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In Aster Stars
Meladara9 Reviews | 5.56/10 (9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
Emotionally lost in the post-war world, Hermione finds that she must puzzle out a confusing world of dreams, nightmares, and strange events.
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I'm a 30-something mother of three girls and keep chickens, frogs, and cats.
I love to read, write and play the piano. I've also been known to occassionally sketch, paint, crochet, and sew. I hate laundry (but honestly, who doesn't!?)
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Reviews for In Aster Stars
Great going so far. I can definitely understand Hermione bearing mental scars of the war. I wonder who it is that rescued her parents from Australia?
Hermione's pain and distress are palpable, as she sits and stares into her tea cup, it's no wonder she is so depressed, after fighting a war for all those years. It was a relief to see her mum and dad show up when they did, was it Harry or did they just get their memorys back? Just have to wait for the next chapter.
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Indeed you will... ;) Thank you for reviewing!
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Indeed you will... ;) Thank you for reviewing!
Lovely start, I am looking forward to more. I hope Snape is calling her via dreams ....
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Thank you. As far as her dream, you will just have to wait and see! ;)
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Thank you. As far as her dream, you will just have to wait and see! ;)
Lovely, simply lovely. ^_^
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Thank you, dear! :)
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Thank you, dear! :)
Oh great, I am going to have to read this again. *jumps up and down with excitement, effectively ruining sarcastic melodrama*I'm glad to see you here. I feel like I had to read it so fast the first time in an effort to not fall behind in the exchange, so I am glad to be able to enjoy it here at my leisure.It is painfully clear how desolate Hermione is, and there is no clear cut answer of how to fix that. Fortunately, at the end of the chapter, it appears to fix itself. But there are still those dreaded dreams ...I really liked this explanation of how her parents regard her magic:As Hermione grew older, she often thought her parents treated her magic as if it were a boyfriend of whom they disapproved: showing it a distant, slightly wary respect while clearly not understanding how it held her so enthralled.Looking forward to more!
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
*beams* I'm happy that you're happy! LOL!
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
*beams* I'm happy that you're happy! LOL!
The poor girl! PTSD is no joke. Spending all day staring at a cup of tea is evidence (I think) of a bad illness. I hope Hermione's parents can bring her some peace.
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Indeed it is not. She is in a bad way, and I fear she has a long way to go before she is truly at peace.
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
Indeed it is not. She is in a bad way, and I fear she has a long way to go before she is truly at peace.
I like how you deal with Hermione's reaction to the war and her post traumatic stress / depression. It is very realistic. I'm looking forward to how Snape fits into the story. I think it very likely that his death would have upset Hermione much. Nasty git persona aside, he'd been a figure in her life (even of some trust) since her first year at Hogwarts.I'm looking forward to the rest. Oh, and lucky HBAR :)
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
She is very upset, and rightfully so. You are right, I think that his death would have upset her. It would have upset anyone and that he sacrificed himself just maginifies everything. Thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!
Response from Meladara (Author of In Aster Stars)
She is very upset, and rightfully so. You are right, I think that his death would have upset her. It would have upset anyone and that he sacrificed himself just maginifies everything. Thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!
How horrible for her to have the same helpless, hopeless dream night after night. I can't even imagine it. Poor girl.
That's quite the dream she's having. And who's this wizard, Tilinus? Is he part of the reason her parents seem different? Is he going to be elsewhere in the story? Don't mind me; I'm just a curious kneazle. ^_^