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Rose of the WestHow it was asked made all the difference.
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They were once two seventh years, straight of spine, dark of hair, and whole in body. “Ah, Min,” he would say, “why won't your family accept me?” Once he tried to slide a flower into her hair, but that proved a disaster, given the tightly pulled back tresses. Forever after, he simply handed her the flower after gently sniffing it.
“My father doesn't hold with the Ministry and their attitude of appeasement.”
“I'm working against the evil wizards,” he would say. “Someone needs to work at the Ministry and make them change from within.” He was still young enough that it was often a whine. She invariably gritted her teeth and took the next turn that brought them back into the castle.
Time and time again, they would go out to the rose garden. Time and time again, Minnie McGonagall would look in the mirror and contemplate loosening her hair. She knew that on the night she did, she would soon belong to him, body and soul. Time and time again, he started the conversation by complaining about her family.
Minnie never did take down her hair. Instead she grew into Minerva and exchanged tight braids for an even tighter bun. Alastor worked as he said he would, fighting the dark wizards. He was on hand when the Ministry's attitudes shifted and smiled in triumph whenever he saw Minerva. A generation later, things changed again, and the darkness seemed ready to retake the Ministry. Minerva couldn't help a small smile of triumph whenever she saw Alastor after that.
So it went for decades. Minerva never took her hair down for anyone. Whenever Alastor had a couple of extra Galleons, he would send an arrangement of roses to Minerva. They worked together when circumstances required it and quietly ignored each other the rest of the time.
Not so, the year of the Triwizard Tournament. There were no flowers, no little looks, nothing. She looked into her mirror at night and wondered what had happened. This wasn't Alastor as she'd always known him.
Then, at the end of the tournament, she understood what she should have seen all along. The reason he wasn't himself was that he wasn't himself. She sat by his bedside for hours, apologizing in her heart for not noticing... and for the rest of it. When no one else was in the hospital wing, she said it all aloud.
When he awoke, he caressed her head and said, “Dinna fash yerself.” He reached up and unfastened her hair. She gasped at his boldness, but then slid her fingers up to loosen the still-dark hair that now fell into his hands.
A week later, a clearing throat alerted her to the fact that he was standing in the doorway of her office. In his arms were several bouquets of roses. He set them on her desk and leaned over it to unfasten her hair again. Then he slid a flower behind her ear and whispered, “Will you take me even if your family says nay?”
She leaned up and let him kiss her, eager to take the man who finally asked the right question.
A/N: Inspired by a Truth or Dare prompt from Kyria of Delphi: Alastor Moody/Minerva's office/roses.
Thank you to Kyria of Delphi and Lady in the Cloak for the beta read!
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24 Reviews | 6.63/10 Average
I like this: it gives an adult view of two characters we've only seen through the eyes of kids in canon.Thanks!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you!
A lyrical, gorgeous story worth reading. Thank you
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you so much. Writing characters we don't usually gives us a chance to write a little differently than usual, I think.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you so much. Writing characters we don't usually gives us a chance to write a little differently than usual, I think.
Aw! It's so sweet! There's a familiarity that seems to happen when I see them together on screen. It translates even better in print, and you've done a commendable job writing it so.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you very much! I think there is definitely a certain chemistry between them, too.
Karelia said that this was worth reading. My, she is a wise woman, because this little story is a gem. In narrative, it suits the two characters. It's practical first and foremost, yet their relationship builds to be overruled by mutual regard and attraction. It was beautiful.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Oh, thank you so much! I wrote it on a dare of sorts, and now I'm fond of the pairing. That happens to me a lot.
Wonderful! Its all in how you ask. I like how you used the symbolism of letting her hair down with letting her defenses down. Thank you.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Minerva's hair was the first thing I noticed when she greeted Harry's class at the door of the school. It suits the mental picture of her being someone not to mess with. Thank you so much for the review!
Ack better late than never!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Absolutely! Thank you for the review!
Oh, this is lovely...and I'm glad that he finally had the courage to take her hair down himself instead of waiting for her to do it. Then again , after spending most of a year as a prisoner of Barty Crouch Jr. (and perhaps not knowing if he'd ever see her again), he had a lot of time to think and experience regret over lost opportunity. Actually, for a Gryffindor, Minerva wasn't very courageous with regard to matters of the heart, that much is obvious.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
She was being stubborn all that time, but spent much of that same year wondering if he'd finally stopped loving her. I think they both realized they'd better go for it. Thank you so much for the review!
That was lovely. I'm sure kyria loved it.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you, Blue!
Insightful character study - well done!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you! I never really thought about them before, but now I love them, which is what always happens to me.
Absolutely charming. Very nicely done.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Touching and sweet and a lovely twist on Canon. Why is it no one who knew Moody ever noticed someone else was impersonating him for the better part of a year?! Moody/McGonagall makes me smile!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you! It's a good question. Barty played his role a little too well, maybe. I have to admit Moody/McGonagall makes me smile, now, too!
Awww, that brought a tear to my eye. So sweet and sad, especially knowing what canon brings to Alastor. Very lovely, Rose.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you very much! It is too bad about his canon future.
Love it! So perfectly Minerva and Moody
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you! It's how I see them, too.
I love this, it's beautiful and tender!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you so much!
That was lovely, Rosie. :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you, my dear!
Oh how utterly utterly sweet! And typical of the man that he just doesn't see...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
... and typical of that woman that she doesn't want to explain it, LOL! Thank you so much for the review!
GUH. You've pulled some pretty amazing stuff on here, but this beats all. I can't believe you just whipped it up like that! *applauds wildly*
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
You're making me blush! Thank you!
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Rose. It made me laugh and cry. Thank you.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Aw... thank you for the review, and for having me look at characters I don't think about much.
Response from kyriaofdelphi (Reviewer)
Always ready to help broaden your horizons, dear. Loved what you did with my second fave pairing.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
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Awwww. What an unexpected pairing, and how beautifully done.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you! They were unexpected for me, too.
So sweet!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you! Kyria turned me on to this pairing and I really warmed up to them.
What a wonderfully straightforward and evocative opening line! This is such a lovely read, a look at people who want certain things in no uncertain measure, but who can't bring themselves to risk anything - he can't ask her to defy her family, she can't 'loosen her hair' for him. But years apart and alone finally change all that! (It's like Persuasion in miniature.) Well done!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Oh! You're right about Persuasion! How funny I didn't see that when it's my favorite Austen novel. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!.
Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)
Actually, have you read JKR's additional material on McGonagall at Pottermore? There's quite a lot to her story (and a three-year marriage) that we never knew before...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
I hadn't yet seen that when I wrote this, so this is now AU, I guess. ;) I've been thinking about adding a note about that.
Response from ofankoma (Reviewer)
Gosh, I wouldn't worry about it... after all, everyone would have to put notes on just about everything once the Pottermore material comes out. I just find it amazing that you read JKR's mind, so to speak, with a three-year romance late in life ending tragically with his early passing. I mean... really, what are the odds? Of course, you could put the note on to share your clairvoyance with all who will come across this in the future! ;)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
LOL! You're absolutely right. Thank you, once again. I've enjoyed the conversation!
Wonderful. So sweet. And so complete in so few words. Just marvelous.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.
What a nice story! I love when I take a chance reading about characters that I don't usually read, and stumble across a gem.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you for the review! It's not a pairing I usually think about, but our dear Kyria of Delphi requested it and I couldn't say no.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of A Question Worth Answering)
Thank you for the review! It's not a pairing I usually think about, but our dear Kyria of Delphi requested it and I couldn't say no.