Soul Searching
ks5168938 Reviews | 4.45/10 (38 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
A case of divine intervention forces Ron to take on a challenge he never imagined: reuniting Hermione with Severus Snape. Written as a gift for bardsdaughter1 for the 2012 SSHG Exchange.
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What a really lovely story- the premise had me laughing, and it's certainly not one I've read before. Fun stuff! Just a really lovely mixture of humour, angst and HEA.
Wonderful, thank you so much for this story! I found the efforts of Ron and Krishna hard to believe at first but you made it a very enjoyable and believable read.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm ao glad you enjoyed it! I knew Ron as a matchmaker was a hard sell, but I couldn't resist the challenge. Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm ao glad you enjoyed it! I knew Ron as a matchmaker was a hard sell, but I couldn't resist the challenge. Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Loved it. Excellent original idea
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I knew it wouldn't be for everyone, but I couldn't resist the plot bunny : ) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I knew it wouldn't be for everyone, but I couldn't resist the plot bunny : ) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm really enjoying this story!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm happy to hear it! The last chapter is in the queue and should be posted soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm happy to hear it! The last chapter is in the queue and should be posted soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
They're really not going to make easy for each other to find some common ground. Understandably, Severus is hurting, and in lashing out he's running true to form, but what he's throwing away could be so much more than a hasty gamble.It will be interesting to see what Hermione's next move is. I can't see her allowing Severus to have the last word. ;)
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Hermione certainly won't, but the two do need a bit of thinking time... Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Hermione certainly won't, but the two do need a bit of thinking time... Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Hmm, why do I have a feeling that something else happened and that Severus removed Hermione's name from the research findings for some other reason?I missed so many fabulous stories during the Exchange, but I'm looking forward to seeing where this one ends up. :)
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far! All is certainly not what it seems with Severus and Hermione, and more will definitely be revelaed in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far! All is certainly not what it seems with Severus and Hermione, and more will definitely be revelaed in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing : )
I have to say, if you're going to have someone matchmaking, a higher entity...err, higher 'benevolent being' doing the amtchmaking would make it rather hard to resist. That and the flute which is no doubt designed to drive Ron nuts so he co-operates. ;)Now, as to Hermione and Severus having a falling out, the mind boggles and my mind heads firmly downwards. :p
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Krishna definitely knows what he's doing, even if it's still a bit of mystery for Ron lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Krishna definitely knows what he's doing, even if it's still a bit of mystery for Ron lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Such an intriguing beginning and I love the idea of a pesky, but benevolent god sticking his oar in. ;) This should be a fun ride!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Krishna was definitely a fun character to write for, and I admit my portrayal of him was just a tiny bit sassy lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Krishna was definitely a fun character to write for, and I admit my portrayal of him was just a tiny bit sassy lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Love this. Ron is really trying to do something right. Asking Padma about Krishna? I think she's the one who was in the temple in Chapter 1. Just a quick nitpick? This sentence: "Even the memory of administering her first dose Pepperup could still put a smile on her face"? Would it read better if you used "of" between "dose" and "Pepperup"? Sorry. I'm not a beta, but I can't help noticing things like this when I read. ^_^
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Ron really does have his work cut out for him, but to his credit, he isn't giving up. As for Padma, well, all will be revealed lol. And yes, that was a small typo, thank you for pointing it out!Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from MsTree (Reviewer)
As long as you're not upset about my pointing it out. *grin* Love the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
No worries! I want my story in tiptop shape, so every little bit helps : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Ron really does have his work cut out for him, but to his credit, he isn't giving up. As for Padma, well, all will be revealed lol. And yes, that was a small typo, thank you for pointing it out!Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from MsTree (Reviewer)
As long as you're not upset about my pointing it out. *grin* Love the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
No worries! I want my story in tiptop shape, so every little bit helps : )
There is much more going on here than meets the eye, Ron and Hermione breaking up, and the apparent debacle over the potion are connected in some way. We will all have to keep reading to find out the how, what, who, why and where I guess.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
At least a few of those questions are answered in the next chapter, so the wait isn't too long : ) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
At least a few of those questions are answered in the next chapter, so the wait isn't too long : ) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Wonderful!I do hope Ron and Padma join forces. And I also hope that I'll hear more about the Hermione/Snape-quarrel.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Definitely a lot more details about the Hermione/Snape situation to come in the next chapter. Also, a few more Ron and Padma moments : )Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Definitely a lot more details about the Hermione/Snape situation to come in the next chapter. Also, a few more Ron and Padma moments : )Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I am intrigued to know who the party praying to Krishna is. Methinks it *might* be Parvati (although why *she* would want Ron is beyond me...).
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Very interesting guess... All will be revealed as the story continues : ) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Very interesting guess... All will be revealed as the story continues : ) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Poor Ron. Of all the trials in the world, being accused of not being over an ex, while som deity is asking you to save her soul, must be the worst. I mean, who'd actually believe that?Also, I'm in love with your Krishna. I'd marry him any day, I think. If you ever write a fic with him as the main player, I'd be in heaven Nirvana.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Ron does find himself in quite the predicament, but luckily Krishna is a benevolent god (well, to a point lol), so perhaps this might lead something positive. I'm glad you're enjoying Krishna. He was definitely fun to write.Thank you for the review : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Ron does find himself in quite the predicament, but luckily Krishna is a benevolent god (well, to a point lol), so perhaps this might lead something positive. I'm glad you're enjoying Krishna. He was definitely fun to write.Thank you for the review : )
I really like this. The mystery is sucking me in!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story :) Definitely more to come! Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story :) Definitely more to come! Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
The threads of life are in a bit of a tangle, aren't they. I hope that Ron has what it takes, to unravel them.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
He'll definitely need to find a little inner strength to tackle this challenge. Luckily, he doesn't have to do it entirely alone... Thank you for continuing to read and review :)
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
He'll definitely need to find a little inner strength to tackle this challenge. Luckily, he doesn't have to do it entirely alone... Thank you for continuing to read and review :)
epilogue...!
Nice work with the prompt. I enjoyed the story very much.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Thank you for reading and for all your reviews!
Love the explanation of the "curse" here. Well done.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Thank you : ) It took a bit of research to come up with the "curse", but I thought it would be interesting to use mythology that you don't often see in Snape/Hermione fanfiction.
Ah, Ron's finally on to something here. I like his intuition to ask Padma for help. Also, I like the flashbacks. :)
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I thought the flashbacks would be a good way to give the reader a bit of a Hermione/Snape fix before they come face to face again, so I'm glad you enjoyed it : ) It was fun throwing Padma into the mix, especially as she isn't a character who appears much in the books. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Nice chapter. I liked the interaction with Ron and Krishna
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I definitely had the most fun writing the dialogue between those two. Poor Ron's like a deer in headlights. Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Intriguing beginning.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I'm glad it caught your attention : ). Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Lovely, and with Krishna pulling the strings it couldn't end any other way. :)No as long as Ron and Severus don't manage to cock it up, then it surely is, 'Mission Accomplished!'
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I suppose you never can tell with men, but I think they've finally managed to figure it out lol. Thank you for reading and all of your reviews!
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
I suppose you never can tell with men, but I think they've finally managed to figure it out lol. Thank you for reading and all of your reviews!
I really do like Ron in this story. He's grown up, albeit with a good swift kick from Krishna and learnt that he'd been holding on to his torch for too long. Bit like Severus and Lily I suppose. ;)As to what Severus might wish to do to him, well, I'll just have to click to find out. :)
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Ron definitely isn't nearly the petulant teen he used to be, though perhaps he needed a bit of that petulance to inspire him to get to the bottom of things lol. And there's usually no telling with Severus... Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
Ron definitely isn't nearly the petulant teen he used to be, though perhaps he needed a bit of that petulance to inspire him to get to the bottom of things lol. And there's usually no telling with Severus... Thank you for reading and reviewing : )
Krishna has his hands full with these two doesn't he? looking forward to more soon.
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
He certainly does, especially with the addition of Ron in the mix. However, they've finally talked to each other, and that's definitely a step in right direction, even if it did kind of backfire. The next chapter is in the queue! Thanks for reading and reviewing : )
Response from ks51689 (Author of Soul Searching)
He certainly does, especially with the addition of Ron in the mix. However, they've finally talked to each other, and that's definitely a step in right direction, even if it did kind of backfire. The next chapter is in the queue! Thanks for reading and reviewing : )