Perfectus
Electryone34 Reviews | 7.06/10 (34 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
Hermione creates a potion with unfortunate consequences.
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Electryone
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High school math teacher in Southern CA, who also loves to read and write!
Reviews for Perfectus
Hmm, the potion's effect on her mind is concerning, but she appears to be addicted to it. Time for Snape to save the day! :)
Response from Electryone (Author of Perfectus)
He's certainly going to try! Thanks for reviewing! =)
I'm sure she's holding a huge grudge from the way he treated her in the past. For her to be that close to him and admit her feelings to him, and then to shrug her off... some women never get over the hurt of a man's rejections. But, it's odd that Miranda seems to have her own mindset when she's manifested. So it's like a step beyond Polyjuice - whereas Polyjuice just gives you another's features - features that someone already possesses - and voice, you retain your own thoughts and feelings. Perfectus gives you an original body and mind. Really interesting. I don't think it's a good idea to be hanging around with Draco, either. Not only hanging around with, but dumping and pissing off Draco at the same time. Not really smart. Maybe Hermione should have filled Miranda in on him a little before she went heading out clubbing with him!
Response from Electryone (Author of Perfectus)
Yeah, she's not really happy with him right now and is still a bit upset about the past.Hermione knows better than to hang out with Draco but Miranda doesn't care and just thinks he's hot. =PThanks for the review!
Sounds like Jekyl and Hyde. Can't wait for the next chapter
Response from Electryone (Author of Perfectus)
Jekyll and Hyde was actually the prompt for this It was an awesome prompt. The next chapter's in the queue and the fourth (and final) chapter should be up a few days after that. Thanks for the review!
So, dear Hermone is playing hard to catch huh? Nothing wrong with having some good time with Draco... maybe it neede more drinks to make him irresistible.
Response from Electryone (Author of Perfectus)
It's gonna take a LOT of drinks for Hermione to find him irresistible! =P
Cool story. I am glad you are posting it.
Response from Electryone (Author of Perfectus)
Thank you! Hope you enjoy the rest.
Huh. It seems to be going a little Jekyll and Hyde on her... oh dear.
Response from Electryone (Author of Perfectus)
Jekyll and Hyde was actually the prompt for this (I didn't mention that in the beginning because I didn't want to give it away). Thanks for reviewing!
All will be well, as long as he doesn't have to be nice.
And so the plot thickens.
Hopefully Draco has learned not to keep a lady waiting.