I'm with everyone else! Please say that "Fin" at the end was a mistake and continue this story!

Very clever of you to end there!  Well, I am going to guess that the voice is Hermione's, and Lucius is providing for the finances and facilities for Severus' care. Narcissa and Draco were with Severus during the memorial. And this is why Hermione an Lucius looked so haggard. Ta-daaaa!!

Thank you for the ficlet, and for reviving Severus.

What?!? You mean you're not going to tell us whether Severus (it's fairly obvious that he's the person you bring in at the end) is alive or not -- although it sounds very much as if he is -- and who it was who was talking to him? That's just mean!

*fin* ???  Surely that little word wasn't meant to be there... was it?  This well written story is begging to be continued.  And if the reviews are anything to go by, your readers are begging you to continue with it.  Whether or not you decide to, I have to tell you that I was captivated by the premise and the writing.  Wonderful in all respects.

Beth

Very nicely done, "sleeplyhead" is not a word that would ever pass Lucius' lips, so I am thinking that it must be Hermione. I hope "Fin" is a mistake, and we will see more of this tale. 

Of course you can keep Lucius, it you write about him so beautifully! Thank you for a lovely story and the happy end. I am looking forward to learn who the familiar voice belongs to (btw - somehow a "fin" slipped into the story). Would Lucius really use a word like "sleepyhead" or is Hermione so wrung out because she is PA to the minister AND caregiver?

who rescued ss? your memorial scene was beautifully done!

Hmmmm very interesting .   Looking forward to next chapter.

Very intriguing, I liked it:-))

This is nice, particularly that last bit.  I assume Lucius was there to store a memory, so he could show Severus how mourned he'd been when he awoke.  I hope there's going to be more!

Very nice! After so many compliments - everyone wants you to continue this story - I really hope that you will...

I love it when Severus lives....

Very well written!! More please. I know it says fin but this could be a great story!!