IV. Orange
Chapter 4 of 8
GelseyEvery rose in the bouquet symbolizes an important memory in their relationship. Rose’s bouquet is colorful and precious.
ReviewedIV. Orange
“Oh! Might I kiss those eyes of fire,
A million scarce would quench desire;
Still would I steep my lips in bliss,
And dwell an age on every kiss.” –Lord Byron
“Aw, come on, Rose! You’re working yourself to death. You need a vacation.” Scorpius’ wheedling grated not-quite unpleasantly on her nerves as he sat perched on the edge of her desk.
“You’re sitting on my revised recipe for the Invigoration Draught,” Rose told him primly, ignoring the oft repeated argument.
“Come on, I swear I can get Uncle Severus to approve the time away. We can go find rare potions ingredients or something while we’re gone.” This did cause her to hesitate for a brief moment—Severus Snape, miracle survivor and hero of the last Voldemort War, was the Potions master she was apprenticing under, and that might be a good argument to be allowed to take time off. The apprenticeship was grueling and she was tired… “We’ll go somewhere warm, maybe with a beach,” Scorpius persuaded, intent on exploiting her moment of weakness.
“Scorpius…” She meant it to come out stern, but instead it sounded wistful.
“The sun, the sand, the water… girls in bikinis…” He smirked when she smacked his knee. “Guys in skimpy speedos,” he altered.
“If I say yes, will you shut up and let me work?” she said and poked him with the end of her quill. Sweet Merlin, was she actually considering this? Could she actually withstand a week on a beach with Scorpius as a companion and not give in to the urge to jump his bones?
Of course she could, she told herself. They’d been out of school for two years now and she’d never once given into the urge that had grown ever since the Yule Ball. They were just friends. Very good friends. Friends who had dinner at least once a week and had flats in the same building. Friends who dated other people (frequently, in Scorpius’ case) and never so much as kissed.
The blond looked far too smug in his success. “Yes. I’ll just go bug—ah, convince—Uncle Sev that a week is a great amount of time to let you off for.” He hopped off her desk and leaned down to hug her spontaneously. “Now don’t work yourself to death while I’m gone…” he told her and started whistling jauntily as he left.
“Prat,” she called after him.
“You love me anyway,” he replied back, just an echo in the hall.
At least, she thought, there was no way on earth he could see her head thump down into her arms. “Can’t seem to help myself,” she agreed in a whisper.
***
Rose had to admit that the Bahamas were fabulously wonderful. The sun beat down here hotly, seeming to melt the tension out of her very bones. It didn’t hurt, she would concede, that the suite Scorpius had reserved for them at the Wizarding Reef Atlantis was large and luxurious and well beyond what she would have gotten if she’d gone by herself. There were two beds and baths, so she didn’t bother with suspected any illicit motives.
Yeah, like Scorpius would have illicit motives over you, a little voice in her head said. She managed to ignore it—it was too beautiful here to be thinking such negative things.
“I’ll race you to the beach!” she declared to Scorpius as they exited the hotel after putting their things down and changing into their swim wear—a modest one piece for her and surprisingly modest trunks for him. Unceremoniously she took off, laughing at his look of surprise. It was fierce competition and continued all the way into the water after their towels were dumped just above the waterline.
He finally caught her—though with his longer legs, it was a wonder he hadn’t done so yet—as they splashed into the surf, arms going around her waist and spinning her around until she squealed and they fell with a salty splash.
They came up spluttering. Scorpius tossed his head, throwing the hair plastered to his forehead back, and his hands helped Rose sort out the curls that had escaped her braid on the way down. For a long moment their gaze held, grey to blue, and Rose’s tongue darted out to wet her lips. She could swear, in that second, that he was going to kiss her. Just lean down and kiss her like she’d imagined for the last few years.
The next wave rolled over them and submerged them, breaking eye contact and making them both splutter once again. The moment was broken like it had never been.
***
Rose spent a lot of time stretched out on her towel on the beach during their vacation, skin carefully protected from burning by the potion Severus had grudgingly given her after saying she better be ready to work when she came back. Scorpius occasionally complained at her and usually managed to tempt her back into the water for a little while, where they would splash and play like children.
But other times he left her alone to relax with her book or just people watching, and it was during this time that she was nearly hit by a Fanged Frisbee. Its owner came over to fetch it—a rather toned up wizard with a golden tan and dark hair. Not precisely her type, but it was flattering when he started flirting with her.
It had been awhile, given how hard she’d been working, since she’d had the time to properly flirt with an attractive man. So she was miffed when Scorpius plopped down onto the towel next to her--her towel, not his, which was only a short distance away—and interrupted with a disingenuous, “Hey Rosie, you ready to go back to the hotel room yet?” It effectively scared away the other man.
“What’s your problem, Score? I thought we were here to relax,” Rose complained, and elbowed him hard enough to make him roll back into the sand. “I’m not your girlfriend, and I don’t interrupt you when you’re flirting with some bimbo witch.” She stood and stalked back toward the hotel, not seeing the frustrated and hurt expression on his face.
***
That night, Rose crawled into bed feeling tired but in that relaxed way that a day at the beach always brought. She barely noticed the flower in time to keep from crushing it with her head. Its heady scent saved it, and she turned on the light with a flick of her wand.
The orange color burned brightly. She knew even without a note what it meant—orange roses meant desire, pure and simple.
You’re the only rose I desire.
Her fingers wrapped around the stem tentatively, hope fluttering in her chest. Could he really? Did he…?
And if she were misinterpreting, could she face it?
Rose decided, then and there, that she couldn’t not find out. She would always regret it.
She padded across the shared living area quietly and pushed open Scorpius’ door, which was already ajar.
Scorpius was perched on his bed, knees on his thighs and his hands clasped nervously. He looked up as her shadow fell across the floor. Rose couldn’t believe how vulnerable he looked, his face open and naked. She realized for the first time that he’d felt this way for a long time—the entire past couple of years seemed to reflect back in the candlelight, showing her how he’d been trying, in his own way, to show her he wanted her. That he cared.
“Rosie…” His voice was soft, and he reached one hand out toward her. Rose wove her fingers with his and stepped closer, kissing him for the first time.
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25 Reviews | 5.92/10 Average
That was truly a most beautiful story. Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
A lovely ending, with lot's of tears , happy and sad. Poor Scorpius, after all those years, he still has to endure James comments, a hundred years of devotion is still not enough.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I picture James and Scorpius as those bickering old men after a certain point, who always have to argue something but don't really mean it, lol. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I picture James and Scorpius as those bickering old men after a certain point, who always have to argue something but don't really mean it, lol. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
A lovely addition to a beautiful bouquet.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for leaving lovely comments!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for leaving lovely comments!
Lovely from start to finish.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for an absolutely beautiful story :0) That's going into my favourite's list.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so. Thank you for takin gthe time to comment, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so. Thank you for takin gthe time to comment, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
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I'm enjoying the chance to read a new chapter first thing in the morning thanks for posting so regularly! This was another delightful way to start a day.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
You're welcome! I hope you enjoy the last chapter coming up.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
You're welcome! I hope you enjoy the last chapter coming up.
Lovely! I don't know what other colour of roses there are, but I'm glad this isn't the last chapter! Thanks again.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you continue to do so :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you continue to do so :)
Lucky Rose! Another sweet chapter. I'm growing ever more jealous of her, by the way. I (almost) want Scorpius for myself! :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I know! I could use a Scorpius myself :) Glad you're enjoying, thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
I know! I could use a Scorpius myself :) Glad you're enjoying, thank you for reading and reviewing!
I see Rose finally got a clue...Weasleys really aren't quite as quick on the uptake as they should be, are they? Her mother should have told her that teenaged girls are lucky to get roses from boys who are their boyfriends, let alone those who aren't -- teenaged boys, magical or otherwise, don't send flowers to girls whom they consider just friends!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Sometimes it's really hard to tell, when you've been around someone so very long! But yes, she got a clue, finally! I hope you're enjoying it!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Sometimes it's really hard to tell, when you've been around someone so very long! But yes, she got a clue, finally! I hope you're enjoying it!
Two chapters at once! It feels like my birthday came early :)Your take on Ron was very in character, though not very flattering. You captured both him and Hermione very well, I think.And as for the Orange chapter? Scorpius is such a darling!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee. I originally meant to post a chapter a day, but work has made that uncertain! So two at once, and hopefully at least one here shortly. I'm admittedly not terribly fond of Ron, but I tried to be honest in the reactions and what they might be. I'm glad you think I got it right :D Hee, thank you so much!
Brava! Two wonderful chapters greeted me this morning! What a treat! I especially appreciated the understated way you communicated a range of such strong emotions. The story could have ended here, but I'm glad there's more to come. Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee I'm glad you like :D Thank you so much! I hope you continue enjoying it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee I'm glad you like :D Thank you so much! I hope you continue enjoying it.
How cute is it that she thinks Blaise is weird, but Luna is not?This was a lovely beginning. I look forward to the continuation.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee, thank you! I rather thought it was a nice juxtaposition of sorts ;) Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Hee, thank you! I rather thought it was a nice juxtaposition of sorts ;) Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Poor Rose. I'm glad someone was there to comfort her.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you for commenting! Scorpius wouldn't have it any other way :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you for commenting! Scorpius wouldn't have it any other way :)
Harry's reaction was nice, and quite believable. And Scorpius is well drawn.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
haha! :) i'm also jade chan!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Oh I know you, then! :D (my spam filter on my email has apparently been eating my PP reviews, apologies!)
Aww, I think love at fist sight might not be too far off. Scorpius seems like a bright kid - and Rose does seem a bit naive. I'm eagerly awaiting more. :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Those teen years are so hard... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Those teen years are so hard... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Marsha is quite the bitch, isn't she? poor Rose seventeen is a painful age. Rose and Scorpius are beginning to see how they feel about each other, looking forward to more colours in this lovely bouquet.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
She really is! Seventeen is always a painful time. I hope you keep enjoying it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
She really is! Seventeen is always a painful time. I hope you keep enjoying it.
Harry is so right, when the chips are down, that's when you find out who your friends are.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
It is so true! Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
It is so true! Thank you.
James should have known that, if Rose needs defending, she can defend herself.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
He should, but you know how boys can get! Thank you for commenting!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
He should, but you know how boys can get! Thank you for commenting!
I appreciate this addition to your story. It added depth to both Scorpius's and Rose's characters and spoke to the pain of being shunned by family and friends. I think Harry's support is eloquent. I look forward to the rest of the chapters and to reading more of your writing. Thanks!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it thus far, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it thus far, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.
I think this is a lovely story about disaagreements without losing dignity. I respect Rose's ability to stand up to her family, and Scorpius's maturity. Thank you.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Another wonderful colour for her bouquet. Scorpius is very well-done - he manages to remind me of Draco, somehow, but with all the bad bits taken out. Quite a dear boy. And Rose does seem veru much like Hermione with Weasley temper. :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like him. I tried to incorporate how they might have turned out, having the parents they had.
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I'm glad you like him. I tried to incorporate how they might have turned out, having the parents they had.
Very great start. I'm looking forward to the next colours :)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I do hope you enjoy them!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I do hope you enjoy them!
Great start, but works well as a one-shot too. Enjoyed it immensely - especially Rose's take on James Sirius' character :0)
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this whole story. I hope you enjoy it as it goes on!
Response from Gelsey (Author of Bouquet of Roses)
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this whole story. I hope you enjoy it as it goes on!