stabilise the transfer, to enable you to reach the time you need to find her. Your spelled bond will do the rest!"
"Do it," Snape bit out.
Weasley looked from one man to the other. "You can find her?" he said eagerly. "Where is she?"
Snape ignored him and focused on Peverell. "If by any possibility I am able to locate the woman, how do we reverse the process to return?"
Peverell scuttled over to the ancient circular mechanism that was connected to the rest of the machine by the strange, twisted cables and tubes. He laid his hand reverently on the rusted metal. "You must find this device, newly made," he breathed. "And harvest the original sands. Miss Granger will then be able to use her magical abilities to craft a new Time-Turner, one far bigger than this." He waved Snape's pendant dismissively in his hands, but then he froze. "Unless you can find the original sands from the Alexandrian astrolabe, there is no returning, Professor Snape."
Fuck it. "I stand in there?" Snape asked, pointing at the narrow chamber beneath the hourglass. Thirty-eight, thirty-seven, thirty-six, thirty-five....
"Yes," Peverell stepped forward tentatively, his hands hovering over the various knobs and switches surrounding the astrolabe. With shaking fingers, the old man muttered a charm and carefully poured the magical sand into the heart of the ancient, twisted metal.
"Wait! What are you doing?" Weasley asked loudly, catching hold of Snape's arm.
Snape bared his teeth at the younger man. "Getting your fucking girlfriend back," he snapped, shaking his arm free. Twenty-nine, twenty-eight....
He stalked over to the machine and ducked his body inside. The air seemed cooler inside. His heart was thundering in his chest, but oddly, the pain in his stomach appeared to have lessened a fraction.
Over at the controls, Snape watched as Peverell activated the machine. A low hum began to grow, and the blue gases above Snape's head began to circulate more actively. Severus took a few deep breaths, trying to quell the fear churning in his guts. He had burned his bridges and gone to his death before. He reached for his Occlumency skills to control his emotions.
The hum from the machine began to turn into a whine, something that could not go unnoticed.
"Snape? What are you doing? Mister Weasley, are you alright?" The Auror sounded panicked.
Snape sneered. Idiots. Weasley was staring at him with his mouth open, immobile, his hand raised as if to ask a question.
The giant hourglass began to spin above him, and Snape was sure that it was slowly sinking towards him. He breathed more deeply, willing himself to stay still, to not disgrace himself by falling apart.
If he survived this, he was going to kill Granger.
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I'm really enjoying this, it's a great plotline and I'm really intrigued to see where it's going. Can't wait for an update!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you! I am working on the next chapter... Slowly!!! Pxx
Where is the bloody woman? Indeed. Heeeee! And they're off in the far away, long ago Alexandria"You do realise," he drawled," that your hair is going to be a problem?" Hahaha! Can't wait what will developed from this!;-) HA!Love the description and slow revelations with both Hermione's newfound reality, and with Severus' and Ron's--love the *understanding* of each other, a mutual respect and regard, and the situation that is happening and unfolding before us--it's wonderful how they are brought together to join forces to help find and abade one Miss Granger:-)In the meantime, I feel the magical monk might be a little too polite, but what other choice does Hermione have... Hmmm....Brilliant, Proulxes, as always! Can't wait for more!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you, nag! I am so grateful for your support. The narrative is about to move along (I feel that I have taken ages to get them here!). I am working on the next chapter and hope to post again before the end of winter!!! Best wishes, Pxx
This is abso-fricking-lutely brilliant! I knew I'd have a bunch of questions when I read this update, so I just started at the beginning and read all of it.I really like how you wrote Ron in this chapter. There are just some things he has to do- what he thinks is the right thing to do when he is faced with the unthinkable- and not even Snape can completely rein him in. Master Peverell is still a mystery to me... I don't know if I completely trust him, but here and now, he is the only one who could shed any light on where she had gone and why.As for the Aurors bursting through the doors of the Time Room, I just hope Ron and Master Peverell can make them understand that Severus was trying to save Hermione. But I guess this being the Department of Mysteries, and the fact that Peverell's experiment was just a tinsy illegal, they might not be so forth coming. I love that the bond Severus and Hermione formed in the churchyard on New Year's eve has linked them so completely. Very, very clever. I'm only sorry that the Aurors have broken through the wards and are going to be fit to be tied when they find that Severus has left the building.Thank you for this fabulous new chapter! Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Dear Beth- I'm really pleased that you enjoyed the latest update (after SUCH a long time I was sure that everyone had lost faith that I would continue!) I always had the idea of the Redemption Charm linking them firmly in my mind when I wrote the first story and wanted to have some fun with what that would mean for Severus (both good and bad) - and I was equally determined that Ron in this story was not going to be useless and/or completely thick. There are more questions raised here and I love the fact that you are so thoughtful and precise in your reviews. It makes me think ever harder about my plotting and the breadcrumb clues that I drop in to chapters as I write! Pxx
So the stomach pain isn't a part of the evil curse the Ministry seems to have put on Severus? I'm going to have to go back and re-read, because I think you've given us quite a lot of information about what's going on in this chapter, and I can't quite fit it in yet. That said, it's an intriguing chapter (cliff-hanger(s) included). And I love the way you've written Ron's and Severus's interaction--Severus underestimating Ron, and Ron doing what he feels he must, despite his confusion. Peverell is a bit puzzling, though. You'd think he'd jump at the chance to tell Severus all he needs to know, given that he also knows the Aurors are coming (at some point; but not immediately, until Severus forcibly revealed him.) And why was he hiding from Ron and Severus in the first place? They've been in that room for quite a while. He could have easily have transformed into himself, given all the neccessary information in a more leisured manner, sent Severus off on his mission, and then re-hidden himself if he thought he needed to. There's presumably no trace on his wand.
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you for your review,
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
! I really appreciate this. Peverell is a puzzle - and I can't say any more than that... and I am pleased that he has confused readers a little so far. "Why hide?" - indeed...! I am enjoying trying to get this story written without sacrificing complexity (major challenge!!) - or painting characters in a too stark or simplistic a manner. All that sounds rather pretentious - mostly I write because I love these characters and I'm fascinated by the challenge of creating new narratives for them! Thank you for your reviews!! Pxx
YAY!!!! It's here!!!! *happy dance*Ooooh, just love all of the descriptive details and tension and the Aurors pounding at the door, and Peverell and Ron and Severus going back to 'get your girlfriend!'--heeeee! And Hermione's connection to her ancestor, the great Hypatia of Alexandria--squeeeeing!And of course... The Redemption Charm!May the Muse be with you, as we demand more, more, more! ... Must have my Proulxes fix;-) ... um, pretty please, sweetie! Again, can't wait for more!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you, nag! I'm working on it - I'm working on it! I am so pleased that you are enjoying the story... *blushes* :) Pxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you, nag! I'm working on it - I'm working on it! I am so pleased that you are enjoying the story... *blushes* :) Pxx
Bloody hell, indeed! Lets see what we have here... loads of clues:
•an old scooter carburettor•a vacuum cleaner•a 'expresso' coffee maker •an old, battered dentist's chair•a high stool with Hermione's cardigan•horseshoe shaped metal walls 15 feet tall•transparent tubes and a latticework of thin golden rods and wires •a large hourglass suspended above the metal base•the same blue spectral light that filled the bell jar seemed to fill the hourglass•Ron could feel the oscillations of the magical energy coming from the metal structure•Hermione's creation was connected to the bell jar AND to a computer•there were faint whippoorwills swirling around inside the hourglass similar to the hummingbird in the bell jar•a computer screen that displayed the movement and locations of constellations that change over hundreds or thousands of years, and a scrolling screen of Arithmatic calculations•attached to the Muggle computer screen by a kind of sticking charm was "an ancient-looking piece of circular metalwork. The object was roughly eight inches or so wide and about two inches thick." This has got to be Hypatia's astrolabe!!!What do we know about carburettors? Well... In a carburettor the throttle connects to the accelerator pedal by a cable or a mechanical linkage of rods and joints to control the air/fuel ratios delivered to the cylinders. Change the ratio of fuel and air and you change the amount of POWER produced.
Could our Hermione have cobbled together Einstein and Hawkings, Anderson and Pell, Aristotle and Hypatia, et al., and using various mundane parts of Muggle carburettors, vacuum cleaners, expresso makers, dentist chairs and the magical things in the Dept. of Mysteries to create a mechanomagical* accelerator akin to a particle accelerator? Think Large Hadron Collider? (*My gift to you in return for your gift to us of "metamorphmagical" – which BTW took no small amount of time for me to be able to say without tripping over my own tongue.)
In Chapter 4, Other-Snape had given Severus a new Time-Turner (and a vial of memories). "The strange Time-Turner was an odd, heavy form in his fist, and he uncurled his fingers to look at it. The black sands in the tiny hour glass at its heart glittered, surrounded by four delicate rings of finely wrought, golden metal. Tiny runes were inscribed carefully into the edges of the concentric circles." The description of this new Time-Turner sounds very much like Hypatia's astrolabe right down to the black sand and the runes– except the new one is smaller.
I love the Chameleon Charm, and I'll love it even more when we find out what Master Peverell has to say. When Severus was using his wand to negate the Charm, he said "Come out, come out wherever you are," and that made me think of Sirius when he was calling out Peter Pettigrew in the Shrieking Shake in The Prisoner of Azkaban.
Hermione has figured out who she is and where she is and how she got there... and that the tent has wizarding wards on the door. What we don't know is whether the wards are there to keep others out... or to keep her in... Very interesting.
What a wonderful chapter!!! Very nicely done.
Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Dear Beth - hello!!! I am sorry but I didn't realise that your reviews had landed.. something wrong with my alert settings, I suppose!!! Thank you so much for your detailed and thought provoking review - as ever! I love the way that you analyse... and you are right that there are clues embedded in the chapters as we go along...! I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story and am working hard on the next chapter :) Pxx
A great chapter to return with! I enjoyed the shifting perspectives, with more mystery and possibly clues! I also liked the development of Ron and Snape's interactions. What might happen next!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you for your lovely comments,
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
! This was my first attempt to get inside Ron's head since I started writing and I found it tough to do, so I'm very pleased to have your feedback on it. The next chapter will be up soon! Pxx
Yay, you've returned! I may or may not have done a little happy dance when I saw that you had updated >.> Also, I do hope that Severus can figure out how to work the machine soon. Perhaps Peverell can help? hehehe
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
He will figure it out - but he won't like the answers he finds! More coming soon, as fast as I can write it! Thank you for taking the time to write to me! Pxx
*Happy Dance* Thank you, thank you so much for some lovely insight into what Ronald is thinking and feeling; the retorts and responses of Severus' are delightful and help layer on the men's chemistry and dynamics--just love it!Hmmn, Einstein+Hawkings=Muggle Physics+Hypatia+... Yes, yes, yes!Uff, Hermione knows who and where she is... but also that there are wizarding ward's on the tent's doors *intrigue*And this ending=brilliant! Yes, Master Peverell, we presume?Can't wait for more! Brilliant chapter, as always! *mwah* Thank you for all of the research and rich, flowing details intertwined with spot on characterisations of our beloved characters! *another mwah* and another *Can't wait for more!*
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Hello sweetie! Thank you for your generous review -- I tried hard to give Ron a believable voice in this story, and I hope I've pulled it off. More coming soon... I am working on the first draft later on today. Pxx
Lordy! There are so many things going on in my mind after reading this chapter that I can hardly form a coherent thought. But a few things did me pause.Could Other-Snape be Severus from the past where Hermione traveled to? Still can't figure out how he would have known when/where to go. Could the TimeTurner he gave Severus just be another TimeTurner from the Arabia of the past? I had a few thoughts from what was going on with Hermione. She had flashes of events that seemed familiar:•Trainig herself to master her fears.•Her participation in the second trial in the TriWizard Tournament.•Flashes of Hogwarts, Molly Weasley, riding the dragon to escape Gringott's with Hufflepuff's cup.I can't figure out what the connection is between Christopher Marlowe's quote and the thin-faced man sitting across the table from her telling her to eat her chocolate. The spy connection I did pick up on, but that was the only connection I could make with Severus."Ochi" -what does it mean? Is it Greek for "no?" Perhaps Romanian for "eyes?" What would it mean if it were Arabian or Egyptian? (No, I couldn't find a translation for either of those two.) Aaaand, on top of everything else, you've left us with a very evil cliffie!!! I think you and Clairvoyant stay up nights plotting how to drive your readers crazy. You both do a great job of that, and you both write great stories.I am really looking forward to finding out what Hermione saw when she looked out the door of the yurt.Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Ah-ha! You got us... evenings are certainly spent working out the best way to torment our readers!! It's Severus in her thoughts.. and the spy connection was deliberate. You will no doubt have also picked up on the chocolate references in this story... don't forget the chocolate (*winks*). More is coming soon, although RL is being a bit of a pain at the moment so I need a bit more time to get it right! Best wishes - oh! - and sory for my tardy reply-- the email alert doesn't seem to be working! Pxx
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
The chocolate! I did notice and meant to mention it the first time. I can't figure out why she and Severus would have been sitting in a white room and he would tell her to eat her chocolate. Daggumit! It's really tickling my brain, but I just can't put it together. However, you may be assured that I will be on the lookout for chocolate in coming chapters.More is coming soon, although RL is being a bit of a pain at the moment so I need a bit more time to get it right! Sweetheart, you take all the time you need to get it like you want it. We'll all still be here waiting when you post it.
Ooooh! Another suspenseful chapter. So not fair that you write these evil cliffies and we have to wait for you to upload. I'm hooked and you know it, Evil Proulxes. Thanks for another wonderful story.Now please tell me Hermione doesn't believe that "Your Ancestor was Hypatia" quiz? ;)
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you, snap! It's a pleasure to hook you in! Loved your review! More coming soon... although RL is a pain at the moment. Pxx
So, two cliffhangers at least here. I always love amnesiac-Hermione stories--she's so well-equipped to work things out methodically. Great chapter, with Ron looking increasingly more competent, and Severus dealing with demons as he blindly tries to follow his older-self's hints. And Hypatia again. I do love the complexity and historical depth of your stories!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Apologies- my email alert isn't working! thank you for taking the time to review again
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
! This is absolutely NOT a Ron bashing story... but there has to be tension between these two men for obvious reasons ;). More coming soon, promise! Pxx
Oy! Talk about a cliff-hanger! Three weeks? Can't wait that long. ^_^
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
I'm on it! I'm on it! These reviews are spurring me on!!! *Hugs* Pxx
Ahhhhh! I think I'm going to have to wait until this gets a few chapters ahead. I haven't read a new WIP in quite awhile, so there is only enough here to frustrate, um, I mean tantilize. Yes! That's what I mean. I usually wait until the stories are 13 chapters or so in, so I can feel satisfied even if I am left hanging and waiting for more. I started in on this one right away because I absolutely LOVE the way you tell a story. Still do. I'm just impatient and greedy, LOL.
Ron and Severus working together are a hoot. When the two of them really start comparing notes and putting their critical thinking skills to use, the rest of those involved had better watch out. Hmm, so Hermione has been researching her ancestors?
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you for your review,
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
- and I will try to get the next chapter ready for your earlier than the three week mark - I promise! It's all about juggling the fun and games of the day job with the challenges of writing (*puts back of hand to forehead in outrageously dramatic gesture* - lol). More soon - including a tricky chameleon spell and more peril for Our Heroine in ancient times.... Pxx
I just can feel and see every wonderful moment, and in particular, taste the tension between Severus and Ronald--really enjoying their banter and digs, and in some deep current flowing underneath everything, both of their *concern* and care for Hermione bonding them together in some unspoken way--lovely, lovely work! And as for Hermione, can't wait for more! Enjoying experiencing her grasping here and there for where her current reality is--love all of the clues and references swirling around her. But of course, she's taking things concretely into her hands and pulling that inner flap to the side-can't wait to see what she sees!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Hello nag! I'm so pleased you are picking up on the undercurrent between the two men - and you're right to pick up on their shared concern - although neither of them are going to admit THAT in a hurry! Thanks for your kind words and cheerleading! Pxx
Awesome! Great! There's tension! There's suspense! There's NOT another chapter. Bugger.
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
THere is! It's just not quite ready yet. Should be posting at the end of this week though...! Thank you so much for your reviews,
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
! Pxx
I feel that there should be a humorous drabble about Snape selling mail-order love potions written now.Great chapter. Looking forward to more. Always.
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you! That scene was great fun to write. I love these two characters together and their verbal sparring is important for saying so much that they can't express. More of that to come soon. Pxx
I have to admit that their discussion on the bench made me LOL. Really. The sarcasm. It amuses me (and a language I too am fluent in).Pretty spiffy charm there.
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
THanks again! The charm is important (as I'm sure you've already worked out!!) for the whole story.... I'm glad you like the sarcasm - more of that coming up too! Pxx
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Yeah, I'm figuring they formed some sort of bond (magical) when they shared that experience. Figuring it is why he felt the odd tingling when she touched him (and nothing to do with old boomslang skin). Also figuring he's going to be none too pleased when he figures it out since he just recently got out of a 'bound relationship'.
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
*waggles eyebrows*... Pxx
This a freaking fabulous chapter. Your ability to describe a scene literally pulls the reader in. I could smell the mold damn it (I'm allergic). Superbly done. Now that you have finished reading my gushing, please get back to writing now. Please.
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
I'm loving the gushing! And the review-a-thon! Thank you so much for your kind words! I do like a grungy Snape. And a bitter one. But I also love the sarcastic humour and graveyard wit. Pxx
Response from Phyllidia (Reviewer)
Is this when we also say he has a gallows humor and a deadpan countenance?
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Absolutely!
Wonderful. Just plain wonderful.
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Hello
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
! Lovely to hear from you again! Thank you for taking the time to write - I'm glad you like it so far. Best wishes and Happy Easter! Pxx
I wonder where OtherTimeSnape came from to be so changed? Not surprising that Hermione seems to have experimented with something dangerous and gotten herself into trouble. Thanks for the update! Glad to see the cast of characters expanding and the plot thickening. :)
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thanks! I hope you're not finding this story too slow - it's been quite an exercise to think back into the longer format... but I do enjoy giving the characters a bit more room to breathe. Next chapter in about two weeks as usual! Pxx
I liked that he wouldn't tell her about why he couldn't leave the country (the bastards). I liked her guesses about how he's supporting himself. I liked that he's answering her letters with attacks on Peverell. And I'm beginning to see coherence in the books and papers she was carrying. Very nice!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Thank you - we'll learn a little bit more about what he has been doing in London since New Year's Eve in the next chapter! Pxx
JKR owns Clairvoyant, nagandsev and beaweasley2? Nooooo! Say it isn't so! ^_^Good chapter, moving the story along as it should. I've heard about the cafe in the loo. There was a big news story on it last year some time. ^_^
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Ha! Yes - there is a blog about it somewhere on t'Internet as well! I should issue a swift apology to the team... but she does kinda 'own' them... in one sense anyway!!! All this and other deep thoughts come to you courtesy of Cabernet Sauvignon.... Pxx
It´s only logical that he can´t leave the country. I can´t wait for more interactions between them. Great chapter!
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
Ah-haaaa.... or is it? Thank you for taking the time to review
Response from Proulxes (Author of Time's Arrow)
! More to come very soon! Pxx