You've done a marvelous job with some very strange quotes. Lol. I think it would be tough to do the same thing honestly.Well done.

Good ending - I enjoyed the story but I always seem to like what you write - another winner.

Well they both tooking know better that I thought the would - it is good that you wrote it that way because they can still salvage the friendship without saying hurtful things.

Harry and Draco - wow.. I liked this chapter - the sneaking made it all the more erotic.

Poor Severus is not sure what he wants at this stage beside a little more sex with Hermione and Harry is committed out of obligation but not a complete heart. I cannot wait to see where you take this.

Okay now that is a mean cliffie - is she really going to tell Harry that she did Severus - Harry is liable to freak out - must read the next chapter - this is a good one.

The bedroom scene was good - I cannot believe Severus's change from Snarky to well if you want to stay and talk then you can kind of attitude. Give Severus some lovin and you melt the frosty layers a little. LOL

Peeping Severus - very dirty and kinky but good. I loved the last line:
"Come here, Snape,” she said seductively, crooking her finger at him.
How dare she think to come into his rooms and command him to go to her… like some randy little schoolboy that would fall prey to her charms! He did what any sane, logical man would do.
He went to her.
That was just perfect - great chapter.

Liked the first chapter - makes you wonder if something is going on between Hermione and Harry. At least Severus is seeing her as a woman and not a little girl, good beginning.

Draco and Harry!  Ha!  That was great!  I love how you had Draco managed to get things he wanted from Severus when he wanted to get with Harry the whole time!  A very Slytherin thing to do! 

Hee hee hee!  I can't wait to see what Draco brings to the mix!  This should definitely be interesting!  LOL!  Great job with this, Southern!

Yummy chapter! Love the story!  Harry just has the worst sense of timing!  Can't wait to read this conversation!  LOL! 

Excellent!  Excellent!  Excellent!  As usual!!  I think you did a wonderful job with working that quote in!!

I was a good girl and waited until it was complete to read it and I LOVE IT !!!!

I love what you've done with this challenge, the story was wonderful and I love happy endings.

That was very sweet.  I enjoyed it very much, thank you!

Yay!  A happy ending!  I love happy endings.

please update!.....Enjoyed this v. much,but feel you have so much more to give?!!

I like but i guess I hoped for an orgy i am naughty!!!

Whew it's all worked out for the couple and then the bad guys had to come and mess everything up good chap

OMG!  Hot, hot, hot!  Great job with the lemons!  No squickiness here!  Loved it!

OMG!  That was freaking hilarious!  Loved the drunken Snape!  And the Howler!  Hee hee hee!  I must say I would do the same in Hermione's place!  LOL!  Go Hermione!

Ha!  I love this!  Great job!  I LMAO!  I loved that Dudly thought he was a vampire!  Hee hee hee!  Can't wait to read the next chapter!

LOL, and here I thought Severus actually wanted Draco and Harry to get 'close'. 

ooh some yummy H/D good chap