The Real Thing
linlawless14 Reviews | 14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Severus is disturbed when he hears his wife in the throes of ecstasy ...
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linlawless
Member Since 2010 | 34 Stories | Favorited by 194 | 139 Reviews Written | 1,164 Review Responses
I'm a forty-something American woman who is addicted to the SSHG pairing, relatively new to this fandom. I'm also considering starting some original fiction soon...
Check out the story I co-wrote with Remarkable -- it's called "Hidden Attractions" and (as soon as it's through the queue) it's archived under the penname remarkable_linlawless.
For those who are interested, I've got two WIPs at my website (which I will eventually post here, but not until I have a complete draft). It's easy and free to join the website, so I hope you'll visit!
I am honored that my story, Witchy Woman, has been selected as a featured story for September 2010. Better yet, this honor came with the very awesome banner at the top of this post!
Here's a couple of banners my friend Atuliel made for the two WIPs at my website:
Reviews for The Real Thing
LOL I can just imagine the look on his face. LOL
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Heeeee! That's quite a visual, isn't it?! Thanks for the review :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Heeeee! That's quite a visual, isn't it?! Thanks for the review :D
could have been me...I share everything -except my chocolat But when it is so stimulating. .well, I would make an exception. I can picture him and his horror! THREEsome! She betrays him with TWO women!! never!not she. not if he is doing is duty.
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL! Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL! Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review! :)
Tee hee ... oh Severus, you really must learn the art of TRUST! 
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
He really should! But I imagine it's tough with his history. :P
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I can so relate, actually.
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
He really should! But I imagine it's tough with his history. :P
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
I can so relate, actually.
Tee hee ... oh Severus, you really must learn the art of TRUST!
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
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Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
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Bwahaha! I believe I have had a moment similar to that. *giggle*Thank you for sharing~
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Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL!!! I wouldn't mind having a moment like that, I don't think. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL!!! I wouldn't mind having a moment like that, I don't think. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Now if we just combine the two, chocolate coated Severus.
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Yummmmmm ... Thanks for the review! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Yummmmmm ... Thanks for the review! :)
She likes her chocolate the way she likes her men: dark, strong, and bitter! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL! Just the way I like my men chocolate! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL! Just the way I like my men chocolate! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Hahaha! Wonderful romping around with chocolate and three of my favourite ladies + a jealous Sev ready to flay and take on three witches at one time (a sequel , please? Triad plus one *powerful* wizard? hehe!)-- yes, I demand his response! Sweet, lovely work!
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL, I wish I could draw -- or had any artistic ability whatsoever -- I can picture the expression on his face so clearly, but I would never be able to get it to look right ...Thanks for the review, and glad you enjoyed it! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
LOL, I wish I could draw -- or had any artistic ability whatsoever -- I can picture the expression on his face so clearly, but I would never be able to get it to look right ...Thanks for the review, and glad you enjoyed it! :)
LOL!!!!! Oh, assumptions we make when we only hear what's happening.Brilliant, lin.
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Thanks, Tea! So glad you enjoyed! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Thanks, Tea! So glad you enjoyed! :D
Excellent! I can just picture the look on Severus's face
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Hehehee! Thank you! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Hehehee! Thank you! :D
Hee! This is delicious!
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Thank you! Glad you liked! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Thank you! Glad you liked! :D
And food is not foreplay? :PExcellent, entertaining, and heart-warming. Thank you for writing it!
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! :D
I think she meant to say its better with sex. They should give it a try, lol.
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Heeeeeeee! Perhaps they should! ;) Thanks! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Heeeeeeee! Perhaps they should! ;) Thanks! :D
Ooh that's wonderful! maybe Severus can persuade them to share?
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Heeeeee! If he uses that voice, he probably can! :D Thanks for reviewing! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of The Real Thing)
Heeeeee! If he uses that voice, he probably can! :D Thanks for reviewing! :D