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English Suite
Savva12 Reviews | 8.17/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
A fickle heart is the only constant in this world.(Diana Wynne Jones)
Hermione Granger/Anthony Goldstein
Chapters (3)
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Savva
Member Since 2011 | 32 Stories | Favorited by 74 | 14 Reviews Written | 197 Review Responses
Latvian born. An absolute dilettante.
Age - born in 1970
Profession - meteorology & environmental engineering, currently - a housewitch
Marital status - married (second time around), two kids.
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Reviews for English Suite
Interesting story. Well done.
Uh oh. Son versus dad. This is tense!
Fuck me Amadeus. Totally made me think of the old Falco song, rock me Amadeus and now it is stuck in my head. lol.
Very intriguing and looking forward to more. Thank you!
Response from Savva (Author of English Suite)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
All's well, that end's well, and everyone is in tune.
Can't wait to see ,what happens next.
Well, who will she end up loving, father or son, either way someone could have their heart broken.
Underneath the apparent fickleness, she was looking for her soul mate.
As a musical ending (all in good humor):
Through her open door, Hermione could hear the Sibelius violin cadenza, and she thinks, "Fire without warmth. My Anthony is back."
Later, she learns that Amadeus is performing Tchaikovsky, and she thinks, "I do have a place in his heart."
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Response from Savva (Author of English Suite)
It was perfect! The most original review I've received! Thank you so much!
Good build up although it leaves Anthony as a mysterious character which might have been the intent. Explosive, cliff-hangar ending.
Response from Savva (Author of English Suite)
Thank you so very, very much for your review. I'm so glad that you continue reading my story. Yay!
A well-constructed chapter (although I feel slow since it took awhile to recognize the title and structure as a Bach composition), and I've always thought that Hermione was better paired with someone creative or artistic. The prose flows even though it is wordier than my usual preference.
Response from Savva (Author of English Suite)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my little tale. I guess my inner editor failed me with this one.