V. Red
Chapter 5 of 8
GelseyEvery rose in the bouquet symbolizes an important memory in their relationship. Rose’s bouquet is colorful and precious.
ReviewedV. Red
"All love that has not friendship for its base is like a mansion built upon sand." Ella Wheeler Willcox
Rose sat at the elegantly laid dinner table and poked at it morosely. The fourth dinner of its type they had arranged, so that Scorpius could interact with her parents. As always, her mother was here...she'd even cancelled a work meeting in order to do this. It was her father who was, once again, absent.
"I'm sorry, Rose," her mother said, setting her fork down with a sigh. "I really did try to get him here."
"It's fine," Rose answered somewhat stiffly, cutting off further explanations. She didn't want to hear her mother's excuses for her father. They all knew the real reason he wouldn't formally meet Scorpius...he didn't approve, not even a little bit. She knew most of the history: rivalries at school, the schism during the war, the mutual dislike that bordered on hatred, at least on her dad's side. Mr Malfoy...Draco, she reminded herself...had at least met her and been rather nice, polite even, making an effort to get to know her. Which was much more than her own father was trying to do.
It was enough to make a girl cry. Again.
Scorpius reached out and took her hand. Rose squeezed it. "Let's just... go home," she told him wearily, tears in her throat but not in her eyes. She rose and walked over to her mother, hugging her. Hermione Granger-Weasley smoothed a hand back over her daughter's brow, obviously concerned.
"Same time next week?" the curly-haired woman asked. Rose knew that they looked closer to sisters that mother-daughter these days...the blessing of being witches and having children relatively young.
"No, Mum. Let's just... leave it be. Dad won't be any more amenable next week than he is now." Rose pulled back, retreated into Scorpius' embrace. "But thanks, for everything. For trying."
"Of course, luv. I just..."Hermione trailed off, and Rose sighed, closing her eyes and leaning her head against Scorpius' shoulder. He dropped a kiss on her hair. She didn't see the look the two shared, mingled anguish and frustration, above her head. She was just so tired of this.
***
Rose woke muzzily. Her head felt thick from the tears she hadn't been able to help crying earlier, when they'd arrived home. She sniffed dejectedly and rolled over, expecting to find Scorpius on the bed next to her...he was always good to her when this happened, and it was yet another reason to love him even more than she already did.
He wasn't there. She blinked and rubbed her eyes before reaching out and feeling the covers, wrinkled where he'd been when she'd first fallen asleep. There was no note, but she rather expected he'd gone to visit his parents...he liked to talk over some of his problems with his father.
Unlike her and her father. Rose buried her face in Scorpius' pillow, breathing in the scent of him.
Well, maybe it was about time for her to start talking to her father. Damn it, well past time. Resolve firming her mind, she rolled over and rose, shoving her feet into her boots and throwing a robe over her pajamas before Apparating to her family home.
Rose was barely in the door before Hermione was right in front of her, hushing her with hand movements and quiet sounds.
"Mum, what..."
"Shhh," her mother said again, taking her daughter's hand and leading her the newest and most improved version of Uncle George's Super-Secret Listening Devices. Rose stopped the moment she heard her lover's voice coming through.
"...made her cry! Every time you don't show up, she cries like you broke her heart in two. And you think I'm the threat?" Scorpius' outrage wasn't concealed like it normally might be behind a polite veneer. No, instead it was being broadcasted at almost a shout, most unusual for him. Her heart swelled at his words.
"You're no good for her." Rose easily identified her father's voice, the specific stubborn note that told her this was something he'd said several times already and wasn't about to stop saying it any time soon.
"Stop being a prat," Hermione quietly urged, her voice a murmur in Rose's ear. "Give him a chance."
"You'll only break her heart."
Rose's lips pursed and she made to go find the two men, but her mother's grip on her arm was surprisingly strong.
"Sir, I love Rose. I adore her. I would never purposefully hurt her." Heartfelt sincerity radiated off Scorpius even at this distance, and despite herself Rose's lips tilted up slightly. "I want to spend the rest of what I hope is a very long life with her."
"Marriage?" Ron sounded aghast at the prospect of a Malfoy marrying his daughter.
"Yes, marriage," Scorpius replied stubbornly. Rose imagined his chin was jutting up in that way he had. "We've even discussed it, she and I. I just haven't asked her yet." A short pause, uninterrupted by Ron. "I was hoping to do it after we'd had dinner a few times, but you threw a Chaos Jinx into those plans."
"Good." Hermione's exasperated head shake didn't precisely relieve Rose, but neither did it make her more anxious about the outcome.
"We love each other. We'll do it with or without your blessing." Rose's breath caught and she held it. She would do it, she knew...marry him without her dad's blessing. It wouldn't be easy; it would be a taint on something that should be perfect, but she would do it. She loved him that much. "But please, please don't do that to her." The blond's voice fell into a lower, soothing, persuasive range. Rose silently willed her father to give in. Please, Daddy, please.
The silence stretched tautly, so tight that Rose broke before it ended. She left in a whirl of curly red hair and barged into her father's study, banging the door none-too-quietly. Both men looked at her with shock, Scorpius looking faintly guilty that he'd gone behind her back and her father... well, she refused to look at her father.
"I admire your intention, luv, but I think he's a lost cause. Let's just go," she said to Scorpius, weaving her fingers with his with unconscious intimacy when she came close enough. They were halfway down the hall before her father recovered enough to shout at them to wait.
"Wait, Rosie! Wait a minute." She stopped just short of the door to the outside, only half turning toward him.
"What, Daddy?" she asked in a quiet, sad voice.
Hurt scurried across his face at the tone. "Does he... does he really mean that much to you?"
Rose looked up at Scorpius, taking in his harried appearance, his calm grey eyes, the way love softened the angles when he looked at her. "Yes, Daddy. He means everything to me." Her face shone as she spoke.
Ron swallowed hard and sighed even harder. Not just a passing fancy, she could have read on his face if she'd looked away from Scorpius. She didn't look away. "F-fine. Let's go to dinner tomorrow night. I'd like to get to know your beau a bit better." If he looked faintly green as he said it, only his wife noticed.
"Thank you, Daddy!" Rose threw her arms around her father before he could think, giving him a blinding smile and a huge hug before drawing back. "Owl me the time and place, and we'll be there."
***
Rose had known it was coming, of course. They'd talked about it. The last couple of months had been all about easing their families into it. But Scorpius had given nothing away, and not even she had known when he might propose.
The day had been long but rewarding, a portion of her research with Severus Snape having come through with wonderful efficiency. She came home to find a trail of rose petals leading toward the bedroom.
She laughed to herself, quietly, and toed off her shoes so she could feel the red petals between her toes. Even then, she didn't really suspect...Scorpius liked to surprise her with rose-scented baths after a long day sometimes.
Rose followed the trail, putting her things down as she went and starting to unfasten her robes. His baths were always quite fun. It was on the bed that the single rose lay, red in full bloom. She picked it up to sniff it, and the note dangled enticingly.
You are my friend, my heart, my soul. Stay with me always?
Her eyes filled with tears, and she turned as Scorpius stepped out of the bath, where he'd been waiting. In his fingers was a ring, the stone catching the soft candle light. "Marry me?" he asked.
"Oh, yes." Once again, full love bloomed in her chest for this man.
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25 Reviews | 5.92/10 Average
That was truly a most beautiful story. Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
A lovely ending, with lot's of tears , happy and sad. Poor Scorpius, after all those years, he still has to endure James comments, a hundred years of devotion is still not enough.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I picture James and Scorpius as those bickering old men after a certain point, who always have to argue something but don't really mean it, lol. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I picture James and Scorpius as those bickering old men after a certain point, who always have to argue something but don't really mean it, lol. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
A lovely addition to a beautiful bouquet.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for leaving lovely comments!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for leaving lovely comments!
Lovely from start to finish.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for an absolutely beautiful story :0) That's going into my favourite's list.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so. Thank you for takin gthe time to comment, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so. Thank you for takin gthe time to comment, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
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I'm enjoying the chance to read a new chapter first thing in the morning thanks for posting so regularly! This was another delightful way to start a day.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
You're welcome! I hope you enjoy the last chapter coming up.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
You're welcome! I hope you enjoy the last chapter coming up.
Lovely! I don't know what other colour of roses there are, but I'm glad this isn't the last chapter! Thanks again.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you continue to do so :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you continue to do so :)
Lucky Rose! Another sweet chapter. I'm growing ever more jealous of her, by the way. I (almost) want Scorpius for myself! :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I know! I could use a Scorpius myself :) Glad you're enjoying, thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I know! I could use a Scorpius myself :) Glad you're enjoying, thank you for reading and reviewing!
I see Rose finally got a clue...Weasleys really aren't quite as quick on the uptake as they should be, are they? Her mother should have told her that teenaged girls are lucky to get roses from boys who are their boyfriends, let alone those who aren't -- teenaged boys, magical or otherwise, don't send flowers to girls whom they consider just friends!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Sometimes it's really hard to tell, when you've been around someone so very long! But yes, she got a clue, finally! I hope you're enjoying it!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Sometimes it's really hard to tell, when you've been around someone so very long! But yes, she got a clue, finally! I hope you're enjoying it!
Two chapters at once! It feels like my birthday came early :)Your take on Ron was very in character, though not very flattering. You captured both him and Hermione very well, I think.And as for the Orange chapter? Scorpius is such a darling!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee. I originally meant to post a chapter a day, but work has made that uncertain! So two at once, and hopefully at least one here shortly. I'm admittedly not terribly fond of Ron, but I tried to be honest in the reactions and what they might be. I'm glad you think I got it right :D Hee, thank you so much!
Brava! Two wonderful chapters greeted me this morning! What a treat! I especially appreciated the understated way you communicated a range of such strong emotions. The story could have ended here, but I'm glad there's more to come. Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee I'm glad you like :D Thank you so much! I hope you continue enjoying it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee I'm glad you like :D Thank you so much! I hope you continue enjoying it.
How cute is it that she thinks Blaise is weird, but Luna is not?This was a lovely beginning. I look forward to the continuation.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee, thank you! I rather thought it was a nice juxtaposition of sorts ;) Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee, thank you! I rather thought it was a nice juxtaposition of sorts ;) Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Poor Rose. I'm glad someone was there to comfort her.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you for commenting! Scorpius wouldn't have it any other way :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you for commenting! Scorpius wouldn't have it any other way :)
Harry's reaction was nice, and quite believable. And Scorpius is well drawn.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
haha! :) i'm also jade chan!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Oh I know you, then! :D (my spam filter on my email has apparently been eating my PP reviews, apologies!)
Aww, I think love at fist sight might not be too far off. Scorpius seems like a bright kid - and Rose does seem a bit naive. I'm eagerly awaiting more. :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Those teen years are so hard... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Those teen years are so hard... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Marsha is quite the bitch, isn't she? poor Rose seventeen is a painful age. Rose and Scorpius are beginning to see how they feel about each other, looking forward to more colours in this lovely bouquet.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
She really is! Seventeen is always a painful time. I hope you keep enjoying it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
She really is! Seventeen is always a painful time. I hope you keep enjoying it.
Harry is so right, when the chips are down, that's when you find out who your friends are.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
It is so true! Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
It is so true! Thank you.
James should have known that, if Rose needs defending, she can defend herself.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
He should, but you know how boys can get! Thank you for commenting!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
He should, but you know how boys can get! Thank you for commenting!
I appreciate this addition to your story. It added depth to both Scorpius's and Rose's characters and spoke to the pain of being shunned by family and friends. I think Harry's support is eloquent. I look forward to the rest of the chapters and to reading more of your writing. Thanks!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it thus far, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it thus far, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.
I think this is a lovely story about disaagreements without losing dignity. I respect Rose's ability to stand up to her family, and Scorpius's maturity. Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Another wonderful colour for her bouquet. Scorpius is very well-done - he manages to remind me of Draco, somehow, but with all the bad bits taken out. Quite a dear boy. And Rose does seem veru much like Hermione with Weasley temper. :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like him. I tried to incorporate how they might have turned out, having the parents they had.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like him. I tried to incorporate how they might have turned out, having the parents they had.
Very great start. I'm looking forward to the next colours :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I do hope you enjoy them!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I do hope you enjoy them!
Great start, but works well as a one-shot too. Enjoyed it immensely - especially Rose's take on James Sirius' character :0)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this whole story. I hope you enjoy it as it goes on!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this whole story. I hope you enjoy it as it goes on!