Neophobia and Yearning
nagandsev11 Reviews | 7.18/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Bellatrix has a secret. A deep, dark and lonely secret for one Undesirable in particular.
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Bella's mind is not a nice place to visit, it must be hell to live there.
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Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
, thank you for reading this dark prompt, again from a drabble challenge--absolutely agree with you about Bella's mind and her miserable existence, imprisoned in such a mindset, etc. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and to leave some feedback--truly, deeply appreciate it!
Wow. Just, wow. Your writing always amazes me, and this is why you need to do a lot more of it.
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Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
! You didn't need to, you know why, but thank you so much for ALL of your support! Thanks to you, I have a feeling there'll be future prompts to nudge me along new adventures to explore;-D Again, thank you!
awesome!!!
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Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
... OMG... OMG... thank you!!!
Wow, what a very scary look into the mind of a madwoman! Nicely done, N&S!
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Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
, thank you sooo much for reading and reviewing! I know the content/description is unpleasant, but it's Bella, and I found (after getting over the shock of the prompt= never would have put these two together!) that I couldn't avoid it. Again, thank you for the support! (your N&S , another Snapette who's snuck off to be naughty elsewhere:-D Cheers!)
You almost made me feel sorry for Bella in her madness. Beautiful wordcraft. :)
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Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Really appreciate the feedback! Yes, absolutely agree *almost*... she's always been too knowledgeable for her horrid actions for my taste... Thank you so much for your compliment/affirmation on word usage - I wasn't sure how effective it was; this'll encourage me to explore & try further drabbles - thanks again!
Wow! Nag, you've excelled yourself. This is a dark, sinister and very disturbing little glimpse into The Mad One's psyche. You write so well, damn you! What a way with words you have. You know I don't ususall read fics unless they feature the Greasy Git getting some action, but if you write it, I'll read it. Jolly good show, missis!
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Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
... oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
... thank you so much for reading *this* and your overwhelming feedback - blushing like the frizzy-haired know-it-all getting detention; I know it took a lot to read this unpleasant content/pairing and I'm really honoured- just hope I'm not corrupting you! LOL Really appreciate your encouragement!
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I happen to like being corrupted 
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
Hmmn... goodie, goodie...LOL
Your vocabulary is astounding. I am away to find a dictionary to check out 'misoneistic' to start with.
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Oh
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
, thank you for reading and leaving a review/feedback! As I was thinking about Bella's mindset and how 'hatred' dominates her psyche so much, and how she hates anything different from her/pureblood, anything new, etc. , it just sort of came to me that this would be only one way to profile her... Know the content's not pleasant... but it's Bella... Thanks again for reading & feedback - really appreciate it!
Love your little peek inside Bella's head here!
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Oh
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
, thank you for ALL of your help and encouragement! And for leaving a supportive review/feedback - a peek is probably enough for what goes on in Bella's head for any of us. Thank you again, really appreciate it!
These steps you've taken into the madness of Bella's mind are chilling. I found myself holding my breath... almost afraid to look... but wanting to see...
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Oh
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
, thank you so much for reading and leaving such generous, specific feedback! I wasn't sure if her erratic thought processes/energy were coming across as intended or I was just being ineffectively redundant, so I really appreciate knowing it is depicting her as disturbed as the miserable soul seems to be. Know the content is not pleasant... but, it's Bella... Thank you again!
Bella's always quite scary. Yours is even more so! Well done!
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Oh
Response from nagandsev (Author of Neophobia and Yearning)
, thank you so much for reading and your impression/feedback! Really means a lot to me. I wasn't sure if it was effective enough- showing her erratic pattern, or just redundant without effect, so thank you for affirming that she's coming across as intended!
Scary... But then, it's Bella, after all! This is one woman whose psyche has always intrigued me. Nag, I think this is one of your best works till date!