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All the Luck in the World
Noelani Sitara5 Reviews | 5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
He never should have stayed - he should have known better, kept his mind focused, instead of...
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You know, for a little while, even though I'd read the character list, I really did think we were talking about Molly, and I was going to praise the unusual pairing! LOL I'm silly! This was a great little snapshot of Sev, and I really do think I prefer it with Hermione! LOL
Oh, wow, I was fooled. I was thinking, "Yuck. He likes Molly?" and then I realized it was her. Lovely. I feel sorry for him, but in my mind, I'll pretend that she is secretly feeling the same thing. Teehee.
Response from Noelani Sitara (Author of All the Luck in the World)
hahaha SS/MW is just a little too much for anyone to handle, imo. Thanks for the review!
Oh, that's so sad!!! *sniff* She really didn't notice his little slip? Really? I'd think that she would be a tad more observant. I'd like to see another piece from her POV... maybe set a few years later, please??? :)
Response from Noelani Sitara (Author of All the Luck in the World)
You know, that's a good idea...I just might do that sometime since I've sort of been thinking about it. :) Thanks!
Response from GinnyW (Reviewer)
*cough cough* A touch happier ending next time??? PLEASE! HA HA HA!
oh no i wish there were a part where she does stop being married and he can final have her will you carry on or is it it?
Response from Noelani Sitara (Author of All the Luck in the World)
Thank you for reviewing, and no, this is a one-shot. At least for now.
very nice torture bit there. The horrors of not acting, or at least speaking up when you are interested in someone.... I like this.