Coffee?
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Severus enlists the help of some of the Hogwarts ladies in finding a cup of coffee to his taste.
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Oh, that is a brilliant ending. I find it a little silly to have everyone flirting with him so, though.
Very cute and exactly the intuitiveness I'd expect from Luna. :)
Luna always sees the things that others miss. I'm glad to see that she "sees" Severus so well.
Pomona's brew made me laugh.
I enjoyed all of the descriptions of the coffees, and the staff member who goes with each, but I think Pomona's was my favorite. Gave me a good laugh.
And lovely Luna ... she is always so perceptive about things. The last line was great! Nice job.
Wonder why he only wanted his female coworkers' opinions. Well, I think he found what he wanted now.
She hears beyond the veil and recognises Harry through Polyjuice - of course Luna would be the one to know what Severus really likes! (And coffee with a paper umbrella? Now THAT'S quite the image!)
Love all of the descriptions of the staff members, but Severus being smitten by lovely Luna takes the cake -- love the ending - HA! Of course Luna knows! Lovely work!
Trust Luna to get it right.
Yes! Who wants stinky old coffee anyway? :)
~Snort~ Leave it to Luna!
*giggle* Trust Luna to flip him on his ear with tea and her own beguiling presence. Just charming :)
lol. lovely twist at the end. :D
LOL! Love Sprout's coffee!
This is just brilliant. I love the way he catalogues them all until the one comes along that clearly has *his* measure. I love the way she delivers that last line, just exactly the way she'll probably remind him of a thousand things as they grow old together.
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
I'd love to think so. They seem such a comfortable fit, don't they?Thanks so much.
‘It’s tea actually, Severus,’ Luna replied. ‘I don’t think you like coffee.’Awesome. Thank you!
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Thank you!So pleased you enjoyed it.
I'm with Severus on this one. Coffee smells great, but nothing seems to make it palatable for me. The story, however, is quite appealing indeed. :)
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
You've hit the nail on head!I adore the smell of coffee, yet it's always disappointed me.Thanks so much.
I love Snuna, and she is always so perceptive. Lovely!
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Isn't she just!Thanks so much for your comment.
Yes, she would see through to the heart of the matter. Very good.
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Thanks so much!I think she starts from a better vantage point than everyone else.
Your descriptions of the women's coffee - so like their personalities - was hysterical, especially lines like "so thick and tarry..." I most enjoyed Luna's subtle solution to the debacle. Lovely!
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Oh, thank you.I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.
Trust Luna to get to the heart of the matter :)Lovely ficlet.
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Thanks for that!She see no barriers, does she?
She could probably have served him water and he would have thougth it a drink from the Gods:-))
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
She probably could have too; in fact, maybe she did!Thanks for that.
Awwww!
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Thanks for that.My first ever attempt at drabbling (and boy, was it a struggle not to meander on and on).
Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)
Well, you did excellent! In my perspective, if an author is able to make a person come away from a story - no matter what size it is - with a strong emotion (in my case, warmth and happiness), then they've succeeded as a writer. You've done just that with very few words. Congratulations on a great little tale!
Oh, that Luna--amazingly clever witch !! Ravenclaw and Slytherin--now there's the perfect pairing !!
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Thanks for that!So pleased you enjoyed my first ever drabble.
heehee. Very nice, mystery author.
Response from scaranda (Author of Coffee?)
Thanks so much for that!Glad you enjoyed it.