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Detention in the Dungeons
DarkFate12 Reviews | 12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Severus Snape had taught many an idiotic student over the years, and had dealt with miscreants and trouble-makers of all kinds. These two, however, put all the rest to shame. Which would be fine, except that he was the one left to deal with them. Oneshot.
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nice one!
Severus (or Hogwarts as a whole) has not developed any more pedagogical approach yet to deal with miscreants--no matter how long he's known that detention just won't work. Then he deserves his pains.
I do not believe one minute that the twins do not know how much their father likes them showing a spine--he's taught then how!
That was classic. I truly enjoyed every bit of it. *giggle*Thank you so much for sharing~
Response from DarkFate (Author of Detention in the Dungeons)
Response from DarkFate (Author of Detention in the Dungeons)
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)-DF
Cute! I think I like Severus' twin terrors. More? Please? ^_^
Response from DarkFate (Author of Detention in the Dungeons)
Haha, thanks! I make no promises for more... but if an idea strikes me, I'll definitely try writing a companion piece. I rather liked the twin terrors myself! :)Thanks again!-DF
What a sweet little story. It is so hard to say what the combination of those two's genes would produce. I love that one was a Slytherin and one a Griffindor. Even in creating children, those two are fighting for dominance :) Nicely done.
Response from DarkFate (Author of Detention in the Dungeons)
Heh, I didn't think of it like that... I suppose they are fighting for dominance lol! Thanks for the review; glad you liked it!-DF
I wondered why he didn't refer to them by their last names. This was really cute. I wish you'd do more with these two, because they are absolutely adorable.
Response from DarkFate (Author of Detention in the Dungeons)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this little fic! I'll try and write a companion piece sometime, but I make no promises. Thanks for reviewing!-DF
What a darling set of twins. I can see how they would give their parents a run for their money. After all, we're talking about Severus' and Hermione's genes combined and then doubled! LOL!
Response from DarkFate (Author of Detention in the Dungeons)
Haha, exactly! Double the genes, double the trouble... good thing Hermione and Severus are two that can keep up with them! Thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it!-DF
Or should we say: The Snangerous duo?!
Response from DarkFate (Author of Detention in the Dungeons)
Snagerous duo eh? I like it!Thanks for reviewing!-DF
That was cute! But it was a dead giveaway when he called her Camille and said "we've been over this already" instead of using her last name and being extrodinarily snarky. Daddiness trumps snarkiness any day!
Nice!
Unexpected twist, funny and adorable :D
Too cute! Loved that they were Severus and Hermione's twins and that one is a Gryffindor and the other a Slytherin. The Dangerous duo indeed! Thanks.