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Whistling in the Dark
Melenka33 Reviews | 9.55/10 (33 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
Years after the war, Harry's attempts to withdraw are foiled by a visit, a different sort of quest, and the interference of well-meaning people.
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Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.
Reviews for Whistling in the Dark
Harry is very hard work, but Tonks seems to be up for it. Lovely ending.
Making progress, soon all will be well.
Dudley is a man of few words, Hermione will more than make up for it I'm sure.
This is a lovely, sensitive story, with a sense of hope at the end. And Dudley... definitely not as dumb as he seems.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thank you so much! I knew I had to tread carefully for this one, but I had good guides (though they may not ever know it).I thought Dudley showed some promise the last time we saw him, and figured he, too, would have had some scars from both his upbringing and brushes with magic. And he certainly made a magnificent foil.Thank you for reading. I really appreciate the comment.
interesting story, do i detect a former relationship btwn H and T, other than just buddy-buddy?I appreciate your time and effort. Thanks!
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
You're spot on that something happened between them, and now they have to navigate around that. I'm glad you find the story intriguing!
and there are the virtual sparks, though fortunately harry made it through without triggering any literal ones. so far, anyway. i really enjoyed tonks' fit of temper. i'll hope it goes a little better for harry in the next one.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
I think they're both unsure what they should do in this situation, much less what they want to do, and there's been plenty of hurt to go around. At least they're talking!
I can't blame her for being angry, but mental illness is not the fault of the person who is sick, which is what I think she is doing here.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Actually, she isn't. She knows what he's going through. They were in St. Mungos together. She simply won't let him use it as an excuse to behave badly. She also won't watch him hurt himself and others and say nothing for fear of offending him. No one else will tell him to get help, and he probably would not listen to anyone else if they did. She knows he will hear her, because of what they've already gone through, so she feels compelled to speak when everyone else would simply let him disappear so they don't have to be made uncomfortable by the fact that he is not well. She knows from personal experience that ignoring mental illness does not make it go away.
Response from blue artemis (Reviewer)
I also know from personal experience that forcing someone to get treatment doesn't work. So, I can't say I like her response, but I do understand it. But the story is incredibly well-written and I find the responses REAL which is what makes me comment so intensely. I apologize if you think I don't like the story, I DO.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Sorry if I sounded harsh. Obviously, this is a hot-button issue for a lot of people. I've had my share of experiences with this topic, and I would hate to think anyone thought I came to it callously. I am relieved that you are enjoying the story and that you find the interactions believable. Also, I should know better than to respond to anything late at night. Again, I apologize if I phrased things badly.
ah, i was getting the impression there was a bit more to harry's reluctance than met the eye, and i guess i was right. am imagining what kind of sparks might fly when harry finds the cojones to approach tonks himself. ;D
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
They are both complex and wounded people, and not too shabby in the magical ability department, so sparks are almost guaranteed.Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
i like molly here. very in character, i think. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thank you! I enjoy writing Molly, maybe because I, too, spend far too much time hollering at teenagers and giving life advice that is rarely taken. LOL
it's an interesting start. the dudley/harry moment in the last book was one of my favorites, so it's nice to see you build upon it. and i see ginny/luna as quite a plausible combination.off to read the next.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
JKR gave us a great moment there, and I believe Dudley saw enough to rethink his parents' mindset when it came to magic. Glad you approve of Ginny/Luna! I thought they'd make a cute pair. :)
Another great conversation with Molly - brilliant! I really love your depiction of Teddy in this. I could just see his little face covered in chocolate, and when he popped up out of the tub with his face covered in fish scales, I died laughing! What a little imp he is! Love it.And you've added to the intrigue of what Tonks and Harry were up to after the war. Just what happened after they spent time in St. Mungo's, I wonder. Whatever it was, I like that Tonks isn't going to treat Harry with kid gloves like everyone else. Perhaps it's exactly what he needs at this point to move forward.I also like the way you dealt with Remus's death in this - just enough to let us know it will always be there, but not so much that the story is bogged down in sorrow. A very nice balance. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thank you! Teddy has turned out to be enormous fun to write. He is definitely a scamp of the first order.I'm glad you like the intrigue. Tonks has always been fiesty and has not shied from confronting the men in her life when they are being fools. I doubt that will change.New chapter on the way soon!
I loved the conversation with Molly - you've captured her beautifully. I can't wait to find out what secrets he couldn't give away in that "After Remus ..." bit. Nice tease!And yay for a new side of Dudley! I'm glad the next chapter is already up, so I don't have to wait for more!
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
See, isn't it clever to wait until a couple are up, so you can read them at once? At least, that's the excuse I use when I fall behind on a story. ;)Thanks for your comments. I adore Molly. She's fun to write.
I really like the way this is going to far and I wonder at the real relationship between Harry and Tonks...
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thanks! I am glad you are enjoying it. More to come (and some questions answered) soon!
I can't really blame Harry, though.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
For being afraid to see Tonks, or for being so damaged? In either case, I agree. He has a right to how he feels. That doesn't stop it from affecting those around him.Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
PTSD completely untreated. Poor Harry.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Somewhat treated, but they didn't really know what to do with him. That's not uncommon. At least he has somewhat of a sense of humor about it!
Dudley is maturing nicely. His working with kids could be atoning for the past but I think it is more developing a part of himself that he never got from his parents. I hope Tonks and Harry can help each other heal from the war.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
JKR gave us hope for Dudley, at the end, so I ran with that. And I figure Harry needs folks around him who still treat him like a regular guy.New chapter is up, and it's all Tonks. :)
This is such a captivating beginning! I am not surprised Harry has major sleep problems after everything. And what a great friendship has developed.I am looking forward to this.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
I am so glad you like it! You gave me a great prompt, and I am really enjoying writing this. There is more on the way, shortly.
Interesting. I always thought these two might get along, after reading Dudley's reaction in DH. Good job. Waiting for next chapter.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Yeah, I thought they might get on as well, especially since Dudley really is the last family Harry has - not counting his aunt and uncle, because Harry certainly doesn't. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Awesome. I love cynical!Harry, and the odd comfort he now has with Dudley is wonderful. Well done :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thanks! I really enjoy Harry this way, and I figure he and Dudley came to an understanding in DH, so that would likely have continued on some level.
This is an awesome beginning. Your Harry seems like the perfect mix of his familiar, innate loyalties and the somewhat disconnected mindframe of a person who has survived great trauma. So much more appropriate than what we were given in the dreaded canon epilogue. I love the portrayal of Dudley here, as well, and the Ginny/Luna bit is quite believable. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thank you so much. I rare write Harry, but when I do, he's never stable. I can't imagine he would be after the war. I admit to needing Ginny out of the picture, and felt the least I could do was give her a chance at love, too. ;)
I sometimes have trouble seeing Harry as romantic, or sexy, or anything but the boy from the original tale. You have done a nice job here convincing me otherwise.I always think that having shared something personal always brings two people closer together as it is something that only they can share. I feel this to be very true in the case of Harry and Tonks and their time in St. Mungo's. I have no doubt that a happy ending is in store for them. Great story!
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely reviews. I am so glad you enjoyed it, and that I was able to show you another side of the characters (as I imagine them, anyway). I am known for open-ended stories, but in this case, I think it's safe to imagine a happy ending for everyone. :)
There is such lovely tension between these two. I do like that Tonks is not making this easy for Harry, but also not making it impossible either. I even adore your Dudley. I don't believe I have ever been able to say that in a story before. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Thank you! If not for the prompt, I never would have paired up Harry and Tonks, but it was certainly fun to explore what that might look like - even if they are both damaged emotionally. And thank you especially for liking Dudley. He ought to have his own chance at redemption, so it's good to see I managed it.
Well, Harry had a little social interaction and he lived through it. Maybe he will try it again. I look forward to his interaction with Tonks. I hope she can "fix" him. This version of Harry is very depressing (but probably realistic).
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Yes, I took a chance writing Harry with PTSD, but I always thought there must be some cost to such prolongued trauma, especially ending in a war where everyone lost so much. Still, the little glimpses of humor, combined with a great deal of patience and some love, show that he's not completely lost.
Well, I think that went better than expected. Hopefully they can continue to make progress.
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
Better than he had any right to, really. Still, she must have seen something worth saving, or she wouldn't bother with him.
I sense some fireworks on the horizon. Hopefully it is the good kind, but Tonks is awfully angry with him. I hope she gives him a chance and that in return he makes an effort ot live his life properly. Off to find out ...
Response from Melenka (Author of Whistling in the Dark)
He needed fireworks (of one sort or another) to wake him up. Tonks was just the person to give them to him (in one way or another...).