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Potions Under Duress Business and Pleasure
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Business and Pleasure

1: The Sacking

Business and Pleasure

Laralee

7 Reviews   |   7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Humor Romance Alternate Universe General Friendship Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 4,869 Words 1 Chapter WIP
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Original Character Severus Snape

A story in which business isn’t always kept strictly professional.

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Chapter 1: The Sacking


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Member Since 2012  |  6 Stories  |  Favorited by 18  |  1 Review Written  |  62 Review Responses

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0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Hmm, I'm not a big fan of Lucius stories, but I'm willing to see where this one goes for a little while..

Response from Laralee (Author of Business and Pleasure)

Lucius will play a rather large role in this story in the chapters to come, him being the “business” partner after all. 

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This is an intriguing beginning. I look forward to reading more!

Response from Laralee (Author of Business and Pleasure)

 Thank you for reading and for the review. I appreciate it!

10/10

Persevero

An intriguing start.

Response from Laralee (Author of Business and Pleasure)

Thank you very much for reading!

10/10

OzRatbag2

This is such a good introduction to what promises to be a fabulous story. I love the fact that Severus has not lost his touch at eviscerating miscreants. He does it so well and his putdowns cut right to the core...almost literally. I sense with Lucius and Severus that they've had many years to practice winding each other up, yet I think Severus definitively won this round with Lucius squirming at the thought of a business bringing in such a princely (sorry) sum. :D

Response from Laralee (Author of Business and Pleasure)

Severus does have a rather harsh tongue on him, doesn’t he? I wouldn’t have him any other way of course! Thank you for reading and for the review. Stay tuned, the next chapter follows soon!

0/10

amr

A nice, plausible beginning, with Severus and Lucius very true to canon.  I find myself with a sneaking sympathy for Lowsley, though--true, he seems to have the brains of a gnat, but having the guts to sit through an exit interview like that without fleeing in terror, completely crumbling into pieces, or bursting into tears does show a certain amount of courage.  Perhaps he's a Gryffindor?  Either way, something tells me the new assistant will be. 

Response from Laralee (Author of Business and Pleasure)

Gregor could be a Gryffindor indeed. Thanks for reading and for the review! 

10/10

MsTree

I've read this chapter somewhere else, I think. It's frighteningly familiar. *grin* That said, it's still entertaining and I look forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Response from Laralee (Author of Business and Pleasure)

Ah yes! I am slowly moving my work over to TPP. The next chapter should be soonish. Thanks for reading and for sticking around for the next installment.

10/10

mick42

Good to see Severus at his acid tongued best.

Response from Laralee (Author of Business and Pleasure)

Indeed! Thanks for reading and for the review!

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