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A Valentine’s Day Surprise
herbologist8 Reviews | 6.25/10 (8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
With Valentine’s Day coming up, many of you are probably dreaming of a date with a certain Potions master. But before you send off that card, be careful what you wish for... A short piece in rhymes.
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Member Since 2011 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 26 | 35 Reviews Written | 76 Review Responses
I'm a fan of the Harry Potter series. My favourite character is Severus Snape. Complex, intelligent and sexy, he is the tragic hero of the series. I hate how JK Rowling killed him off in Deathly Hallows, and it was what inspired me to write my first ever fanfiction.
I mostly read SS/OC and SS/HG, but occasionally other pieces that catch my attention. I don't like stories that drag on and on without much happening and rarely read anything over 100,000 words unless it is very good. I'm quite forgiving about typos and punctuation errors, but poor style or grammar puts me off straight away, as does OOC. I like realism and don't fancy excessive time travel, de-aging, obscure family links and Snape the vampire stories.
About me:
I am a thirty-something female and mother of two boys. I am German and hence not writing in my mother tongue.
All my stories are totally canon compliant. Not that I mind AU, I just enjoy exploiting the many gaping holes JKR has left us fanfiction authors!
My other stories at Sycophant Hex and Fanfiction.net:
Flying With The Raven is set during HBP and DH and pairs Snape with an adult OC who is on a par with him. It is a Snape survival story, offering plenty of romantic fantasy fodder. Snape's characterisation focuses more on his noble side, prickly shell notwithstanding. Yes, this is self-insertion, but I am willing to share if I get a few reviews in return. ;-)
Wishing On A Star is a post-DH story pairing Snape and Sinistra and is still work in progress (I know it's been a few months since I updated, but be assured I will never abandon this story!). Snape is a more flawed character here than in FWTR. And it won't be until he can stop blaming unfavourable circumstances and other people for his misery that he will change and find happiness.
Reviews for A Valentine’s Day Surprise
Lovely job and so wonderful to see it all in poetry. My hat's off to you for that.
Only once a year, he is so cruel, you will have to "pay" for 364 days and nights before he returns.
starts romantic and schoolgirlfoolish ,gets dangerously dark and brutal in the middle and resovles in hot and quick exchange of mutual feelings it seems. well, a rather sadistic lover. and only once a year. well. This will be a very long and trying courtship.who knows, might be intersting.
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
liked and adored your rhyming technique.to the point. very very good.
Wonderful. And so hot! Congrats on the perfect rhyming and scanning, too.
LOL. Funny, clever, and it rhymed! :)
Bravo! Yay! Excellent! Wonderful job! You made me smile, a lot.
Wow, look at you go. Sometimes rhyming things have lines that are ridiculous, just for the sake of the rhyme. Not here. Everything made sense and was warranted in the context of the story. Good luck to you next year ;)
sweet, funny and hot