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Petulant_LDWS Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops
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Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops

1: Away Above the Chimney Tops

Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops

ofankoma

22 Reviews   |   22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

General Drabble/100-Word Art Friendship Petulant_LDWS 1,019 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Albus Dumbledore Crookshanks Dolores Jane Umbridge Harry Potter Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Neville Longbottom Ronald Weasley

Hermione and Crookshanks are swept away to a land beyond the rainbow.

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Chapter 1: Away Above the Chimney Tops


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10/10

sweetflag

Oh this was really delightful.  I loved the pink cardigan reference.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks very much! I thoroughly enjoy the 'I'm melting' scene in the original illustrations... I think Umbridge could easily pass for the Wicked Witch of the West.

0/10

Mazzy

Yes, being thrown into the Wizard of Oz would certainly be an "extremely awkward situation." And I like how it was Harry that needed brains. lol

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks so much! Yes, the gifts in Oz are tricky, since they're qualities each character doesn't think they possess (but in reality, they've had it in them all along). So Neville with courage was obviously right on the money, but sorting out brains and heart between Harry and Ron? Ron got heart for returning to them in DH, and Harry got brains for his decisions at King's Cross and really throughout all of that last year.

0/10

Prof M McGonagall

Cute crossover and excellent use of the illustrations!  I really enjoyed the parallels you brought out in the two literary universes.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks! Things do line up fairly well, don't they? I particularly like Neville as the Cowardly Lion, who eventually shows his stripes as the king of the forest.

10/10

moiramountain

Terrribly clever - come to think of it, all of us in fandom probably read that wonderful old tale and dreamed of the world of magic, even when we were wee small things.... and now, here we are, visiting our own Land of Oz whenver it suits us !!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Sentimental things from childhood hold such a nostalgic sway over our hearts. I was happy to see so many elements lining up between these worlds (Neville looking for courage, Albus with less power than we previously thought, stepping back to allow the kids to work, Hermione freeing the house-elves). There are many more than just didn't fit into 499 words! Thanks so much for your response.

0/10

debjunk

LoL, nice take on the prompt.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thank you!

8/10

sevibaby

This was really cute.  Good job.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks very much!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Nice take on the Wizard of Oz. Sorry it was so brief, though.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks! Yes, I hit 499 words exactly and wish I had 500 more. I think it'd be a fun story to write... Flying monkeys resembling Draco and other members of the Inquisitorial Squad made it into the first draft, but were cut for space.

10/10

nagandsev

Brilliant & so sweet! Thank you for all of the creativity and extra special sweet effort to treat ud readers to something very innovative yet touchingly sentimental!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks very much,

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

! Yes, with a prompt like "weather" and "travelers," Oz just seemed right. The real question was which year to set it in and who to cast as the villain... and Voldemort never worked for me as the Wicked Witch, so I was happy to slide Umbridge into place. (She even looks right in the illustrations!) This was one last (relatively) innocent brush with danger for them before everything began to fall apart.

0/10

lady_rhian

I adore The Wizard of Oz and was delighted to find it here. Nice recasting (Dolores! Perfect!); lovely use of images.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks! I love it, too, and was happy to see so many elements from the two worlds lining up. (I do like Dolores as the Witch, although Neville looking for courage and toads ranks pretty high for me as well. And Albus.)

0/10

nata

Incredibly sweet. Including the illustrations made it read like a lovely bed-time story for a baby. Innocent, yet adventurous.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thank you! When I settled on Oz, the real question was when to set it and who to cast as the villain. Voldemort never seemed right, and fifth year is just before everything falls apart completely, so it allowed a relatively innocent brush with danger and a hopeful look at the much bigger tempest to come. 

Response from nata (Reviewer)

You certainly achieved that goal. Your pink villain was a great choice and her incorporation carried the exact amount of danger the story asked for. It was perfect.

0/10

marianne le fey

What a wonderful take on the prompt!And how much do I adore Neville as the round faced Cowardly Lion! (Genius!)

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

The round-faced Cowardly Lion chasing toads, no less! I do hope he finds Trevor.(Thanks!)

10/10

MuseAmusant

Now that was a damn cute and clever use of the prompt. Umbridge as the Wicked Witch of the West was perfect casting. Fabulous!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks! I do like Umbridge as the Wicked Witch of the West - even the sketch of her melting looks right in my mind. I also like Dumbledore as the Great and Powerful Wizard, who, although powerful, isn't quite as capable as everyone believes him to be, and who steps aside in the end to allow Dorothy and her friends set things to right. That one seemed quite fitting.

10/10

blue artemis

Nicely done!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thank you very much!

10/10

ofankoma

'All was well,' indeed. These two worlds really do line up well, don't they? Hermione gets to free the house-elves... er... Munchkins, Dumbledore's a leader who ultimately doesn't have as much power as people thought, and McGonagall... a Scottish woman... as the Good Witch of the North? Also, thanks for sending Hermione back, safe with the knowledge that the brains, heart, and courage of her friends would (eventually) win the day.

Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)

Oh, I was thrilled that I could let Hermione free the house-elves. Quirrell could almost be cast as the Wicked Witch of the East, but it didn't line up right there (and I ran out of words!), so that idea was scrapped early on.

10/10

Aurette

Lovely and sweet, and great use of art...

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks! Now if only Toto looked a bit more like a cat...

10/10

HBAR

Oh my gosh, I almost went this same route.  Good thing I didn't because yours was much cooler than mine would have ever been.  Loved it!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks,

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

! (It's funny you mention that, because as I was writing this, I simultaneously thought 'This is wildly original' and 'Everyone else will write an Oz drabble.') I don't know how far along in your thinking you got, but for me, the big question was when to set it and how to line up characters. I would be really curious to here what your ideas were, if you'd like to share them...

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Wow... apparently I need a cup of coffee... Hear.

Response from HBAR (Reviewer)

Well I happen to live in Dorothy's neck of the woods, so that was my very first thought with the prompt.  And like you, I noticed how there were HP characters that just seemed to fit the specifics of the Oz characters, but I hadn't any idea how to go about fitting it all into 500 words.  I have real word count issues!  Glad I left it to you to tackle!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Oh, Kansas! A beautiful, if flat, place. I love the American prairies... watching tall grasses roll in the wind is like nothing else, and time there in the open truly makes you appreciate the camaraderie we feel with trees.

9/10

Severus49

That was - adorable!!!! Great idea!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks very much!

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Brilliant! 

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks!

0/10

Rose of the West

Aw... That's so sweet the way you mixed the pictures from the book into the story.  They fit so well!

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

I adore the old images from the book, though it gets tricky mixing elements from the book and film, which condensed quite a few characters. I'm glad you liked it!

0/10

quaffswinegaily

What a wonderful use of the prompt.

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thank you!

10/10

karelia

What a wonderful and original answer to this prompt! *applauds*

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thanks so much,

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

! *bows shyly and points to L. Frank Baum in the wings*

0/10

sunny33

Cute.  Nice pics! :)

Response from ofankoma (Author of Where Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops)

Thank you very much!

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