Chapter 4
Chapter 4 of 6
sylvanawoodSummary: Hermione and Severus help Poppy with patients who don't want to wake up. This is an older story, it was written for the OWL House Cup.
***Here are the links to the original fairy tales abused in part two.***
The Little Match-Seller: http://hca.gilead.org.il/li_match.html
The Little Mermaid: http://hca.gilead.org.il/li_merma.html
The White Wolf: http://sylvanawood.livejournal.com/707564.html#cutid1
(The last one is my own rough translation since I couldn't find an English version of that fairy tale on the web.)
Fairy Tales 2: Hermione Sleeps
Chapter 4
"Perhaps you could start by telling me why Miss Granger is lying on my bed?" Severus asked, but he didn't sound angry.
Poppy started to tell him what they had done, but in the meantime, Hermione dreamed.
***
The Girl with the Daydream Charms
It was Christmas Eve in Hogsmeade.
The last passers-by were hurrying through the streets, quickly buying a book here, some of the delicious Honeydukes chocolate therethey were last minute gifts, but just as welcome as other gifts.
A few teachers chased the last Hogwarts students out of the Three Broomsticks. As every year, a few children stayed at the school over the holidays.
The girl sat huddled in the shadows until the last passer-by had disappeared. She was very thin, her cheekbones were jutting out like over her sunken cheeks like a knife's edge, the brown, formerly lively eyes were sunken deeply into their sockets. Her face resembled nothing so much as a skull. Only the wild, bushy brown hair still seemed to be full of energy; it stuck out of her head in wild locks.
The girl dragged herself out of the shadows and shuffled over to the Three Broomsticks. Hungrily she looked through the windows and watched how the last guests were gulping down a quick dinner. Perhaps Rosmerta would give her something later? But no, no such luck tonight. Madam Rosmerta didn't want to undergo the risk and only glanced briefly at the girl, feeling slightly guilty. She locked the door and hurried away.
The girl followed her with her eyes, looking very sad. She shivered. The thin cloak couldn't provide much warmth on that cold day. And of course an outcast Muggle-born witch wasn't allowed to use a wand. She couldn't even cast a warming charm upon herself.
That only left her the option to freeze and starve. Her last meal had been two days ago.
Initially, she had wanted to sell some Daydream Charms from the WWW. Someone who was looking for a last minute gift might be willing to purchase banned objects and see the charms as collector's items. Perhaps...
At the moment, things didn't look very promising, however.
The girl who was once known as Hermione Granger had lost all hope. It wasn't funny to be interrogated by the Death Eater police. She had experienced these interrogations several times already. No one seemed to want to take a risk on Christmas Eve; everyone was hurrying past her; only sometimes someone cast a pitying glance towards her.
Hermione was desperate. What could she do? She didn't have any money or food, and the Death Eater police had destroyed her last shelter only yesterday. She would have to sleep on the street again.
Tiredly, she shuffled along until she came to a doorway that looked as if it could provide some shelter from the wind and the snow.
She huddled down in a corner and put her bundle with the daydream charms at her side. Today, no one would want to buy any, and tomorrow it was too late for Christmas gifts anyway.
A beautiful dream... How lovely it would be to dream again, thought Hermione. Should she risk it? Just this once?
With trembling fingers, she ripped one of the boxes open. The package showed a Christmas tree and Hermione let the charm wash over her.
Suddenly she stood in the living room of her parents' house. The Christmas tree stood besides the door to the garden, and her parents beamed at her.
"Good morning, darling," her mother said. "Come, look at your presents."
Hermione clapped her hands and hugged her father and mother. Then she knelt in front of her presents to carefully unwrap one after the other. It was wonderfully warm in the room, and it smelled of cookies and ginger bread, but all of a sudden, all the windows opened and a cold wind made Hermione shiver.
The frightened look on the faces of her parents was the last thing Hermione saw of them, before she became aware of her surroundings. A gust of wind had thrown some snow into the doorway and ripped Hermione out of her daydream. Hermione wept; her parents had looked so alive. In reality, they had been dead a year, murdered by Death Eaters. Oh, if only she could see them one last time!
Hermione wiped her tears off with her sleeve and opened another box of the daydream charms.
Again, she stood in a room with a richly decorated Christmas tree besides a window. However, she wasn't in the house of her parents but in the Burrow.
All the Weasleys were sitting around the large dinner table in the kitchen, and Harry was there as well.
"Hermione!" Mrs. Weasley cried. "Do come in, sit down and eat with us."
Hermione didn't need to be told twice and after she'd hugged Harry, Ron and Ginny, she dug in. They had glazed ham, mashed potatoes, peas and carrots, and mashed parsnips. Afterwards, everyone got a piece of plum pudding.
Hermione was about to pour herself a cup of tea when the twins started to throw snow at her.
"Hey, you two," cried Hermione, "stop that...." But at the same moment it went dark and a strong gust of wind tossed another handful of snow into Hermione's face.
"Oh no," she cried. "That was far too short..." She couldn't suppress the tears that were streaming down her cheeks any longer. Not one of the Weasleys had survived the war. The whole family had been extinguished; the Burrow had been destroyed and no one talked about them any more; no one dared to remember... And Harry, her brave, determined best friend was gone, dead, slain in the duel with Voldemort.
Hermione didn't quite know how she, herself, had survived, and she didn't know how she could go on living. Each and every one of the people she'd lovedeven Crookshanks, her catwere dead, murdered by Death Eaters.
Hermione was sobbing so hard that she got a hiccup. If only the dream had lasted a bit longer... It said on the box that a daydream charm would last for an hour, but it looked like this was only true if you weren't bombarded with snow during that time.
Hermione couldn't stand it any longer. She wanted to see her loved ones once again, to hug them, to feel their warmth. Determinedly, she ripped open all the remaining boxes with daydream charms.
Her hands were stiff from the cold and she could only open the boxes with difficulty and barely managed to activate the charms, but with a lot of patience and perseverance she finally succeeded, and all of a sudden, she didn't feel the icy cold any longer.
Hermione stood at the entrance to the Great Hall at Hogwarts. A long row of Christmas trees stood lined up at one wall. Candles floated in the air and all her teachers sat at the head table.
Professor McGonagall gave her a friendly wave, and the Professors Sprout and Flitwick smiled and nodded at her. Professor Dumbledore walked towards her, hands stretched out in her direction.
"Come, child," he said. "This is where you belong; this is your home."
Hermione took his hands in hers, happy that all her teachers whom she had believed to be dead were now sitting here together and being merry. She smiled back, but noticed that someone was missing. One of the teachers was missing. Confused, she looked around.
"I am here, Miss Granger," a soft, deep, velvety voice said. Hermione turned her head, and there he stood and looked at her with his piercing, black eyes.
"Professor Snape," she exclaimed happily. "You're alive!"
Snape put an arm around her shoulderHermione didn't find that odd at alland said, "Yes, I live, and you should too."
Hermione looked at her former teacher and became lost in the gaze from his glittering, black eyes. Everything started to spin around her and she felt faint. Then she lost consciousness.
The people who passed by the doorway on Christmas morning cast a pitying glance at the unmoving bundle in the corner.
"She froze to death; she must have tried to find some comfort in the charms," they said. But before anyone could inform the police so they could remove the body, a man in a long black Death Eater cloak with a silver mask came to the doorway and picked the girl up into his arms. Walking swiftly, he went away.
***
"Severus, Severus, wake up! Are you all right? Merlin! Don't let him fall into a coma again... Severus!"
Poppy Pomfrey lightly slapped Severus' cheeks until he opened his eyes.
"Leave me be; I am all right. Just tired. Is there improvement?"
"At first she trembled horribly, but after you entered her mind, she became calmer. From time to time, her eyes watered, but I don't know if she cried or if her eyes had been irritated by something."
"She was crying. She had a nightmare. I don't know for how long she was in that dream; you didn't let me follow right away, after all, but from what I've gathered, she believed that the war had been lost and that her family and friends had all been murdered. I found her when she dreamed she was celebrating Christmas in the Great Hall at Hogwarts. From there, I could manipulate her dream."
"And now you'll understand why I had to give you a brief summary about what has happened in the last two years. Otherwise, you'd not have been able to help her."
"That's your opinion," Snape snapped. "Speak for yourself. In any case, I wasn't very successful. I'll have to try again."
"First you'll get some rest," Poppy said firmly. "If you think that I will stand here and watch as the two of you dream each other from one coma into the next, then think again. And if I have to secure you with a full body bind, you will first eat something, and then you'll get some rest."
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Hermione is getting weaker with every trip into Severus'mind, is his condition catching?
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
That mind magic is exhausting. Thank you. :)
What an interesting premise for a story. It may not be so easy to sort things out in Severus' mind, but if anyone can it's Hermione.
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
She'll certainly try her best. Thank you.
I really like the way you handled this part of the tale. I think it's a fair representation of what would've eventually happened in a world in which young Severus enjoyed the comforts of safety and an opportunity to grow at his own pace. Given a little space and time, he would've seen that Lily thrived on attention, of being petted and admired, of always getting her own way. He would've tired of her needing him (along with everyone else in her sphere) to act as a mirror for her own wonderfulness. Instead, Severus was left with Lily Evans as the sole bright spot in his otherwise dark, ugly and lonely world. Little wonder that he put her on a pedestal and determined to spend the rest of his life worshipping at the altar he had built for her.But now he's awake, what's happened to Hermione? And why do I think it's going to be up to Severus to return the favor by saving her now?
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
I couldn't agree more. Thank you.
Absolutely lovely!!! I read both chapters this morning and am hooked. I'm so sorry that I missed these when they were on OWL, but I'm glad you're posting them here. Wonderful way to end my day. :)
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
I didn't get around to doing it earlier, but plan to put them all up here now, except the German version. Thank you :)
Perhaps the key is to somehow get subconscious Severus to see and acknowledge Lily as she really was, warts and all, and allow that reality to take the place of his fantasy of her as the epitome of flawless perfection. But I think that's going to be one tall order. Severus is liable to fight that unpleasant reality with all he has, tooth and nail.I also fear that Hermione's efforts are wreaking havoc with her own health and safety. Poppy's right to be concerned.
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
Heh. Very insightful, thank you!
Severus' thoughts also suggest to me that he knows that Dumbledore used and abused him just as shamelessly as Tom Riddle did. If maybe only on a subconscious level. I'm not sure that Severus understands fully what it is to be truly loved. Lily might've held some fondness for him as a child, but I don't think I would call it love. If Lily loved him, even as a friend, she wouldn't have deemed a thoughtless word said in anger to be unforgivable.
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
Thank you. I totally agree.
A wonderful end to a fantastic story!!! And you're right, it is much sweeter when the prince gets saved by the princess. I absolutely loved how you changed each tale to correspond with Hermione and Severus. I always enjoy reading stories with a fairy tale premise, they're my favorites. :)
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
I'm glad you enjoyed the tales. Thank you for your lovely reviews.
Oh, my goodness! So close!!! Excellent chapter. I'm running to read part 6. :)
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
Thank you very much. :)
Thank you for sharing your story. I never thought about how horrible these fairytales are. Especially the Little Match girl.
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
Thank you! :) Yes, many of them are quite horrible and still they can ignite our imagination like little else can.
Love what you're doing with these fairy tales. Each one brings them a little closer.
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
Thank you! :)
Excellent update! I'm so sorry that I missed the last one when it was posted. I no longer receive updates from my bookmarked stories for some reason. I'm so happy that Severus is awake, and that he and Poppy are working together to help Hermione out of her dream realm.
Response from sylvanawood (Author of Fairy Tales)
Thank you! :) There's a contact form somewhere on the site, where you can ask about your update notifications.