Oh I really love the premisis of this. What is that potion? It is a potion right, what was in the water balloon?  And now she has inprinted on Severus or the potion has made her attatched to him somehow!  More - update!!  There has to be more?

Personally, I love this fic! I've read it in its entirety over on Ashwinder, and found the characterization especially fantastic. The plot is also wonderous, and I just wanted you to know that I have enjoyed this story (and rereading part of it here) a great deal.On a side note, I found upon rereading this that I didn't know what a 'viperfish' was. I wasn't sure if it was fictitious or real, so I googled it and found one of the most frightening creatures I have ever laid eyes on. On one hand, I'm happy to expand my knowledge but on the other, I think I might have been overall more happy to have lived in ignorance that such a creature exists.

Very happy to see this story. I love it.

Brilliant! Definely looking forward to more!

This fic has really great potential for an epic work.  The plot is intricate and the characters are still in character so far.  The storyline has me grabbed and I wait with eager anticipation for the next chapter.

Great story so far.  I like the characterization and the plot is interesting.

Darn. I thought this was completed. Well, it was an intriguing beginning.