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And the Tree Cried
Bardsdaughter24 Reviews | 6.63/10 (24 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )
Her heart breaks for the boy she sheltered as she becomes the tool of his torture.
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Old enough. I'm a writer by heart, using the wonderful HP universe (specifically Severus Snape and Hermione Granger) as a canvas for my imagination as I learn the craft and strive to be published one day. In real life, I am a professional with a doctorate in my chosen field.
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So beautifully written. It made me cry!
I really shouldn't read stories like this while pregnant, you have me crying like a baby lol. I almost didn't read the second chapter, thinking you'd killed severus and now built a coffin for him out of the tree or something, but I'm glad I did. Good story, unique from anything I've read before.
that was beautiful.
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Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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And I cried along with the tree. Beautiful.
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While I'm sorry for causing the tears, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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While I'm sorry for causing the tears, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Very evocative. :)
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Fascinating use of POV. :)
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what a beautiful story. I cried with the tree.
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And so did I...cried that is. It is a pleasure to know there are other humans who treasure nature, who sits patiently while others destroy it. Save the green. Jf
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Beautiful! Just beautiful...
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Thank you. And thanks for reading!
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And I had to blink back a few tears for the tree...Lovely.
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Stunning. Absolutely beautiful.
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Sorry for being so long in responding. I'm glad you took the time to read this little tale.
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Sorry for being so long in responding. I'm glad you took the time to read this little tale.
Oh... this broke my heart. It was beautiful and I can't stop crying. (Runs off to find a fluffy cure.)
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Sorry for the tears, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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Sorry for the tears, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Ack!This reminded me of Shel Silverstien's Giving Tree.
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Talk about making someone cry. That is a classic that makes me tear up just by looking at the cover.
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Talk about making someone cry. That is a classic that makes me tear up just by looking at the cover.
Made me cry in the best possible way. Your use of language is almost lyrical. Lovely!
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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This is a beautifully written fic with one of the best perception-shifts I've read. Poignant without becoming trite, tripe, or, worse, disgustingly, sappily, melodramatically sentimental; evocative without being explicit. Your writing rivals professionals with this fic. Given the strength of this single chapter--it could stand on its own as finished--I will definitely be reading as updated.
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Thank you! I certainly hope the final chapter lives up to the first.
Response from Bardsdaughter (Author of And the Tree Cried)
Thank you! I certainly hope the final chapter lives up to the first.
This is very well written, powerful, and touching.I almost didn't read it due to the warnings, but I'm glad I did.
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Thank you! I'm glad you read it, too.
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This is a WONDERFUL story!!!!
And so the world keeps on turning.
Heartbreakingly beautiful.
Wow, just wow. So. so very touching.
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Just found your work...lovely, absolutely breathtaking!!
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So very sweet. I loved it. Thank you.
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So very touching and moving. I love how this is from the tree's POV. So very unique.
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