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Melodia Who?
Melodia Snape4 Reviews | 4.5/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
This Story begins after the alleged Murder of Dumbledore. The Order of the Phoenix battles Voldemort. A new character, not created by JK Rowling, is introduced, and Snape finds himself in an uplifting relationship that could change the course of his life
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Melodia Snape
Member Since 2006 | 1 Story | Favorited by 0 | 0 Reviews Written | 4 Review Responses
I am a 40 year old. married, Harry Potter fan that is wild for Severus Snape! (much to my husband's chagrin!) I know, it may be silly, but he is a very mysterious character that I cannot help wanting to see good things happen for.
I am very new to fan fiction. In fact I have only been writing my story for a month and a half. One of my friends encouraged me to write it since I always talked over the ideas with her, so ....I did!
Reviews for Melodia Who?
I like this story. I have always felt that Severus was acting under orders when he killed Dumbledore, though I tend to believe that Dumbledore is well and truly gone. I think it will be interesting to see how this plays out with Harry and some of the other more suspicious members of the Order learning about what happened.
Response from Melodia Snape (Author of Melodia Who?)
Thank you!I still think his death is a red herring, and I hope and I am right. No matter though, because I can't see Jo letting Severus be a bad guy. He and Harry will need each other.thanks again!
I feel sorry for the Muggle man and his memories. That was pretty cold of her to do especially since he is a muggle. she should have just been honest with her feelings instead of hiding from them.Good scene with them after. I liked their coming together vera much
Response from Melodia Snape (Author of Melodia Who?)
Hello!Thank you for the review. Melodia felt that she had no choice. He would have continued to come around and try to see her. She had told him before that she was not interested in him that way, but he wanted to be friends anyway.She didn't want to hurt him, so she thought it best if he found someone else, and did not remember her at all. Taking his memory of her was a last resort, but in the end it was the merciful thing to do.That is why she was so upset. After his passionate kiss, she felt she truly had no choice. Besides, if he kept coming around, it could have put him in danger as well. There are 30 more chapters I have yet to post. I hope you see why it was necssary for him to forget her and her home. I think you will.Please keep reading! The fun is just beginning!Thanks again!
I am looking forward to seeing just what he thinks would be an appropriate response would be. I love how the Muggle man is getting him all jealous.
Do you think the next chapter might show us a little of what Melodia was thinking (her POV) by bringing him up to the house, especially after she thought it best to keep him away from the house. Plus... why would she let him kiss her on even the corner of her mouth if she was not interested in him AND she knew Severus was nearby?
Response from Melodia Snape (Author of Melodia Who?)
Hello!Thank you for your review! To answer your questions, I will start with the first one:Melodia did care for this man, because he had been a friend to her and her Muggle family for several years. Her heart belongs to Severus, but she values this man's friendship and company. Because of this, she had no problem leading him the garden for tea, stopping short of inviting him inside.Only Dumbledore and Severus were in the house, and with her uncle sick, she knew that Drake wouldn't see him. As far as Snape, she didn't foresee him watching them so closely. I am sure that she felt that if he seen someone with her that he didn't know, he would not make his presence known, which he didn't.Melodia was simply behaving the way she always had with Drake to keep him from being suspicious of any sudden change. Like I said, she really liked this man, in a "close friend" type of way, and didn't mind the small kiss. It was apparently the way he had always behaved with her, and although she was not completely comfortable with it, she realized then that she would need to come up with a plan to discourage him permanently, without hurting him. She also had not decided what to do about the possibilty of Drake showing up randomly at that point. Chapter 5 explains her solution to this.My next chapter needs some improvments before I post it, but if you think he was jealous in this one, just hold on to your hat!I believe that you will enjoy what comes next!Please review me often, and tell anyone that you know who reads it, that I value any and all feedback.Thanks again!
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Thank you for the explanation! I know many readers read the reviews as well, so this will be nice for them to see.
I really am looking forward to reading the next chapter ... and the rest of this story. You have a great original character going. She's believable and you're developing her well.
I like this chapter's tone, and the ending is very intriguing. It makes me wonder what happened to her and how she comes back into his life. I like how you conveyed their feelings.
Response from Melodia Snape (Author of Melodia Who?)
Thank you for your review! That was really fast!Chapter 2 is about to be realeased and I have completed a total of 28 others!The fun is just beginning! So please and review often! I value all feedback!Thanks again!