Chapter 24
Chapter 24 of 27
phoenixVoldemort is back and the Order of the Phoenix is reforming. They need new members and Kingsley recruits one of his fellow Aurors - even though she is a Slytherin. Assigned to work with Remus Lupin, things get very tense. Set during 'Order of the Phoenix'.
Chapter 24
Wendy started at Remus for several seconds. He just didn't understand. Of course, he couldn't understand. He wasn't wearing the ring. "I can't give you the ring. I'll take the necklace, but I can't face them without the ring."
He placed his hands on hers, planning on removing the ring, and suddenly found a wand pointed at his throat. "You would attack me?"
"Do not touch the ring," she said in low, menacing voice.
Remus let go of her hand. "Wendy, think about what you are doing." He feared that she was losing control, that he was losing her.
"I have thought about what I'm doing. The Dark Lord tore apart my family last time. I'm not going to let him gain power and do it again. They don't play fair, and neither will I. With this ring," she held her hand up before him, "I can do great things. I can gain the advantage for our side. This is the only way we can get an advantage. The Ministry refuses to even admit that the Dark Lord has returned." She slowly lowered her wand and put it away. "I'll take the necklace, but I really do have to get going. If I wait too long, they will assume I'm not interested and the opportunity will be lost." She turned and climbed the stairs.
By the time Remus arrived in the bedroom, she was pulling on a set of everyday robes. He went over to his dresser, pulled the necklace he had charmed out of the drawer, and placed it on her dressing table. While his feelings were hurt by her actions, he reminded himself that it was the ring that was altering her behavior. "I'll go gather as many members of the Order as I can," he said before leaving. He had hoped she would have said something in return, but she didn't stop him from leaving.
As soon as he arrived at Grimmauld Place, he sent messages to everyone he thought might be available.
"What are you doing here?" asked Sirius, quite surprised to see Remus well after midnight.
"Wendy has been invited to a Death Eater meeting. I gave her a necklace that will allow me to track her. I'm going to assemble as many members of the Order as I can, and we're going to crash the meeting and see how many we can capture."
"That's a rather bold plan. How do you know that they won't recognize the necklace for what it is?" Sirius said, not even bothering to stifle his yawn.
"I don't," Remus admitted, "but I would be very surprised if they did. I've learned that a lot of the books she has are one of a kind."
Over the next ten minutes, Kingsley, Tonks and Emmeline Vance arrived. They waited a few more minutes and Dedalus Diggle and Moody arrived.
"What's going on?" asked Moody, clearly suspicious at being summoned in the middle of the night.
Remus explained, "Wendy has found a way to infiltrate a Death Eater meeting. I've given her a necklace that will allow me to track her. Right now, she is still at Malfoy's manor, but once she moves, we'll know where the Death Eaters are meeting. The dinner she attended this evening had several suspected Death Eaters that will also be attending this meeting."
"How many can we expect?"
"She estimated about a dozen, but that wasn't counting anyone they might be meeting there."
"All right then. Let's go over some offensive strategy."
Wendy returned to Malfoy's manor and found him waiting for her. "Ah, Wendy. I was beginning to think you wouldn't come back. I was just about to leave without you."
"Sorry. I had something come up that I just had to take care of before I could return." She saw that he had picked up a black robe. "What's this?"
He gave her a knowing grin. "Come now, you're an intelligent woman. If you didn't know what this was, you wouldn't be here."
She took the black robe from him and donned it. "So, you have finally deemed me worthy?"
"Yes, well, that was a rather large oversight on our part. Bella had wanted to recruit you, but Edgar wished to keep you safe. Now that you are free of the Ministry, we can correct that oversight." He handed her a mask and watched her don it. He then took hold of her arm. "Hold tight," he ordered before Apparating them to the meeting.
Remus froze during the planning session and looked to the west. "They've moved." He dug through the paper on the table, looking for the map. Pointing at a desolate area northwest of London, he announced, "They're here."
"You're sure of that?" asked Moody.
"Positive. Before she moved, I could have pointed you straight at Malfoy's manor in Wiltshire." He was thankful the necklace worked and was apparently going undetected.
"All right." Moody pointed his wand and the map, and a three-dimensional image of the area Remus had indicated was before them on the table. "We can assume they have set up temporary anti-Apparition wards. Since they are temporary, we should be able to come in closer than if they were permanent." He pointed to a part of the map. "This looks like a good Apparition point. It's uphill from the gathering, which will give us the advantage. I would expect this meeting to take some time, so we'll wait another five minutes or so to ensure that everyone has arrived before us. Any questions?"
"Five minutes? Should we really wait that long?" Remus was concerned that the longer it took, the more likely Wendy was to do something irrational. He hadn't discussed there being a delay in the arrival of help. She was likely to believe that no one was coming and act on her own.
"Since you told us how you delayed her, it is unlikely that the others wouldn't already be assembled, but I'd like to wait and be sure," Moody replied.
Remus knew the others would defer to Moody and remained silent even though he was aching to leave.
Wendy looked around as best she could while wearing the mask and not looking too obvious. A couple of the Death Eaters she could identify by height and build, but the others had not exhibited enough behavior for her to identify them. She wondered how long it would be before Remus and the others would arrive. That, of course, assumed that he had been able to get any of the others together and that the necklace worked. She thought that was unlikely on such short notice and was fully prepared to take matters into her own hands.
"You bring our new recruit?" asked an unrecognizable voice.
Lucius replied in an equally altered voice, "I do. This recruit is worthy and shares our views."
The speaker addressed her. "Are you ready to become one of us? To preserve the Wizarding way of life?"
Quickly, she masked her own voice and replied, "I am." This was it, all the suffering at Malfoy's hands was about to pay off.
"Are you prepared to prove your loyalty to our ways?"
She knew that she had to answer 'yes' and that she couldn't hesitate, even though a part of her wondered how quickly they would expect her to prove her loyalty. "Yes." She clenched her hand, feeling the reassuring presence of the ring, ready to go on the offensive. She could feel the eyes of the others upon her, and she wondered how many of them knew who she was.
The speaker circled around her, and she noticed that Lucius had fallen back into the ring with the others. "We ask each that seeks to join us to prove their worthiness. You will be given a mission to complete. It may or may not be easy to you. There is a small Muggle village nearby. Living in that village is a blood traitor. You are to bring that blood traitor here for judgment and sentencing." The speaker held out a photograph.
Wendy took the picture. "It shall be done." She would try to give Remus and the others a few more minutes. If not, she would act to subdue as many of them as she could. The ring was powerful, but she didn't know if she could take them all down.
She was just leaving the circle, ostensibly to carry out her mission, when a series of hexes flew into the circle. Those still standing after the initial attack ran for cover. Wendy knew there were at least four or five of the Order there and managed to dislodge her mask so they knew not to hex her. She did her best to look like she was putting up a fight without actually hitting anyone from Order. If the opportunity arose, she would throw a hex at one of the Death Eaters. With members of the Order nearby, she feared using the ring, suspecting that its powers were indiscriminant.
Death Eaters were fleeing, and she was about to join them when she felt and arm wrap around her quickly followed by the sensation of Portkey activation. If not for the arm wrapped around her waist, she would have fallen when the motion stopped. She fought to free herself from her captor.
"Easy. We're safe," came Lucius' reassuring voice. He released her and removed his mask.
"Where are we?" she asked as she examined her surroundings. It was obviously not Malfoy's manor.
"Somewhere safe. And I think you should remain here. I believe some of the attackers may have seen your face." He brushed her hair out of her face.
"And what of it? We can hunt them down," she replied, hoping to be allowed off on her own.
"What of it is that they are affiliated with the Ministry. I recognized one of them as Moody," he said cautiously.
"He's not part of the Ministry anymore. He's actually become a bit of a joke with the Aurors. You do know they made him retire because his behavior was... erratic, to say the least." She hoped to convince him that Moody was not a danger.
"Nonetheless, he will surely report you to the Ministry. I suspect that Aurors will be at your home within the hour. It won't be safe for you to return," Lucius replied pointedly and not the least bit disappointed.
This was a completely unexpected turn of events, one she did not want to experience. "Of course." Surveying the room closer, she noticed that it was quite rundown. "Should I expect better accommodations?"
He stroked her cheek. "I thought you were above such things?"
"I'm not asking for luxury. I am asking for something that does not smell quite so bad." This was not the type of place that she wanted to stay for an extended period of time.
"Of course. I will see that wards are set up at a better location." He pulled her close. "You know, I think we can find a way to make the best of this bad situation."
She really wanted nothing more than to knock him across the room and run. Instead, she said, "Oh? How so?"
"Well, I see it as my duty to come here and make sure you aren't too lonely during your involuntary exile." He leaned down and kissed her.
She forced herself to return the kiss. "What of your plan to set me up with someone else?"
"Well, that will be much harder to do since you won't be able to be seen in society."
"I suppose that is an added bonus." It was a nightmare. As soon as he was gone, she would leave. It would mean that she would have to hide at Grimmauld Place with Sirius, but anything was better than being trapped here at Malfoy's beck and call.
When the members of the Order arrived, they quickly ran downhill to attack the Death Eaters before they could react. At one point, Remus saw Wendy flailing around with the other Death Eaters, but in the ensuing melee he lost track of her. They had managed to stun five of the Death Eaters, but most of the rest had fled into the trees and were able to escape. He felt the sudden shift that indicated Wendy had Apparated elsewhere. Strangely, she was now somewhere to the north.
Once they were sure that the area was secure, Kingsley left to arrange for Aurors to pick up the prisoners.
"Where's Wendy?" asked Moody.
"Somewhere to the north. She left near the end of the battle. I don't think she left willingly, though. She made sure that we knew who she was, and if she escaped anywhere it would have been to her house. I think we should go after her."
"I think we should wait on this. Undercover work is one of her specialties. If we go in after her, it will let them know that she's on our side and may place her in danger."
"But, Alastor, what if they suspect that she gave away the meeting location? She could be in grave danger now," Remus insisted, his heart aching at this plan gone wrong.
"Could be, but that isn't a definite. Let's figure out where she is and come up with a solid plan. She's well trained and can take care of herself," Moody replied, indicating that there would be no unplanned rescue attempts.
Remus found that he didn't completely believe this. He had no idea what situation she had gotten herself into, but he felt that she was definitely in over her head. Unfortunately, he knew this was something he couldn't do on his own. He would have to follow Moody's advice for at least a little while longer.
Wendy was about to make her escape when she heard a sibilant voice behind her say, "Lucius, I had not expected visitors. Introduce your guest to me."
Lucius bowed his head. "Yes, my lord." He led Wendy closer to the speaker. "This is Wendy Westin, who we have told you about."
"Wessstin, the former Auror. Has she passed her test?" the Dark Lord asked.
"Not yet, my lord. We were... interrupted," Lucius replied deferentially.
"Interrupted?"
Bella joined them. "What my dear brother-in-law means is that we were followed. Those meddlers from the Order attacked us."
Wendy could almost feel the accusatory stare Bella was giving her. She forced herself to meet Bella's gaze, refusing to be the first to look away. The periphery of her mind was giddy that she had the Dark Lord a mere pace from her, and she had an incredible power that could destroy him. She squeezed her hand, trying to determine when would be the best time to attack. Unfortunately, she had little idea what would be the outcome of channeling power through the ring for that purpose. She was drawn from her reverie when the Dark Lord began to speak again.
"So, you have brought someone to my presence that has not proven her loyalty?" the Dark Lord asked dangerously.
Bella chimed in. "Yes, how do you know that she wasn't the one that brought the Order?"
Wendy was about to answer, but Lucius spoke first. "She had no opportunity. I brought her straight to the gathering from my manor. I trust her completely. She was about to leave to fetch the blood traitor when the attack began."
Voldemort turned his penetrating eyes on Wendy. "Is this true?"
She forced herself to meet his gaze, only Occluding the small part of her mind that would get her in trouble. She could feel a slimy presence moving through her mind. Never before had being probed by a Legilimens felt like this. "Yes, my lord."
"A former Auror would be quite useful," he mused. "If she can be trusted." He eyed her appraisingly.
"I have no love of the Ministry or their policies. The restriction of those policies is what got me fired." She knew that staying as close to the truth as possible would help her succeed in her deception.
"Yesss, but you were harassing some of my Death Eaters when you violated those policies. That makes you untrustworthy in my estimation."
She knew this was very dangerous territory. "My lord, if I may explain? I actually protected Lucius during the Ministry raid. I knew where he would be hiding things the Ministry did not need to know about and ensured my partner would not search those areas. As for my brother, well... It has been quite some time since the two of us have gotten along well. I'm afraid that was more of a family feud, and he was never placed in any trouble with the Ministry."
"Do I make you nervousss?" he asked as he walked around her.
She knew he was looking for an answer that would feed his ego. "Not so much nervous, my lord. Awed would be a better word."
"Why?"
It was such a simple questions, but she knew that answer would need to be something more. "I am rarely in the presence of such a great wizard. I know that you will do great things for Wizard-kind."
"Yet you share your roof with a Muggle-lover," he countered.
"That is true, but I hope to reform him. He has been a friend for a number of years." She desperately hoped that he couldn't see through the lies. Even though he was not looking into her eyes, she could still feel his presence in her mind. He had truly sunk deeply into the world of Dark magic.
He leaned close to her and took her hand in his. She tried not to look visibly nervous. "This is a very interesting ring."
"An old family heirloom I found after Edgar's death. I wore it to dinner this evening and forgot to take it off," she replied offhandedly.
He could clearly feel the power emanating from the ring. "It is quite the family heirloom." He reached to remove it from her finger and was thrown back by a burst of magic.
Lucius and Bella both immediately had their wands pointed at Wendy.
"That is quite a powerful ring. And I see that it is not what it first appeared to be." He maintained a respectful distance.
Wendy looked down at her hand and saw that the charm was gone.
Bella's eyes widened when she saw the ring. "How did you...? Master, that ring has been in the Black family for centuries."
"And you never brought it to my attention before?" he asked, diverting his attention from Wendy to Bellatrix.
Wendy tried to Disapparate and found herself knocked to the floor.
Voldemort sneered at her. "Oh, you won't be getting away from here, my child. Only those who are loyal to me have that power. Bellatrix, the ring?"
Bella had a cruel grin on her face. "I wonder how you got that ring? I always knew you were the brilliant one when it came to obscure magic, but that doesn't explain how you got into the house and got the ring." She stepped closer to Wendy. "Now, I think you should prove your loyalty by giving me the ring."
Wendy had been considering her options. They were very limited. She had no idea how far she would have to go in order to Disapparate, and she was no longer entirely sure the ring would be able to stun everyone for her to escape. "There is some magic that interferes with the ring, some of the interference could be fatal. I know that it is safe for me to use the ring. My lord, the ring was only defending itself when you tried to remove it. I had no idea that would happen to you."
He almost believed her. "Then why would you try to run?"
"For protection, my lord. I know that your anger can be great, and I did not want you to react over a misunderstanding. I only desired time to be allowed to explain." She hoped that he would believe it. It sounded plausible to her.
"Now that we have that misunderstanding cleared up, hand me the ring."
Bella held her wand menacingly. "I can cut her hand off."
Wendy did not like the crazed glint in Bella's eyes. She knew that statement was not a joke. She momentarily considered activating her Portkey, but that would require her to use her wand, which was still tucked in her sleeve. Besides, she wasn't sure that would work either. At this point, she could either try to flee which would undoubtedly lead to horrible torture if she were captured, which was very likely or she could continue lying. "My lord, if I could give it to you, I would, but I can feel the ring melding with me. I'm not sure I can remove it."
Voldemort turned his attention to Bella. "Is what she says true?"
"I-I don't know. We were never allowed to touch the ring. My aunt was very proud of it. We could hear her telling visitors about it, but it was kept locked in the library." She turned her attention back to Wendy. "How did you get that ring anyway?"
"Come now, Bella. You know there were very few magical wards that could keep me out. I already knew how to break into the library. It wasn't that hard to figure out how to get the ring out of the case."
"When did you do this?" She had already tried to get into the Black house, but found it was unplottable.
"Oh, some time back. I forget exactly when. I'm really surprised that your family never turned over the ring, given the fact they openly supported the cause." She was trying to deflect attention away from her.
"Enough!" shouted Voldemort. "We have plenty of time to figure out how to get the ring off since Wendy will be our guest."
Wendy tried to control her fear. "Of course, my lord. Though if I might suggest, I have numerous books at my house that could provide more information about the ring. Perhaps one could be helpful in determining how to remove it."
Lucius stepped forward. "I would advise against that. During the attack, her mask came off and it is highly probable she was recognized. I would not be surprised if Aurors were waiting at her house."
"I can Apparate directly inside. My house is protected against intruders. I doubt that even the Aurors could break through my protection," she had hoped that Lucius would have remained silent.
"That is not a risk I am willing to take. We will wait. After a week or so, they will conclude that you are not returning and turn their attention to something more important," Voldemort replied.
"Of course, my lord," she replied meekly. This was not turning out at all like she had anticipated. And with the news that their current location was warded against transportation spells, she wondered if the others would mount a rescue.
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30 Reviews | 9.0/10 Average
This was a brilliant story and so well written. I'm glad that Remus got Wendy and not Tonks.....she was the Wesley Crusher of the HP saga and Luna the Jar-Jar Binks in my humble opinion.Both bloody irritating. Very well done. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It really made me laugh. 
I do have to agree about Tonks. I mean she's supposedly adult, probably mid-20s, and in a very serious job, but she hams it up for the kids at the dinner table? And we're supposed to believe this is the type of woman Remus ends up with? Luna, I don't think she was quite Jar-Jar annoying, but it was close.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. It really made me laugh. I do have to agree about Tonks. I mean she's supposedly adult, probably mid-20s, and in a very serious job, but she hams it up for the kids at the dinner table? And we're supposed to believe this is the type of woman Remus ends up with? Luna, I don't think she was quite Jar-Jar annoying, but it was close.
Hmmm... so Lulu has done something to her/spelled her in some way to not be able to resist his touch? And it seems she gets more and more unnerved & unravelled each time, unfotunately, this evening leading to her brash decision to see her daughter before she is sent off to Durmstrang? Could Lulu & Tibor be in cahoots with each other to cause Wendy to suffer more--I wouldn't put it past her brother to seek even more cruel tactics against her since he thrives on the being a brute... hmm as well as Lucius... And now, the dilemma of the blood magic to be used on Remus or be his victim or... great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Lucius is definitely up to no good. He doesn't like to lose and he wants Wendy firmly under his thumb and at his beck and call. Whatever he's up to can't be good. And poor Remus, bless his heart, offering up his freedom or his life and poor Wendy faced with that awful dilemma. This was a harder chapter to write because I so can see Remus being the martyr for her.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Lucius is definitely up to no good. He doesn't like to lose and he wants Wendy firmly under his thumb and at his beck and call. Whatever he's up to can't be good. And poor Remus, bless his heart, offering up his freedom or his life and poor Wendy faced with that awful dilemma. This was a harder chapter to write because I so can see Remus being the martyr for her.
Enjoyed them getting back together--in every way!;-) Know that Malfoy's absence from prowling around is due to some clandestine mischief... Love the contrast of Wendy so open to Remus & love, but as this is set during a very turbulent time, I know I shouldn't let my guard down--but like Remus, I'm enjoying them being together as much and as long as they can--great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Malfoy cause mischief? Say it isn't so? 
LOL It is so wonderful seeing them have some happiness where everything is out in the open. Of course it's not ideal, but when is anything ideal?
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Malfoy cause mischief? Say it isn't so? LOL It is so wonderful seeing them have some happiness where everything is out in the open. Of course it's not ideal, but when is anything ideal?
Oooh, love the extra help from Clarice, and then from Severus, and of course, Remus by her side all the way--even the elf is calling him 'master':-) recognising him being in *charge* Of course Lucius would slink away, but have a feeling he'll be back, although I'm curious f how suspicious he is of Wendy's coincidental 'illness' and if he will truly punish her in an unforseen manner,whether of his own will or on behalf of Bella or Voldy... Great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
If you are going to be a little unorthodox, always good to have a healer who is a good friend and not one to ask questions or make reports. And I just loved Severus sparring with Remus. Even in a time of need, he just can't resist a little torment. Remus is finally realizing what he has now that he has almost lost it. I should have the next two chapters up shortly and then I've been doing 2 or 3 every 3-4 days or so.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
If you are going to be a little unorthodox, always good to have a healer who is a good friend and not one to ask questions or make reports. And I just loved Severus sparring with Remus. Even in a time of need, he just can't resist a little torment. Remus is finally realizing what he has now that he has almost lost it. I should have the next two chapters up shortly and then I've been doing 2 or 3 every 3-4 days or so.
Love Remus coming gently back to her and taking care of her in her time of need... I was wondering when Lucius would appear---must rush to see what happens! Great chapter, as always!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Remus is her knight in shining armor. Sometimes you really do need a Gryffindor around, don't you? And nothing Lucius to further complicate things, is there?
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Remus is her knight in shining armor. Sometimes you really do need a Gryffindor around, don't you? And nothing Lucius to further complicate things, is there?
Great dynamic chapter! It's both lovely and painful seeing Wendy reach out to him, and Remus standing his ground--for both of them, this is new territory and growing pains in different ways... love slippery Lucius and his wiley ways, although it has now led to our heroine being in true danger sooner than later; i also wished she hadn't been so impulsive and informed others of the Order before Apparating off like, following Lulu's trail--but I understand she felt she needed to strike while the iron's hot... and Remus? Where is he? Reading on!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Poor Remus gave his heart away and got so crushed. It was good to see him stand his ground. It would have been so easy to just go back, but he really needed to make her see what her actions were doing to him. It is so heartwrenching to see her sincerely reach out to him to be rebuked because he's not sure. But of course then he got sucked in to her impulsive side because he's still protective of her. So glad you are enjoying everything. It almost hurts to watch these two troubled souls try to understand each other.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Poor Remus gave his heart away and got so crushed. It was good to see him stand his ground. It would have been so easy to just go back, but he really needed to make her see what her actions were doing to him. It is so heartwrenching to see her sincerely reach out to him to be rebuked because he's not sure. But of course then he got sucked in to her impulsive side because he's still protective of her. So glad you are enjoying everything. It almost hurts to watch these two troubled souls try to understand each other.
Oooh, great scene... she's truly back up in a corner and Remus is unable at this time to forgive or have her in his life under her conditions--the battle of the wills, and Lucius has tilted it in his favour--at what cost to Wendy's equilibrium... Fantastic chapter! Both Severus and Sirius were meanie meanies, not that Remus or Wendy could cares--each one's pain seems to have numbed them to othersxxx
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
That was a rough ride, wasn't it? Poor Wendy has finally realized what it means to love and be loved and she buggered it all up. I actually thought Sirius was being pretty decent. Of course Severus can't resist rubbing salt in a wound when it's Sirius or Remus and he's just as emotionally clueless as Sirius at times, such as this when he thought she had only formed an elaborate plot to crush Remus. Nothing like those old school grudges that won't die.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
That was a rough ride, wasn't it? Poor Wendy has finally realized what it means to love and be loved and she buggered it all up. I actually thought Sirius was being pretty decent. Of course Severus can't resist rubbing salt in a wound when it's Sirius or Remus and he's just as emotionally clueless as Sirius at times, such as this when he thought she had only formed an elaborate plot to crush Remus. Nothing like those old school grudges that won't die.
Oooh, Wendy's playing with fire, Lucius is playing with fire, and I have a feeling that Remus is going to explode or cause someone else to--and all too close for comfort; both Lucius and Remus are both possessive int heir own unique ways and for different reasons but Wendy being the common object of desire/factor is *dynamite* for all *fanning self* Great chapter! *almost* afraid to read on in fear of who is going to damage who the worst, and in what ways, but the Slytherin in me can't wait--lol!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
There is lots and lots of fire being played with, isn't there? Poor, poor Remus. She has brought out the Alpha male in him. And poor Wendy definitely seems to be over her head, doesn't she?
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
There is lots and lots of fire being played with, isn't there? Poor, poor Remus. She has brought out the Alpha male in him. And poor Wendy definitely seems to be over her head, doesn't she?
Brilliant chapter! Well, an Aurors got to do what an Aurors got to do--hehe! Enjoying Wendy's dilemma's and predicament of what she now has to juggle: Lucius now, Lucius' influence and pov of them from the past and the future role she'll have to play for/with him... And poor Remus... my chest is tight with tension for his heartbreak already! I feel he'll be unable to separate ration from emotion when it comes to Wendy, if he can't bear another wizard looking at her... he'll not be able to handle her sexual relations with Lulu in for 'the greater good'part of her mission... *sighing* poor sweetie... and maybe even Wendy's hardcore professional shield might crack a wee bit... Fantastic plot-thickening chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
This chapter was so difficult. Poor Wendy saw one thing in Dumbledore's order to renew old ties, but is it really what the old man meant? Remus definitely would have seen it differently, though if he had known that she had been Lucius' mistress at one time, I'm sure he would have put his foot down. Definitely hang on as this emotional roller coaster gets going.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
This chapter was so difficult. Poor Wendy saw one thing in Dumbledore's order to renew old ties, but is it really what the old man meant? Remus definitely would have seen it differently, though if he had known that she had been Lucius' mistress at one time, I'm sure he would have put his foot down. Definitely hang on as this emotional roller coaster gets going.
Ooooh, my gut instinct tells me that her protection is not what he wants, well, not the only thing, knowing the opportunist that Lulu is -hehe! I hope her Obliviate Charms are up to parr to deter his intentions... Regardless of his toff facade, he is Voldy's top lieutenant and *wicked*--lol! Seriously, wonderful tension built with Wendy's infiltration back into the esoteric circles versus her wonderful private time with Remus... but I fear the division is going to create more harm both professionally and personally. Poor Remus, forced to be excluded more and more, yet more and more drawn together with personal needs--wonderful dynamics!ps Just want to use a Bellatrix curse on her brother --gah! What a piece of s****
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Lucius is always so much fun. It's a matter of which personality of his gets used. I normally have a soft spot for him and tend to cast him favorably, but in this case, well, evil!Lucius gets to come out and play. LOL And yes, Wendy's brother is in serious need of being cursed six ways from Sunday... Definitely poor Remus. They had a good thing going wiht their partnership and now Dumbledore threw this wrench in the works sending Wendy down a path she has to travel alone.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Lucius is always so much fun. It's a matter of which personality of his gets used. I normally have a soft spot for him and tend to cast him favorably, but in this case, well, evil!Lucius gets to come out and play. LOL And yes, Wendy's brother is in serious need of being cursed six ways from Sunday... Definitely poor Remus. They had a good thing going wiht their partnership and now Dumbledore threw this wrench in the works sending Wendy down a path she has to travel alone.
Yes, I meant to write form the last chapter that I love the platonic yet intimate relationship that Wendy has with Severus (and the irritating vile Umbridge misinterpreting them as well), and enjoyed this chapter with Remus getting all hot & bothered by seeing them together... Just hope it doesn't get too out of hand, especially arounf the full moon, he might be more impulsive than anyone wants to know, with his wolfish possessiveness being shown beyond his control. Remus is deeper and deeper in love with her, and I feel she may not quite know to what depths he's effected... but perhaps she also is beyond the point of no return? Great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thanks for the comment about Severus and Wendy. I really could not resist putting that sort of inuendo in there - it was such a Slytherin thing to do given her reasoning. And really, it gave me a chance to use the great line 'I daresay the shock would kill them'. LOL Poor Remus is just living with that seed of doubt that Sirius keeps nurturing. And you are so correct about her not realizing the depth of Remus' love and what it means. Poor girl is a bit out of her element.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thanks for the comment about Severus and Wendy. I really could not resist putting that sort of inuendo in there - it was such a Slytherin thing to do given her reasoning. And really, it gave me a chance to use the great line 'I daresay the shock would kill them'. LOL Poor Remus is just living with that seed of doubt that Sirius keeps nurturing. And you are so correct about her not realizing the depth of Remus' love and what it means. Poor girl is a bit out of her element.
Loved their love making, and yes, I love the jealousy that Sirius is feeling, enjoying him suffering a bit about what he is incapable of understandin (I know, I'm a meanie when it comes to him--hehe!) only it may lead to him truly meddling, irreparably if he can, in their relationship... So glad Wendy set Sirius straight on what he can expect if he dares to try to harm her (no, I wouldn't put it past him if he's given half the chance, his type: once a cruel bullyboy, always the inclination is there since he's never evolved beyond it, prison not helping... we'll see) Great chapter and intrigue, as always!xxx
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Sirius is such a wonderfully complex character. He's still emotionally about 20 which means you get those wonderfully petty grudges/jealousies and total lack of what being in love means. I have to admit I really enjoy him squirming and dealing with his hatred of the woman his best friend loves. And I do love writing a good Sirius/Wendy bicker because the view we always got of Sirius was through Harry's eyes, which only see the good, not understand the fact that his father and godfather were horrible bullies in school. I love Wendy being willing to stand up to him and offer to put him in his place. She's not so much a bully as just plain ruthless when someone crosses her. The whole mama bear thing, or wounded animal. The mama bear more explaining her intense hatred of Death Eaters to protect her daughter the best way possible, not trying to insinuate anything weird with her relationship with Remus. That comment kind of came out wrong, didn't it? LOL
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Sirius is such a wonderfully complex character. He's still emotionally about 20 which means you get those wonderfully petty grudges/jealousies and total lack of what being in love means. I have to admit I really enjoy him squirming and dealing with his hatred of the woman his best friend loves. And I do love writing a good Sirius/Wendy bicker because the view we always got of Sirius was through Harry's eyes, which only see the good, not understand the fact that his father and godfather were horrible bullies in school. I love Wendy being willing to stand up to him and offer to put him in his place. She's not so much a bully as just plain ruthless when someone crosses her. The whole mama bear thing, or wounded animal. The mama bear more explaining her intense hatred of Death Eaters to protect her daughter the best way possible, not trying to insinuate anything weird with her relationship with Remus. That comment kind of came out wrong, didn't it? LOL
Mmmm... enjoyed this very much, the step by step closeness that they're taking towards each other, and that Wendy is feeling freer to initiate what she would like in her life: Remus (yum!); I'm enjoying her compassion for him, as well as Remus understanding more of her feelings & emotions, background, regarding her marriage and obligations throughout her life. Had she hinted that she loves him? I'll also side with Remus that she did! Hmmn, but love can be complicated--look forward to seeing how they and others deal with it! Great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I'm glad you liked this chapter. Nice low action, but a lot of learning by both of them about each other. I just loved Remus' mindset at the end. I just love the nice quiet moments and this was precisely that. Poor star-crossed lovers dealing with these emotions in the middle of a coming storm.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I'm glad you liked this chapter. Nice low action, but a lot of learning by both of them about each other. I just loved Remus' mindset at the end. I just love the nice quiet moments and this was precisely that. Poor star-crossed lovers dealing with these emotions in the middle of a coming storm.
What a action packed, dynamic chapter--the profound scene revealing her daughter and the circumstances surrounding her loss of custody and the bitter trials she endured during and afterwards, on up unto the present point; love the very delicate balance of her warming up to and opening up to Remus and allowing him in. Hope Remus keeps strong against Sirius and his manipulation--great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
This was a very difficult moment for her to finally let him in, all the way in. This is one of those real turning points in both their relationship and her emotional growth. Let's see how that turns out. And yes, poor Remus will have to deal with a distrustful Sirius who still acts like she's the same person she was as a teenager. Hopefully Remus will realize his friend's emotional growth got stunted at about age 20 thanks to a stint in Azkaban.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
This was a very difficult moment for her to finally let him in, all the way in. This is one of those real turning points in both their relationship and her emotional growth. Let's see how that turns out. And yes, poor Remus will have to deal with a distrustful Sirius who still acts like she's the same person she was as a teenager. Hopefully Remus will realize his friend's emotional growth got stunted at about age 20 thanks to a stint in Azkaban.
Enjoyed their very tentative getting to know each other a bit better only to have the ring become a deterrent and regress the momentum--love the mystery and tension being added onto to Wendy's dubious nature and clandestine actions--great chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thanks. While they are getting to know each other, there is still much about her past that poor Remus doesn't know or understand. They are both emotionally damaged, in different ways, and it's going to take a lot of effort to work through that. There is a lot of mystery and intrigue here. Rather than doing the JKR have Harry in Dumbledore's office for a lesson in phoenix 101 so the end of the book seems a little less deus ex machina, I've tried to be a bit more obtuse since the audience here is not 10 year olds. I like to think of Wendy as a bit like Dumbledore - dabbled in the Dark Arts as a youth, realized what it can do to a person, but still realizes that sort of thing has its place in the real world, that the world is shades of grey and not black and white.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thanks. While they are getting to know each other, there is still much about her past that poor Remus doesn't know or understand. They are both emotionally damaged, in different ways, and it's going to take a lot of effort to work through that. There is a lot of mystery and intrigue here. Rather than doing the JKR have Harry in Dumbledore's office for a lesson in phoenix 101 so the end of the book seems a little less deus ex machina, I've tried to be a bit more obtuse since the audience here is not 10 year olds. I like to think of Wendy as a bit like Dumbledore - dabbled in the Dark Arts as a youth, realized what it can do to a person, but still realizes that sort of thing has its place in the real world, that the world is shades of grey and not black and white.
Glad she hexed Sirius--it's the least the arrogant, hypocritical prat deserves--yes, I'll never forgive or forget how he treated Severus Looking forward to Remus and Wendy's next assignment together. Great chapter! Love the Order atmosphere and dynamics & dialogue of all involved!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Wasn't that a wonderful moment? LOL Everyone always threatens to do it, but no one ever does. I really enjoy stories that look at the events from an adult POV. They can be so much fun to reinterpret events. I'm glad your enjoying all the adult interaction.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Wasn't that a wonderful moment? LOL Everyone always threatens to do it, but no one ever does. I really enjoy stories that look at the events from an adult POV. They can be so much fun to reinterpret events. I'm glad your enjoying all the adult interaction.
Great dynamic chapter--loved the tactics & strategy planning, the background istory of why she hates werewolves and riff in her family, her bitterness and strong sense for justice at all cost, confidence & skill to get the job done; her strength and determination and independence is wonderful to experience through Remus' eyes--enjoy him being unnerved by her but also him slowly standing his ground and starting to assert himself--poor, dear sweetie! Wonderful conflict and development truly entrenching the reader into the heart of the OotP era--yum! Brilliant!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thank you. One of the problems with an OC is that you don't want to dump an entire background right in the beginning. There is more coming on events that shaped her life an opinions, but seeing the big one about the werewolves really helps poor remus understand her a bit better. She's just thrown him so far off balance, I don't think he entirely knows how to react. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thank you. One of the problems with an OC is that you don't want to dump an entire background right in the beginning. There is more coming on events that shaped her life an opinions, but seeing the big one about the werewolves really helps poor remus understand her a bit better. She's just thrown him so far off balance, I don't think he entirely knows how to react. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
OMG, a cliffie--poor Remus! *yes, I'm a hopeless Lupin fangirl, so I'm having a heart attack in fear for him* Brilliant narrative, rich and detailed with all the twists & turns and descriptive background for a mystery/detective-rich plot and thrilling dynamics--love the banter between Wendy and Remus--love her bluntness and strength! So many things, but love Sirius' suspicious nature, unable to let the past go; Moody stands by her--yes! Again, thank you for such a rich, wonderful, dynamic tale!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I really love cliffhangers. Some of them won't be quite as impactful in this case because the story is going up several chapters at a time, but there are times I can't resist picking one that's particularly good to be the last in the update round. I have had so much fun with Sirius in this one. He's got this huge emotional rift between wanting his friend to find happiness and knowing the object of his friend's affection used to be best friends with Bellatrix. While Moody, Tonks and Kingsley and Dumbledore trust her, I think it's going to take something huge for Sirius to ever reach that point.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I really love cliffhangers. Some of them won't be quite as impactful in this case because the story is going up several chapters at a time, but there are times I can't resist picking one that's particularly good to be the last in the update round. I have had so much fun with Sirius in this one. He's got this huge emotional rift between wanting his friend to find happiness and knowing the object of his friend's affection used to be best friends with Bellatrix. While Moody, Tonks and Kingsley and Dumbledore trust her, I think it's going to take something huge for Sirius to ever reach that point.
Hahaha! Oooh, I love Severus' Slytherin tendencies being flexed--poor Remus, Severus just can't help himself and be the first to reveal Remus' 'condition'--hehe!Seriously, thank you for this gem of a tale--so happy to discover a Remus/OC tale, so rich with narrative detail and canon insight--yum! Look forward to catching up on this lovely, intriguing story! I love Wendy's no nonsense approach to all of them and her straightforwardness, and of course, love it that she's Slytherin with a conflicted, complicated past, and an Auror--yes! Wonderful! She despises werewolves... Hmmmn, Remus will have his work cut out for him in more ways than one *can't wait*
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I really could not resist having Severus drop the bomb of Remus' secret. He's done it before, and this time no one made him promise not to tell. Since I see you've been through the first 4 chapters at least, I know you've learned some more about Wendy's history.I know Lupin fics are few and far between so I hope that you really enjoy this. I have such a soft spot for the poor man and want to kick JKR soundly for what she did to him.
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Yes, I will never ever forgive her for killing him off after all the horrid things he'd been through in his life ( I see his attack by Greyback with peadophilic overtones--gah! poor man), so thank you for this wonderful tale allowing more of Lupin to exist & be experienced for all of us Lupin lovers!xxx
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
To rectify JKR's wrong, I wrote a fic for a LJ exchange a couple years back, but never got it posted here. Later today look for 'To Move a Mountain, Move a Pebble'. I'm also peeved about what she did to Snape, but I had a huge epiphany on his outcome last week that I've been playing with. I just hate that she killed off the most interesting characters.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I really could not resist having Severus drop the bomb of Remus' secret. He's done it before, and this time no one made him promise not to tell. Since I see you've been through the first 4 chapters at least, I know you've learned some more about Wendy's history.I know Lupin fics are few and far between so I hope that you really enjoy this. I have such a soft spot for the poor man and want to kick JKR soundly for what she did to him.
Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)
Yes, I will never ever forgive her for killing him off after all the horrid things he'd been through in his life ( I see his attack by Greyback with peadophilic overtones--gah! poor man), so thank you for this wonderful tale allowing more of Lupin to exist & be experienced for all of us Lupin lovers!xxx
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
To rectify JKR's wrong, I wrote a fic for a LJ exchange a couple years back, but never got it posted here. Later today look for 'To Move a Mountain, Move a Pebble'. I'm also peeved about what she did to Snape, but I had a huge epiphany on his outcome last week that I've been playing with. I just hate that she killed off the most interesting characters.
OMG......this story is brilliant. It is written incredibly well and just flows. So good to get a mature grown up tale and keeping them pesky kids to a minimum is a real bonus. I've said it before but I only became interested in HP after POA and the deliciously flawed damaged men Jo introduced.....Remus and Sirius....oh and I realised that Alan Rickman was in the films. Not that Severus wasn't affected also. All of a sudden she was writing for women of a certain age....ie MY age! I like Wendy I think. Not too sure about her methods and scruples but one just needs to watch the Bond movies to realise that sex has often been used as a tool in gathering intelligence.I really appreciate the frequent updates too. Well done. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thanks for the response. Even though Jo kind of waved her hands at the adult characters, almost like they were a bit of an afterthought to her, she really did make them so wonderful and real, I don't think she realized what she created with them. Wendy is every bit as complex as the others. The biggest 'problem' between her and the others is that she really was raised in a different world, a world that does not have the same morals. I hope you enjoy her growth as she finds her humanity. Funny that it takes a werewolf to teach her that. Dumbledore is once again a wise man who can see things in others they don't see themselves. Thanks again for the review and I'm glad you are enjoying. About every 3 days or so I try to put up 2-3 chapters.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Thanks for the response. Even though Jo kind of waved her hands at the adult characters, almost like they were a bit of an afterthought to her, she really did make them so wonderful and real, I don't think she realized what she created with them. Wendy is every bit as complex as the others. The biggest 'problem' between her and the others is that she really was raised in a different world, a world that does not have the same morals. I hope you enjoy her growth as she finds her humanity. Funny that it takes a werewolf to teach her that. Dumbledore is once again a wise man who can see things in others they don't see themselves. Thanks again for the review and I'm glad you are enjoying. About every 3 days or so I try to put up 2-3 chapters.
Thank you for writing a story giving Remus the dignity and respect he never seemed to get in canon--imho, he helped Harry all through PoA in soooo many ways, and yet, only Sirius is credited with making an impact (Patronus Charm, Harry? Who taught you that?) Anyway, enough venting about that. Loved your story! Thank you!& OC!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Like you it did tick me off that Harry kicked Remus to the curb once he discovered that Sirius, his official godfather, was not guilty of the crime he was sentenced for. Yeah, I understand he's this link to your parents, but *thwap* Remus was their friend too. And he treated Harry like a son. I have a hard time believing Harry the orphan would not want to maintain a connection with Remus as well, but I guess JKR decided he was disposable and 'unimportant' or just one too many character to fuss with. Still ticked with her for killing Remus off, but that's been vented on already. LOL Thanks again for enjoying this and giving a lonely canon/OC fic some love. :)
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Like you it did tick me off that Harry kicked Remus to the curb once he discovered that Sirius, his official godfather, was not guilty of the crime he was sentenced for. Yeah, I understand he's this link to your parents, but *thwap* Remus was their friend too. And he treated Harry like a son. I have a hard time believing Harry the orphan would not want to maintain a connection with Remus as well, but I guess JKR decided he was disposable and 'unimportant' or just one too many character to fuss with. Still ticked with her for killing Remus off, but that's been vented on already. LOL Thanks again for enjoying this and giving a lonely canon/OC fic some love. :)
Lovely ending to a dynamic journey--love it that forgiveness and love win in the end!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I had so much fun with this one. Remus gets to be the hero because he is a werewolf, but then he can't communicate with the others very well. Thank goodness for Wolfsbane so he could be there to be the hero. Such a sweet and happy moment for the two of them. Here's to hoping it lasts.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I had so much fun with this one. Remus gets to be the hero because he is a werewolf, but then he can't communicate with the others very well. Thank goodness for Wolfsbane so he could be there to be the hero. Such a sweet and happy moment for the two of them. Here's to hoping it lasts.
Love Severus joining in, and Wendy giving Bella soem of her own medicine. Wendy's deep in it, and poor Remus is subjected to his curse at such a vital time *biting nails* Great chapter!xxx
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
It was nice to see Severus doing what he could. And I so loved Wendy being able to give Bella some of her own. I was never happier than when Molly took Bella down. Poor Remus just going utterly insane trying to figure this one out.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
It was nice to see Severus doing what he could. And I so loved Wendy being able to give Bella some of her own. I was never happier than when Molly took Bella down. Poor Remus just going utterly insane trying to figure this one out.
She almost got away--stupid Lucius! Arghh! Great chapter! Trapped!
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I know. It was so close, wasn't it? She did everything she could to theoretically keep herself alive and he had to go and 'rescue' her.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
I know. It was so close, wasn't it? She did everything she could to theoretically keep herself alive and he had to go and 'rescue' her.
Hmmn... several factors are affecting and effecting her. Will Remus follow? His patience seems to be reaching an end, and Wendy is plunging on into the nest of snakes/Death Eaters
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Poor Remus, feeling so helpless, trying to hard. He knwos that she's about to step in it, big time and it's like he's watching that train wreck in slow motion. Hopefully he can make her see some sense.
Response from phoenix (Author of Werewolves and Serpents)
Poor Remus, feeling so helpless, trying to hard. He knwos that she's about to step in it, big time and it's like he's watching that train wreck in slow motion. Hopefully he can make her see some sense.