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Where Your Loyalties Lie Chapter 2: Chapter Two - Ensnare the Senses
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Where Your Loyalties Lie

1: An Odd Place to Meet

2: Chapter Two - Ensnare the Senses

3: Chapter Three - I Don't Remember Asking You to Show Off

4: Chapter Four - The Wrong Place at the Wrong Time

5: Chapter Five - A Question of Concentration and Mind Power

6: Bewitch the Mind

7: The Second Time You Have Spoken Out of Turn

8: I Know You Like to Feel... Involved

9: Therein Lies My Great Value

10: Fascinating Though Your Social Life Undoubtedly Is

11: You Will Now Divide Into Pairs

12: No Thought for the Consequences

13: I Thought We'd Keep This Private

14: A Habit of Turning Up in Unexpected Places

15: People Will Think You're Up to Something

16: A Set of Suspicious Circumstances

17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways

Chapter Two - Ensnare the Senses

Where Your Loyalties Lie

Chapter 2 of 17

Advanced Smut Making

Isolde finally gets chance to examine her new purchase

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Smut Hogwarts Castle 51,185 Words 17 Chapters WIP
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Chapter Two – Ensnare the Senses

It was a long walk back to Hogwarts, especially whilst battling with the merciless winter wind, but, for once, Isolde was thankful for it. She needed to think, and she needed to think alone. Forward planning meant that her fellow Slytherins already knew she wasn't returning to the school with them; she had fully intended to flick shamelessly through her new purchase, teasing herself with glimpses of filth...of rough, ink stained hands running down tender skin.

But a less appetising topic took precedence in the forefront of her mind: he had seen her; he had known she was there all along. A part of her chastised herself for her naivety; she didn't know much of her professor, but she should have known by now that he did not miss a thing. Nothing got past him.

Her stomach lurched with uncertainties: how long had he been there before he had spoken? Had he seen what she had been reading from his towering vantage point? The more she tortured herself with possibilities, the more thankful she was for the extensive walk back to the castle. If he had gleaned even a speck of the smut which infected the pages of her book, she would need to compose an explanation...an alibi. And yet, if he had seen her, as her back was turned, slip the delicious prose into her cotton robes, there would be no point.

He was biding his time, no doubt.

Even when Isolde had reached the refuge of her dormitory...had slipped the damning evidence into her bedside table drawer...her heartbeat refused to compose itself.

Reaching down to its bewitching form, she pulled it out of the drawer again, simultaneously withdrawing her wand from her robes. The delectable image caught her gaze immediately as her wand tip shook with uncertainty.

Just say it, she scolded herself. Incendio... incendio... inden...

Isolde let out a frustrated cry at her own spinelessness before tossing the book back into the drawer and kicking it shut.

oOoOoOo

The week flittered by in a churning mass of essays, foul weather, Quidditch related excitement and anticipation for the upcoming Christmas holiday. The passing days imbued Isolde with enough confidence that, by Friday, she was once again consumed by curiosity for what lay between the crisp white pages of the book. It had remained incarcerated in her sock drawer, hidden from view by a gaudy collection of knee highs. If she were to be logical about the situation, having smut in her possession was not forbidden at Hogwarts. In fact, if it cut down the number of forbidden encounters in disused classrooms and hidden corridors, smut was encouraged. Furthermore, Snape had shown no indication that he had seen anything when he had taken their NEWT Potions class on Thursday.

The coast, it seemed, was clear.

She had chosen Friday night for her initiation into the wonderful world of The Potions Master's Mistress because if she became addicted, and this was a severe possibility, she could sleep in. True enough, the following morning heralded the much anticipated showdown between Gryffindor and Slytherin on the Quidditch pitch, but Isolde had little time for the sport. Quidditch reminded her of unpleasant evenings with her father. He would obtain tickets from work, dragging Isolde along so that he appeared a 'family' man. Before every game, he and his 'friends' would visit The Mewling Quim, an incredibly seedy (albeit expensive) victualling house in Knockturn Alley, eventually arriving at the stadium so inebriated that everything remotely female became a target. Abuse would be shrieked at various players, and as Isolde grew into a fine young woman, her father's delightful friends started to get a little too close for comfort. True enough, Hogwarts Quidditch hardly incorporated the drinking element, but the house rivalry still seemed, to Isolde, to be a little counterproductive to the study atmosphere of the school.

Ignoring the excited chatter of her fellow students, Isolde sent a quick goodnight to her friends before bundling herself up in the squashy four poster she had loved since first year. Once again, she cradled the illicit tome in her fingers, running her thumb gently down one side of the two-dimensional Potions Master. It was uncanny; just how much it resembled him.

Taking a deep breath, she opened the book to page one:

The classroom was aflame with tangible apprehension, the air thick with vapours rising ominously from copper and pewter rims.

He was no stranger to them...it was not as if they had not seen him many times before...but each lesson with the Potions Master was a blindfolded meal, like dancing on glass. He kept them on their toes, never knowing what to expect from one minute to the next, and yet, they yearned for more. And yet, they feared him.

One particular student stood in thrilled silence by her desk...on the front row, of course. She liked to be as dangerously close to him as possible. Most of all, she cherished every heavy footfall as he strode with disguised purpose from the back of the room; the very sound of the door crashing open sent exhilarated shivers down her spine...knowing that he was there, that he was approaching her at the front of the room where his desk stood.

That desk: she had imagined it so many times. It featured in her waking dreams as her head lay on her pillow each night...a cold, welcoming surface for her bare back as her Potions Master pushed her slowly backwards against the wood-grain to explore her further, to pull her alabaster knees apart with his large, commanding hands...

Isolde felt her abdomen flutter as she lay safely inside her jade-coloured covers, the dark drapes concealing the beads of sweat which had unceremoniously crept out of her forehead during her moonlit read.

This was a superb purchase, she thought to herself, as she silently thanked Merlin for not setting it alight a week earlier. Only four paragraphs in, and she had been reduced to a heap of desires and perspiration.

And she could not ignore just how much the dark iniquity described inside the covers resembled her very own Potions Master: Professor Snape.

Oh Lord. Just the whisper of his name in her mind did unspeakable things to her insides.

Isolde smiled softly at her own foolishness, and yet she could not help but wonder...as she often did...how many other girlish forms lay in their beds, at that very moment, imagining long taffeta robes grazing their bare thighs, black imposing eyes watching their nipples harden in the cool dungeon air.

Isolde had long resigned to the idea that she could not be the only one plagued with lascivious thoughts regarding the Potions Master. He epitomised tall, dark and mysterious. Encapsulated in their own little caves of emerald, scarlet, buttercup and periwinkle velvet, did the Potions Master's other admirers find themselves dreaming of his lips, which would surely taste of dark chocolate and Firewhisky, encompassing their own? Did long calloused fingers dance upon their tender skin, brushing against them with the dexterity and skill of a talented musician? Were they, like she, currently absorbed in the pages of The Potions Master's Mistress in a futile attempt to relieve themselves of this pent up desire for their teacher?

Isolde consumed every word, every sentence, every cliché until the enchanted candles that floated within the closed curtains of her four poster morphed into spluttering stubs. Tiredness clawed at her eyes, but she was too absorbed by Mercer's delicate prose to put the book down...

"Miss Spurr."

His voice danced within the howling of the bitter wind. Eleanor shifted on her feet, turning her head to face her pursuer. Caught by the wind's talons, his cloak flashed angrily about him, snapping in the weather's onslaught. His usually immaculate obsidian hair was a wild mane around pale features. His long stride broke the distance between them, long fingers eventually capturing hers. Eleanor could not draw her gaze from the intensity of his dark orbs nor pull away when his soft lips brushed against hers...

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60 Reviews  |  8.95/10 Average

10/10

Owlbait

If he'd found The Potion Masters Mistress instead, maybe he wouldn't have gotten such the wrong idea.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Have no fear - they will be crossing paths soon!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Have no fear - they will be crossing paths soon!

10/10

Owlbait

~kicks Albus~  So, Lucius thinks of his son as cannon fodder? Nice.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Yes, isn't it? Albus isn't much better in our eyes!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Yes, isn't it? Albus isn't much better in our eyes!

8/10

Belladonna2010

Lately I find myself checking back regularly to see if this particular fic has been updated...each chapter brings a smile, each chapter ends far too soon ^-^

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Thank you! We try to write/update as quickly as possible, but things have a horrible tendency to get in the way. Nevertheless, we do hope to have a few more chapters up soon - so keep a weather eye open. I'm glad you are enjoying Loyalties so much, and hope you continue to do so as the story develops and the plot thickens. Thanks for reviewing!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Thank you! We try to write/update as quickly as possible, but things have a horrible tendency to get in the way. Nevertheless, we do hope to have a few more chapters up soon - so keep a weather eye open. I'm glad you are enjoying Loyalties so much, and hope you continue to do so as the story develops and the plot thickens. Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Owlbait

You so had me going at the beginning I had to flip back to the previous chapter end, lol!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

We do that a fair bit - because we are cruel :P Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and many thanks for reviewing!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

We do that a fair bit - because we are cruel :P Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and many thanks for reviewing!

10/10

Owlbait

I love how Draco is the comedic stooge all through this fic.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

There really is no other use for him! He can't exactly be villainous like he is to Harry Potter (seeing as Isolde is three years his senior!). He also lacks all the suave of dear Lucius. His loss!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

There really is no other use for him! He can't exactly be villainous like he is to Harry Potter (seeing as Isolde is three years his senior!). He also lacks all the suave of dear Lucius. His loss!

10/10

Owlbait

uh oh.  That funny looking shape of things. That shape is pear.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Oh yeah, with more pear shaped goodness to come.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Oh yeah, with more pear shaped goodness to come.

10/10

Owlbait

Oh dear, poor Sev's arse is going to be hanging in the breeze. ~worries~

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Tehehehehehehe... the mental image your comment just roused in my head was both disturbing and hilarious. Indeed.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Tehehehehehehe... the mental image your comment just roused in my head was both disturbing and hilarious. Indeed.

10/10

Owlbait

That's going to be a difficult trick since the dress has gone the way of the smut.  ~kicks Ichabod~

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Yay! Ichabod hate! This man deserves all the hate you can muster. ;) 

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Yay! Ichabod hate! This man deserves all the hate you can muster. ;) 

10/10

Owlbait

The plot thickens. Or is this the curse Isolde visited on herself by burning books?

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Well... they were smut... so I'm not sure exactly how much of a curse she would instigate. Trust me, the plot will soon become so thick it will beging to coagulate. We are cruel writers ;)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Well... they were smut... so I'm not sure exactly how much of a curse she would instigate. Trust me, the plot will soon become so thick it will beging to coagulate. We are cruel writers ;)

10/10

Owlbait

This doesn't sound like a good time for Isolde to b isolated from her friends. 

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Indeed. But don't we all find that the best time to be with friends are those times when we wish to be left alone? Human nature is weird. Isolde will unfortunately realise that soon.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Indeed. But don't we all find that the best time to be with friends are those times when we wish to be left alone? Human nature is weird. Isolde will unfortunately realise that soon.

10/10

Owlbait

Isolde Hamilton was going to be his downfallWell i certainly hope so ;-)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

You shall soon see! ;) Thanks again for reviewing. 

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

You shall soon see! ;) Thanks again for reviewing. 

10/10

Owlbait

Draco just brings out that reaction in women

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

That he does. It's quite a shame he lacks the finess of his father, despite the fact that we don't exactly paint Lucius in the kindest light throughout this fic! Thank you for reviewing. 

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

That he does. It's quite a shame he lacks the finess of his father, despite the fact that we don't exactly paint Lucius in the kindest light throughout this fic! Thank you for reviewing. 

10/10

Owlbait

Heehee, I'd wonderrd if he needed that potion for himself. Sev's mood might be improved by a decent smut collection.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Well, you never know. Perhaps it would help him loosen up a little? Unfortunately for dear Severus, I think the potion did him more harm than good. Thanks for reviewing :)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Well, you never know. Perhaps it would help him loosen up a little? Unfortunately for dear Severus, I think the potion did him more harm than good. Thanks for reviewing :)

10/10

Owlbait

You just can't trust those tentacles of temptation. They never grab you by the ankle and force you to behave responsibly.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Unless the tentacle of temptating was tempting you to do something responsible like - the dishes. But then, that would be a depressing tentacle of temptation!

Response from Owlbait (Reviewer)

You can recognize the true tentacle of temptation by the soft irridescence of it's mucous, the velvety cling of it's suckers, and by the complete lack of dishes at the other end.

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Unless the tentacle of temptating was tempting you to do something responsible like - the dishes. But then, that would be a depressing tentacle of temptation!

Response from Owlbait (Reviewer)

You can recognize the true tentacle of temptation by the soft irridescence of it's mucous, the velvety cling of it's suckers, and by the complete lack of dishes at the other end.

10/10

Owlbait

Whew!  Nice save, sometimes being overtired can concentrate the faculties :)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Yes, she's a tough cookie, our Isolde! She puts in extra effort to impress Snape!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Yes, she's a tough cookie, our Isolde! She puts in extra effort to impress Snape!

10/10

Owlbait

Poor Isolde, all teenaged hormones and no help for it but reading smut :o)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

A bit like us, really! Except we don't have the teenage hormones in our defence!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

A bit like us, really! Except we don't have the teenage hormones in our defence!

0/10

Owlbait

'The Potions Master's Mistress by Gabrielle Mercer."  gigglesnort!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Wouldn't it be great if such a book existed?!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Wouldn't it be great if such a book existed?!

0/10

persefone

I discovered your story recently and I'm definitely hooked! I love your original characters, and the interactions between Isolde and Snape leave me breathless. I'll be eagerly waiting for you next update!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Thank you so much! It's so great to hear you are enjoying it! We really appreciate your feedback! The next two chapters are queued up!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Thank you so much! It's so great to hear you are enjoying it! We really appreciate your feedback! The next two chapters are queued up!

0/10

Meg527

Great story!  I can't wait to read more!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Many thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Many thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!

10/10

sunny33

LOL  Sometimes things come to mind at the most inconvenient times! :)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

They do indeed! Thanks for the feedback!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

They do indeed! Thanks for the feedback!

10/10

sunny33

How does one explain oneself out of this mess? :)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

I know! Isn't it mortifying??!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

I know! Isn't it mortifying??!

10/10

sunny33

Preparation is everything it seems. :)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

We'll try anything if it'll get us into Snape's good books!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

We'll try anything if it'll get us into Snape's good books!

10/10

sunny33

I'm in love with the bed. :D

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Even better if Snape's inside it!

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Hell, no, he'd take up space, hog the blankets, and probably snore!  Mine, all mine! :D

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Even better if Snape's inside it!

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Hell, no, he'd take up space, hog the blankets, and probably snore!  Mine, all mine! :D

10/10

sunny33

Just when she thought she'd got away with it. :)

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Nothing gets past Snape!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

Nothing gets past Snape!

10/10

onecelestialbeing

So good!!!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

So glad you're enjoying it!

Response from Advanced Smut Making (Author of Where Your Loyalties Lie)

So glad you're enjoying it!

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