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You Have Your Father's Eyes
snapefan52019 Reviews | 7.89/10 (19 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
Harry's perspective on the aftermath of the final battle. He comforts Hermione after tragedy strikes and gains a new perspective of things that happened after the battle ended.
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I am an almost 40 year old mother of three, and sometimes writer. I adore the SSHG pairing, but will read a good story with Lucius or Draco. I'm gradually getting my stories betaed and posted on here.
Right now, I am probably the one-shot queen, but eventually I will get my chapter stories betaed and posted on here. Grammar is not my forte, but my extensive knowledge of photography and biology don't help much in the writing world.
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Reviews for You Have Your Father's Eyes
Yup, still makes me cry:-))
awww, short and sweet, but in a very nice way. I really liked it (even though I don't typically like stories where Snape dies). great job! :)
So very sweet and tragic at the same time. I like the choice of telling this from Harry's POV. Very unconventional but powerful.
This was so bittersweet! I love it. Please do another like this one, and Damn! people enjoys killing Snape.
Sad, and quite lovely, amazingly so given the compactness of your telling. What a tragic thing to happen to Snape, but at least you've allowed him to receive some solace and love before he was murdered--in which you were more merciful than JKR. One tiny bit of concrit: I had to reread the last sentence. Were I your beta, I'd have suggested "I said lovingly to Anna as I placed her back in Hermione's arms."
Sad, but lovely. Thanks for writing!
Sad and bittersweet, but hopeful all the same. I hope little Anna will grow up healthily and beautifully. Thank you.
I wonder what her name will be? What a beautiful tale. Great last line. It brought tears to my eyes. Well done.
How sad, Severus did not see her.
OK crying now...I Love this, well done, well done indeed!! WOW!!
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you ;)
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you ;)
Finally! Harry has been waiting forever to say that to someone instead of hearing it himself, lol. This was heartbreaking. I loved how Hermione was vague about the father being out of the picture, but Harry automatically filled in the blanks how he expected them to be. Still, it seemed that Hermione had kind of tuned out on life, and this baby gives her new purpose. In my mind, it all turns out okay.
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you :)That is how I think of the story in my mind as well. Not HEA, but hope after tragedy.
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you :)That is how I think of the story in my mind as well. Not HEA, but hope after tragedy.
Lovely and bittersweet. Though I do have to pout a little that you had him survive the snakebite only to be struck down in a courtroom melee.The final line is fantastic.
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you :)I had actually come up with the idea for the whole story from that one line, and wrote it in reverse. And I am a big fan of HEA, but my muse wouldn't let me drop this story idea.
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you :)I had actually come up with the idea for the whole story from that one line, and wrote it in reverse. And I am a big fan of HEA, but my muse wouldn't let me drop this story idea.
Poignant. Brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful.
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you :)
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you :)
What a sad tale and yet beautiful.
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Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
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Awwww... A Little Snape... So lovely!! :)
Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
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Response from snapefan520 (Author of You Have Your Father's Eyes)
Thank you :)
exquisite!
So sad. At least he left something behind.
so beautiful and bittersweet. thanks for sharing!