Murder Most Fowl
Prof M McGonagall14 Reviews | 6.14/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
When the Malfoys host a week-long house party at Malfoy Manor, they are hoping to regain their standing in society and celebrate a happy family event. Instead, a series of unfortunate incidents threatens disaster. Narcissa turns to Hermione and Severus for help.
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Prof M McGonagall
Member Since 2007 | 12 Stories | Favorited by 29 | 515 Reviews Written | 266 Review Responses
I started exploring fanfiction after the depression and withdrawal following the publication of Deathly Hallows. I generally ship Severus and Hermione, but have a fondness for Severus and Minerva.
I have a husband and son. They love basketball, and I love fanfiction. We kindly allow each other our obsessions. 
Reviews for Murder Most Fowl
OMG! What a cliffie, what has happened to Teddy and Draco? and will Phaedra ever get to tell Severus what is on her mind? Hopefully we won't have to wait too long to find out.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
Thanks for reviewing. I hope to submit the next chapter soon.
First the peacocks, now little Teddy, are they conected?
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
That's a very good question. I hope you'll keep reading to find out.
I love agatha Christie type stories. Mystery at a manor house party. Bunch of people with motives. Love it! Keep updating.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
I'm glad you're enjoying this so far. I was going for an Agatha Christie tone to the story because I enjoy them, too. :)
I don't see Draco and Daphne still engaged, when all is said and done. Pansy wil have to be a major suspect {"hell hath no fury" and all that}. On to the next chapter to see what happens next.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
I'm glad you've enjoyed the first chapter. I can promise that Draco's engagement will be resolved by the end of the story.
Fantastic, I am so looking forward to more. :)
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
Thank you so much for your review!
I am already loving this story. I do so enjoy country house mysteries.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
I had a great time writing the setting. I hope you continue to enjoy exploring Malfoy Manor!
Hmmm, Narcissa thinks someone is after the Black heirs. Interesting. I'm curious about Grandmother Malfoy. I generally find that character adds an interesting dimension to stories when she is still with us. Will we get to meet her?I'm also curious about the Daphne/Astoria angle here. You've painted Astoria as the more interesting sister, and yet he proposed to Daphne.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
The story will explore the Malfoys, the Blacks, and Daphne and Astoria in greater detail. I hope you continue to enjoy.
great story looking forward to following it. Like your Hermione and Severus very much ( and the other characters )
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying the characters.
I do so like a good mystery, Severus & Hermionie to the rescue. I'm sure they will be able to figure it out between them. Very good lead in to the story with the peafowls as a cover. Great chapter looking forward to the next one.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you like it so far!
Interesting. What will happen next?
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
Well, if you've read Chapter 2, part of your question has been answered... although, not too many, I hope. :)
So Draco is engaged to Daphne, not Astoria? Hm... I don't think Pansy cares WHICH Greengrass he's engaged to. :) Interesting story. I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
The story will explore the Daphne/Astoria angle in greater detail. I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
The story will explore the Daphne/Astoria angle in greater detail. I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for reviewing.
And so the mystery begins...
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
I hope you will enjoy it!
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
I hope you will enjoy it!
Let me guess? Portia is a peacock? Murder most FOWL?? Gotta admit it took me a minute to realize the play on spelling. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
If you've read the next chapter, you will by now know who Portia is. :)
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
If you've read the next chapter, you will by now know who Portia is. :)
Oh, I DO hope this story hasn't been abandoned?!? That "cliffie" would simply curdle my tea! ;) Seriously, I truly hope you will continue this delightful whodunit as I have been enjoying it immensely. Well-written and paced, engaging character development (esp. The Malfoys!) and a "sucks you in" plot - who could ask for more?
Response from Prof M McGonagall (Author of Murder Most Fowl)
Sorry to take so long responding to your kind review, but I didn't get a notification. Chapter 3 is now posted, and chapter 4 will be submitted soon. I'm so glad you have been enjoying the story!