Three
Chapter 3 of 3
PersephoneVerteIn the Forest of Dean, Snape has something to share with Miss Granger. During the Battle of Hogwarts, she tries to return the favor.
ReviewedHer feet ached. Her head ached. Her entire damn body ached, come to think of it. But still she pressed on with Harry and Ron, the sword of Godric Gryffindor in hand. They were flying down the path to the Whomping Willow, desperately hoping the tunnel would be open. Luckily, it was, and the three pinched in, fumbling in the dark. When the terrain leveled out, they stopped for a breather.
Panting, Hermione clutched at Harry. "There's something—I have to tell you," she breathed. "Harry—Harry I think you're—"
But she never got to finish her sentence. A large bang farther down the passage inside the Shrieking Shack resounded loudly. The three broke into a sprint again, feverishly hoping the snake would appear.
It did, but not the way Hermione wanted.
Everything happened so fast, but in slow motion at the same time.
Voldemort. Snape. The accusations. The bite.
No. No, no, no, no, no.
She flew past Harry and Ron, bursting into the room. Snape. Pool of blood. Gasping. Her hands fumbling over an empty vial. Memories. Ron shoving her out the door. Neville killing the snake. Harry dying and returning and vanquishing Voldemort. It was all a jumble. Everything was confusing, and her head was filled with cotton.
She shouldn't be where they—Merlin, she had to go back. She had been gone for so long, but maybe… Just maybe.
She hoped. She hoped against all odds that he was still awake. Her feet pounded against the dirt, pounded against the wood floors. Bloody fucking Shack and bloody fucking snake and bloody fucking fuck all to hell. Hermione could think few words besides obscenities.
She dropped to her knees—blood, God, so much blood—and lifted Snape's head into her hands.
"Professor? Can you hear me?" she whispered.
Nothing.
Her stomach leapt to her throat. Sobs wracked her body. When had she become so attached? Sure, she had admired him her entire school career for his intellect and recently for his courage, but Circe…
She clung to his limp body, willing her magic to save him. Willing everything she had to return his life force.
"Stop," he rasped, his voice strained.
Hermione gasped and turned her head to see him better. "Professor!"
"No, Miss Granger. I can feel what you're doing. Your magic. Don't. You'll never get it back."
She choked. "But you can't die! Not after all you've done!"
Snape took a ragged breath. "Potter has everything he needs. I am no longer useful."
"But—but—who will terrorize the first years? Who will I steal ingredients from? Who will—the forest, Professor." She was grasping desperately to make him stay. Snape had pushed her magic back somehow, cutting off the flow. She could feel him draining once more.
"Dying is an art, Miss Granger. You're ruining my performance. Stop sniveling."
She laughed sadly. "I rather think this is a shite death, sir."
She pulled him to her again, hugging him tightly.
"You remind me a bit of her, you know."
"Sir?"
"Lily Evans. You were both clever Muggle-borns. Both with the same fire and tenacity to do what's right and fight the good fight. But you're more forgiving than she was, I think."
Hermione didn't know how to interpret what he was saying. Was he mourning his long-lost love? Or was he mourning Hermione's good qualities? She settled for resigned and pressed a kiss to his temple. Thinking better of it, she curved so her face was even with his.
"Look at me, Severus."
He brought his eyes up, and Hermione's lips descended, catching his in a delightfully angsty kiss. He tasted of coppery blood and salt. His hands didn't come up to rifle her hair. He didn't move to bite her neck. His body didn't press into hers roughly.
He was still.
AN: See what happens when you press me for more chapters on a one-shot? I DESTROY EVERYTHING YOU LOVE. But to be honest, I'm quite glad I went back and did more. Usually turning one-shots into more drives me batty, but this worked out, I think. Don't get used to my generosity though.
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13 Reviews | 5.15/10 Average
Im very upset but damn was this well done! So is this really the end?
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you, and yes!
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Thank you, and yes!
I'm really enjoying this so far. First chapter was hot, and their scene here is snappy and sweet!
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you very much!
Poor Ron. He missed a chess move.
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I think his mind is on other things ;)
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I think his mind is on other things ;)
You leave me wanting more. Which is a sign of a good story. Please update soon.
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you very much!
Well, gosh, how do you follow something like that up? Guess I better go read chapter 2 and find out.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Indeed :)
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Indeed :)
Snape has finally met his match. I don't think Hermione's going to give up any time soon.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Of course not. Our girl is quite resilient.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Of course not. Our girl is quite resilient.
That was hot and wonderful.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you :)
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you :)
I loved it, absolutely loved it. I hope there will be more to this story? I mean, poor Hermione needs some reward there at the end (though I guess some will say she has been rewarded brilliantly:-)), a seccond, third and.... go with Severus is what the poor girl needs.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you! There most certainly will be more. It's complete in three chapters.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you! There most certainly will be more. It's complete in three chapters.
You so need to continue with this. This was really good.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you! I have a few more chapters waiting to be published.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you! I have a few more chapters waiting to be published.
What a divine, tasty morsel.So hot, so good. Lovely indeed. Thank you for sharing~
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Ha, thank you!
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Ha, thank you!
Very nice. More, please?
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you! There are a few more chapters.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Thank you! There are a few more chapters.
Seriously? That is what you gave us? You were right the first time it should have stayed a one shot. He deserves more..... Oh I am so sad now :-(
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Yes, seriously, that is what I gave you.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
Yes, seriously, that is what I gave you.
i liked it but i know what you mean if you cant make it work leave it be. thanks
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
I rather think I did. Just because it doesn't end in the way the readers would like in a perfect AU world doesn't mean it doesn't work.
Response from PersephoneVerte (Author of Lovely, Dark, and Deep)
I rather think I did. Just because it doesn't end in the way the readers would like in a perfect AU world doesn't mean it doesn't work.