As You Never Were
TeaOli5 Reviews | 6.0/10 (5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
The afterlife can be what one makes of it – but only if one is actually dead.
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I think I see, it takes a while sometimes, this is before " The only Ones That know " I think, maybe. I love it anyway.
smoke daddy and real daddy. Really, you are living up to it, mixing the worlds and all laws of the universe.Where do the childrens names come from?well, I do not really get behind the story, might be reading it some more times. But what I understand is both mysterious and fun.
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
I'm sorry. I'm not in the habit of answering questions that can be answered either by following the hints in the story or by doing a bit of research because I don't like to spoil myteries for other readers who, like me, enjoy discovering things for themselves.I'm glad that even though you don't support my story (the idiom "get behind [idea]" means "to support [idea]"), you were still able to find parts of it enjoyable. 
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
I'm sorry. I'm not in the habit of answering questions that can be answered either by following the hints in the story or by doing a bit of research because I don't like to spoil myteries for other readers who, like me, enjoy discovering things for themselves.I'm glad that even though you don't support my story (the idiom "get behind [idea]" means "to support [idea]"), you were still able to find parts of it enjoyable.
It took me a while, but I finally got it! :)
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
Phew! I wasn't too cryptic, then?
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
Phew! I wasn't too cryptic, then?
I love the quirkiness of this. So. Very. Unique. Well done!
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
Thank you very much.
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
Thank you very much.
I had to re-read The Only Ones Who Know but I still don't understand what's going on.
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
There is a third part to the story. Some who read elsewhere understood after the final instalment was posted; others did not. So, I can't promise it will become any clearer at the end.
Response from snapify52 (Reviewer)
Ah well, I guess some of us are just denser than others. ;) You've certainly created a melancholy and mysterious mood with those stories.
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
I don't think it has anything to do with anyone being dense; it's just I like a puzzle. I'm glad you find my mood to be mysterious and melancholy, however. That's precisely what I'd been aiming for.
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
There is a third part to the story. Some who read elsewhere understood after the final instalment was posted; others did not. So, I can't promise it will become any clearer at the end.
Response from snapify52 (Reviewer)
Ah well, I guess some of us are just denser than others. ;) You've certainly created a melancholy and mysterious mood with those stories.
Response from TeaOli (Author of As You Never Were)
I don't think it has anything to do with anyone being dense; it's just I like a puzzle. I'm glad you find my mood to be mysterious and melancholy, however. That's precisely what I'd been aiming for.