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Affected Recollections

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Affected Recollections

little beloved

75 Reviews   |   75 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Humor Drama Romance Alternate Universe General post-HBP/HBP compliant Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 12,473 Words 6 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Original Character

Hermione Granger is charged with the task of preparing Severus Snape's memories for trial.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6


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10/10

braye27

I should think that fourteen months will be a cake walk for our Severus and Hermione.  And then I am certain that the hot steamy sex on a very regular basis for the rest of their lives will begin with a determination not seen since the founding of Hogwarts.Thank you for this adorable story!!!  Beth

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

There's nothing like the promise of hot steamy action to make fourteen months pass VERY quickly. ;) Thank you as always, Beth. You are a joy! LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

There's nothing like the promise of hot steamy action to make fourteen months pass VERY quickly. ;) Thank you as always, Beth. You are a joy! LB x

10/10

mikimoto

If they work as a team, then two years is not a very long time.  They would have to liquidate his house and set up his future business (choose the product offerings and find the customers).  That would put a lot on Hermione to be the hands and feet for everything, but it would give her something to do.There is something about having a known endpoint that is very freeing.  It is similar to the way a deadline can overcome procrastination.I also think there is something more to be said about the key plot device of the memories.  In essence he created a false reality that was indistinguishable from the true reality.  It was almost like a psychosis where he splits off part of himself to oversee the process and make sure he keeps track of what is and isn't real.  It can't be like a trunk full of fake memories where he rummages through and pulls out what he needs at the time or they would be distinguishable as "fake".  For them not to be distinguishable by others, then have to be not distinguishable to himself while still maintaining some kind of role as referee.  The difficulty of doing something like this accounts for the point you raised of "no one does this."  Not that we know.  That falls into the category of the perfect crime.  You can't tell if it has been committed, because if you can, it isn't perfect.Yes, yes.  I know it is just a story.  However, I know a number of people who struggle with schizophrenia and they experience many things that feel like reality that are not objectively real.  So I look at Severus as being like a schizophrenic who can somehow not be confused and pulled in by the manufactured realities living alongside his nonmanufactured realities.

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

You know, that really is a very, very interesting way of looking at it. That's kind of what was in my mind - a Severus who has this incredible ability to compartmentalise different parts of his life - in this case, they true and false memories. It would certainly explain how he has kept so well and sane in Azkaban, this ability to escape his own mind and engage in exercises of the mind. Thank you, my dear, for raising such an interesting issue, and for all your kind reviews. More Denial tomorrow! LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

You know, that really is a very, very interesting way of looking at it. That's kind of what was in my mind - a Severus who has this incredible ability to compartmentalise different parts of his life - in this case, they true and false memories. It would certainly explain how he has kept so well and sane in Azkaban, this ability to escape his own mind and engage in exercises of the mind. Thank you, my dear, for raising such an interesting issue, and for all your kind reviews. More Denial tomorrow! LB x

10/10

sunny33

Love to see the front page of the Prophet! :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oooh, so would I. :) There's a fanart project in that! LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oooh, so would I. :) There's a fanart project in that! LB x

10/10

Bingowings

Severus wondering where he should position himself made me chuckle.

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

hee. This Severus was fun to write. :) x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

hee. This Severus was fun to write. :) x

10/10

Bingowings

I remember this one! I love Albert. 

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oh, me too. He is a topping fellow. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oh, me too. He is a topping fellow. :) LB x

0/10

The Contessa

Dear little beloved.It was a pleasure to re-read this story.I fell in love with it all over again.

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Ah, dear Contessa. You are very kind, and it is an absolute joy to know you enjoyed it. Many thanks for your kind words. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Ah, dear Contessa. You are very kind, and it is an absolute joy to know you enjoyed it. Many thanks for your kind words. LB x

10/10

ClayPotter

Spectacular ending to a marvelous story. Thanks for re-posting it. It was just as much fun the second time around.

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thank you very, very much, Clay. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thank you very, very much, Clay. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) LB x

10/10

just harry

Great story not happy with the end. they should have given him time served, I loved youir AN you tied it up nicely,  I still have Denial to read and hopefully a new story from you. 

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

LOL. I wrote Affected Recollections in four days for the SS/HG exchange, and I always feared being lynched for the ending! :) I have another two short stories, which I must dust off and put online. And you have LOTS more Denial coming up. Thanks for your review! LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

LOL. I wrote Affected Recollections in four days for the SS/HG exchange, and I always feared being lynched for the ending! :) I have another two short stories, which I must dust off and put online. And you have LOTS more Denial coming up. Thanks for your review! LB x

10/10

sunny33

I love Albert.  Just saying. :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oh, me too! I adore him. LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oh, me too! I adore him. LB x

10/10

sunny33

LOL Love their interactions. :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

They are SUCH good fun to write. :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

They are SUCH good fun to write. :)

10/10

just harry

I cried right along with Hermione, this chapter was so touching and sad and hopeful all at the same time.  Great writihg as always LB , lookong forward to thr trial and hopefully his release, 

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Aw, thank you very much, jh! Last chapter up tomorrow. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Aw, thank you very much, jh! Last chapter up tomorrow. :) LB x

10/10

braye27

“No! Wait!” he cried, striding across the room and grasping her by the arm.OMG!  I was so afraid he was going to let her leave without letting on that he wanted to have a future that included her.  Good for Hermione for giving him her address so he would know that she hoped for a future that includes him, too.Thank you for this fabulous, wonderful, beautiful chapter!!!  Beth

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Aw, you're welcome, and thank you for your lovely review. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Aw, you're welcome, and thank you for your lovely review. :) LB x

10/10

braye27

Reading this chapter made me feel all warm and fuzzy. It's so much fun to be privy to their thoughts and conversations as they do their best to guage the amount of interest each might feel for the other.I wish Severus would say my name in his lovely speaking voice.  I'm off to the next chapter!Beth

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thanks, Beth! And oh, me too! He has a pure chocolate voice. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thanks, Beth! And oh, me too! He has a pure chocolate voice. :) LB x

10/10

sunny33

LOL. Now that's a bombshell.And welcome back! :D

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

sunny! It's great to hear from you. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

sunny! It's great to hear from you. :) LB x

10/10

Bingowings

Such an awesome little story. Well done, l b!

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thanks very much, Bingo. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thanks very much, Bingo. :) LB x

10/10

Bingowings

Oh my goodness ... This chapter really tugs at the heart. How sad!

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Making readers cry is a great love of mine. ;) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Making readers cry is a great love of mine. ;) LB x

10/10

ClayPotter

I know exactly how she feels. The mere thought of hearing him say my name in person sends chills up my spine.

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oh, me too, Clay, me too! :D Thanks for your review. :)LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Oh, me too, Clay, me too! :D Thanks for your review. :)LB x

10/10

just harry

Oh how I love the banter between them, They are a good match.  Great chapter.

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thank you, jh! More soon, LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thank you, jh! More soon, LB x

10/10

Bingowings

Gotta love Severus in this chapter!

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Indeed! LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Indeed! LB x

10/10

Bingowings

The doe scene ... i'd forgotten it was so funny. Well done

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

It was so much fun to write. :) LB x

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

It was so much fun to write. :) LB x

10/10

sunny33

A sudoku race?  Between those two that's damn near foreplay! :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Most definitely! :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Most definitely! :)

10/10

sunny33

“Yes, but sometimes even utter bastards are innocent,”  very true. :)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thanks, sunny!:)

Response from little beloved (Author of Affected Recollections)

Thanks, sunny!:)

0/10

phoenix

LOL I'm sorry, I just found the note at the end utterly hilarious. I know that so many folks want a story wrapped up with the happily ever after broadcast clearly, but I am more than willing to imagine it. Poor Severus getting thrown under the Knight Bus like that. Ungrateful bastards. But at least he now has a reason to live.

0/10

phoenix

Oh, Severus, finally showing some human emotion. Come out of that closet and enjoy life.

0/10

phoenix

Ah, the shameless flirting. See, Severus, there is something on the outside other than your wand.

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