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Malfoy Manor Into You
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Into You

1: What She Saw

2: Better Left Unsaid

3: Daymares and Dance Steps

4: Autumn Bluebirds

5: Looking for Trouble

6: Pleasureable Punishment

7: Daytime Stargazing

8: Perception is the Enemy of Observation

9: Big Bad Malfoy

10: Seventeen Paces

11: Healer Malfoy

12: Silently

13: Mister Malfoy

14: All Sorted Out

15: Detention

16: To The Pitch

17: Desperation

Into You

Aislyn

72 Reviews   |   72 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Romance Malfoy Manor 36,577 Words 17 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Luna Lovegood Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Draco and Luna are paired in a Legilimency class and find that they have an unexpectedly strong connection to each other.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: What She Saw

Chapter 2: Better Left Unsaid

Chapter 3: Daymares and Dance Steps

Chapter 4: Autumn Bluebirds

Chapter 5: Looking for Trouble

Chapter 6: Pleasureable Punishment

Chapter 7: Daytime Stargazing

Chapter 8: Perception is the Enemy of Observation

Chapter 9: Big Bad Malfoy

Chapter 10: Seventeen Paces

Chapter 11: Healer Malfoy

Chapter 12: Silently

Chapter 13: Mister Malfoy

Chapter 14: All Sorted Out

Chapter 15: Detention

Chapter 16: To The Pitch

Chapter 17: Desperation


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Aislyn

Member Since 2011  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 13  |  3 Reviews Written  |  19 Review Responses

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quaffswinegaily

Lovely and tender. Draco is truly smitten.

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you. Yes, I agree with you. He never had a chance, did he? Luna is one of a kind. I hope I can do them justice.

10/10

Savva

Yay! You updated. Ahh, what a wonderful chapter. I love their slow romancing. Beautiful. And the kiss was simply magnificent.

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

I have submitted the next chapter for you!Thank you for your messages that have been so encouraging and reassuring! You are so right about how meaningful it is to get reviews. I was petrified when I first submitted Into You but seeing it on the sites where I love to read was so exciting that I kept on if only for my own gratification. Now people are sharing with me what they like or don't like and it's as exciting for me to read reviews as when a new chapter posts on a story I'm reading. So fun. Thank you.

10/10

Owlbait

I'm not at all surprised Luna should be a great kisser.

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thanks, I love that you agree about Luna. She's something else!

10/10

sunny33

Very tender and gentle.  Draco really can't belivee his luck, can he? :)

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you. I love that you reminded me of Draco's perspective.

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GryffKat

Double wow! Such lovely writing and very poetic. I love the line" “in the running for the best kiss ever kissed in the whole of Britain.” Really terrific. Well done.

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you! Poor Draco was floundering there, trying to think of a way to reassure Luna. I appreciate your being so specific to tell me that you liked that line. Made me smile!

0/10

helgeke

Full chapter dedicated on a beautiful first kiss. Wow. I really like this attention to detail and realistic pacing. So good. :)

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you for saying that, I'm so glad you were pleased. And thank you for taking the time and sharing the detail that you have put into your review.

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Savva

Oh, I like this story so much. Please, please, update. I will go to Lumos now and leave you a review there. Wonderful story. Brilliantly written Luna. And oh-so-promising romance.Please continue, it's been so long from the last update.

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Have I mentioned that you rock! I don't know how you found Into You on Lumos but I thank you for searching it out. Things are about to get complicated for our Luna, but it's nothing she can't handle....

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quaffswinegaily

I'm loving your Draco and Luna. They fulfil a need in each other. Your Luna is particularly lovely, serene and not completely daffy.

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you! It's great to find out what your impressions are, it makes me so happy to get your feedback. And it is lovely to get such supportive comments.

10/10

GryffKat

I think you hit it just right with Luna with her use of language and the descriptions of what she was doing. I also like that Draco was softer with her. I often imagine he could be that way given the chance. I am enjoying your story and was happy for the update. Draco/Luna my new favorite ship!

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you for your encouragement. It is so great to see that you have been staying with this story and letting me know what your thoughts are about it. More is on the way, please let me know what you think. Your feedback is so specific and that is fun for me to read.

10/10

sunny33

Luna's innate serenity seems to be rubbing off on Draco.  I like the gentle humour. :)

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

Thank you for your reviews and for staying with this story. Your comments mean a lot to me. I have another chapter in queue now, and my beta and I have some more ready to go... I can't wait to see what your thoughts are.

10/10

ScandalousEscort

Awesome and delightful!  (Sorry, just woke up and...  well, that's the gist of it.)

Response from Aislyn (Author of Into You)

It's great to hear any thoughts you have! Thank you for staying with this story and I'm so glad that you are still pleased. Please keep sharing any feedback with me, it makes me so happy! I have another chapter in queue, I hope you enjoy what develops.

10/10

sunny33

Haha!  I wasn't expecting that! :D

10/10

Savva

“I have plenty of minutes, Draco. Would you like to spend some of them with me?” 

“Yes, birdie, I would.” Draco leaned down and pressed his smirking lips against Luna’s. 

That was such a perfect, perfect moment. I desperately needed to read something romantic today. Thank you.  


10/10

ks51689

I'm really enjoying the story so far! I was curious how you might make the pairing work, and I think you're doing a great job keeping both Draco and Luna in character while showing how they could connect. I look forward to the next chapter!

10/10

sunny33

Now that would be a nice surprise. :)

10/10

mick42

This does not sound good, for Draco or Luna.

10/10

mick42

 Aww, Draco and his birdie.

10/10

mick42

Draco is showing a side of himself, that he doesn't have the chance to show to anyone else, the gentle, loving side, that no doubt,his father has tried to stamp out.

10/10

mick42

They are so sweet together, Luna has more faith in Draco, than he has in himself. You write Draco and Luna so well, very much to my liking anyway.

10/10

mick42

I hope she doesn't get hurt.

10/10

mick42

That was a nice suprise, I hope detention goes ok, Severus is not known for giving pleasent detentions, he may be very put out, if they enjoyed themselves.

10/10

mick42

So glad that Draco is being, respectful. and kind. It must be love.  

10/10

mick42

It's nice to see. that Luna is letting Draco see she is hurt, insted of putting on her,dreamy nothing can touch me face. Love that she told him,she made up the critters.

10/10

mick42

That was just lovely, they are so comfortable together.

10/10

mick42

Even though ,Draco and Luna have very different thought processes, they both want the same thing. Nether one has anyone to talk to,they are so lonely.

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