Once Upon A Time
HBAR28 Reviews | 5.68/10 (28 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
Once upon a time, there was a lonely prince and princess who needed to be rescued from themselves. If only there were such a thing as magic ...
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Love it. Next chapter please :-)
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
We've one chapter to go, and it should go into the queue soon. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Thanks for stopping by to review. :)
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
We've one chapter to go, and it should go into the queue soon. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Thanks for stopping by to review. :)
Oh dear, Severus has cold feet, smart people tend to over think things, it's a shame he had to see the paper, but maybe Hermione will track him down.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Yes, things are not going too well at the moment, are they? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Yes, things are not going too well at the moment, are they? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
He should pay more attention to his grandmother! :)
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Are you suggesting he do something rational where a girl is concerned? Oh, Sunny. *shakes head*
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Are you suggesting he do something rational where a girl is concerned? Oh, Sunny. *shakes head*
Well, that is an interesting turn. Shame that Ron doesn't really know what Hermione's job is, though hopefully they will be able to get the message to the right person.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
It will happen if it is meant to be. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
It will happen if it is meant to be. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
He gave her homework, and she is asking a million questions, it won't be long before they recognise each other.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Or will it? *insert evil laugh* Nah, I'm not that mean. This is complete in four chapters, and the next one should be up soonish. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Or will it? *insert evil laugh* Nah, I'm not that mean. This is complete in four chapters, and the next one should be up soonish. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
How horrific for Severus to be trapped in his own body, I hope Victoria and Ron can contact Hermione, and set him free.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
It would be awful, wouldn't it? Let's hope for the best. :)
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
It would be awful, wouldn't it? Let's hope for the best. :)
I love their rapport heating up and all the clever, playful banter--Did he just give me homework? --lol! Yes, he did! hmmm--I love the quill--will see how long either of them are content with this means of correspondence before they'll feel the need to speak face to face or something is going to require-- I have a feeling real soon!xxx
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Lets hope the desire to meet face to face is mutual. *whistles innocently* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Lets hope the desire to meet face to face is mutual. *whistles innocently* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ron is a true sweetie here--and I love this depiction of him, love him having a column, and being a true friend to Hermione--there are multiple layers of interactions going on here with Hermione intertwined in all-- hmnnn, I hope Victoria finds 'Azalea' and this will lead to some relied and help with poor Severus... love the fairy tale elements mixed in with real life dilemmas!
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Hi there! Thanks for stopping by to read. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Even though I love SS/HG together, I have a real soft spot for Ron. Whether he is suited for Hermione or not, I think he would be a good friend. As for the search for Azalea ... my lips are sealed.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Hi there! Thanks for stopping by to read. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Even though I love SS/HG together, I have a real soft spot for Ron. Whether he is suited for Hermione or not, I think he would be a good friend. As for the search for Azalea ... my lips are sealed.
This is a cute and fun story line with very much promise. I really like the idea of the IntelliQuill.I wonder who is going to recognize whose handwriting or writing style first?
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Thank you so much! As for your question ... I'm not talking. :) Next chapter is in the queue.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Thank you so much! As for your question ... I'm not talking. :) Next chapter is in the queue.
He hasn't lost his acerbic tongue then. :)
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Would we recognize him if he had? :)
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Would we recognize him if he had? :)
So, the charm only works from a distance. Wonder when she'll figure it out?
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
She may need some assistance to come to that conclusion. i wonder who could help ... ?
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
She may need some assistance to come to that conclusion. i wonder who could help ... ?
Very clever! I'm enjoying this so much. LOL, and he's given her homework.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, he is sticking with what he knows, I suppose. :) Thanks so much for letting me know you are enjoying this.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, he is sticking with what he knows, I suppose. :) Thanks so much for letting me know you are enjoying this.
This is funny. And I like your Ron. So nice that he is decent for once.I'm looking forward to the correspondence. Already the dri wit Mr Prince displays has me giggling. 'Your assignment for tomorrow' was a brilliant line.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Although I like Snape and Hermione together in fanfic, the pairing doesn't automatically make Ron a total heathen. I have a soft spot for him, so he will always be safe in my fics.Lots of correspondence coming up next. Thanks so much for stopping by to review.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Although I like Snape and Hermione together in fanfic, the pairing doesn't automatically make Ron a total heathen. I have a soft spot for him, so he will always be safe in my fics.Lots of correspondence coming up next. Thanks so much for stopping by to review.
This is very good. And Ron is not an idiot. Nice for a change.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
While I like Snape and Hermione together in fanfic, it doesn't automatically make Ron a worthless idiot. I have a soft spot for him, so no bashing to be found. Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying this.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
While I like Snape and Hermione together in fanfic, it doesn't automatically make Ron a worthless idiot. I have a soft spot for him, so no bashing to be found. Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying this.
Well, H, you've made a fan out of me! I love your sense of humor and this sort of letter-writing plot is right up my alley. Please post again soon!hm88
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
And you've just made my night with your lovely comments! This is complete in four chapters. The next one will be in the queue soon, and hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
And you've just made my night with your lovely comments! This is complete in four chapters. The next one will be in the queue soon, and hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
Enchanting! ;)Looking forward to reading Ch. 2. Thanks for posting!hm88
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Oh, thank you for such a kind comment. I'll take enchanting! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Oh, thank you for such a kind comment. I'll take enchanting! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
*grin* So it doesn't work with matched sets and only at a distance, eh? This should be an interesting correspondence. ^_^
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
It does only work at a distance, and that was her problem. He kept half of one set and half of the other, so his earpiece writes with her quill and her earpiece writes with his quill. I do hope you find their correspondence entertaining. Thanks for stopping by!
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
It does only work at a distance, and that was her problem. He kept half of one set and half of the other, so his earpiece writes with her quill and her earpiece writes with his quill. I do hope you find their correspondence entertaining. Thanks for stopping by!
favourited! pls finish! love the bart and arch names/joke.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
So sorry for the delay! I will try to get it up soon. Thanks so much for stopping by to comment. I hope you enjoy the rest.
Hi, I come to by way of your reviews of other's stories. Some of your reviews are so insightful and deep that I had to check out your work!! I am really glad I did! This story is hilarious!!!! Keep up the good work and I will keep writing and reviewing!! ~dee
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Wow, you are a reading machine! Thanks for checking out my humble offerings. I don't write all that much. Most of mine were from my first real endeavor: the TPP Last Drabble Writer Standing. Its fun, so occasionally I dabble a bit. This one has one final chapter, that I am going to try to post soon. Thanks again for giving me a chance.
Wonderful story I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Sorry to be so belated in responding. Real life has been a pain as of late. There is one more chapter, and if i can get my act together, I will get it into the queue very soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you are enjoying it.
Very nice twist. Good to see that Severus could help cure himself. And I love that his wit is fully in tact despite having been locked away for a year. I look forward to seeing how the partnership develops and what happens when they realize who the other person is. LOL
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, I suppose his wit has been suppressed for a year, so it is bursting at the seams to get out. :) Are you sure you want to know what happens when they realize each other's identity ... ? *is mysterious*
Response from phoenix (Reviewer)
Oh, I can see Severus' eye developing a tic when he realizes the 'know-it-all' gave him the tools to save himself from the curse he was afflicted with. Hermione will probably just bounce of walls over her invention working and him being okay in between feeling guilty for not having done more in the shack the first time around. Of course that all depends on how much time passes before they figure it out.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, I suppose his wit has been suppressed for a year, so it is bursting at the seams to get out. :) Are you sure you want to know what happens when they realize each other's identity ... ? *is mysterious*
Response from phoenix (Reviewer)
Oh, I can see Severus' eye developing a tic when he realizes the 'know-it-all' gave him the tools to save himself from the curse he was afflicted with. Hermione will probably just bounce of walls over her invention working and him being okay in between feeling guilty for not having done more in the shack the first time around. Of course that all depends on how much time passes before they figure it out.
At first I wasn't sure if I was going to like this. I just couldn't imagine Hermione failing at anything. But I really started to enjoy this. I like how the one thing Hermione thought she failed at does in fact work. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, Hermione may stumble a bit, but she usually gets whatever she sets out to get. I wouldn't worry. :) Thanks for stopping by to review.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, Hermione may stumble a bit, but she usually gets whatever she sets out to get. I wouldn't worry. :) Thanks for stopping by to review.
Oh, this was so much fun! I enjoyed reading it again. I know this is going to be a really popular story here at TPP; I hope you get all the reviews you deserve for this one! :D
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
You are my own little personal cheering section. And because you're awesome, I will let you know that a little birdy told me that there could soon be a prequel to Erotoarachnid posted right here. Provided the author still gives out the rights to do so. :)
Response from Keppiehed (Reviewer)
OMG! I'm squeeing here! It's like fanfic chain mail, but not the kind you dread where someone guilts you into doing something that you think is dumb, but when you don't you worry about bad luck or keeling over ... wait, I forgot what I was talking about. Birdies and spiders, was it? Yay! I love it!!!!! When did your birdies say this was going to happen? Now I am all excited! <3
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, it's done, but I'm at the mercy of the queue, so you'll just have to stay tuned. No birds, no spiders ... Hell, it has nothing to do with your story whatsoever. It was supposed to, but completely ran away from me. But, it will fill in some blanks on Harry's dreams. That's all I'm saying.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
You are my own little personal cheering section. And because you're awesome, I will let you know that a little birdy told me that there could soon be a prequel to Erotoarachnid posted right here. Provided the author still gives out the rights to do so. :)
Response from Keppiehed (Reviewer)
OMG! I'm squeeing here! It's like fanfic chain mail, but not the kind you dread where someone guilts you into doing something that you think is dumb, but when you don't you worry about bad luck or keeling over ... wait, I forgot what I was talking about. Birdies and spiders, was it? Yay! I love it!!!!! When did your birdies say this was going to happen? Now I am all excited! <3
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
Well, it's done, but I'm at the mercy of the queue, so you'll just have to stay tuned. No birds, no spiders ... Hell, it has nothing to do with your story whatsoever. It was supposed to, but completely ran away from me. But, it will fill in some blanks on Harry's dreams. That's all I'm saying.
Different. I like it! Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter...
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
I'm glad you like it. Next one should be up before too long.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
I'm glad you like it. Next one should be up before too long.
Great story so far! Fresh plot line. Love the grandmother character - can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
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Response from HBAR (Author of Once Upon A Time)
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