What beautiful timing! LoL! It sounds as if the old house might just be haunted after all, doesn't it? ^_^

Oh God! What at way to throw cold water on the mood!

This is very enjoyable so far. I'm glad I started reading it.

What a horrible timing for the bed to collapse...:-) Thank you for a great update, I loved it.

Hilarious! What a way to cut the inspiration man, you're cruel... and of curse super talented by creating the perfect first kiss scene and breaking all loose so to speak

Such a lovely build up to a comedic ending.  I loved it.

I like that. "I'm lost" epitomizes both their lives so well. ^_^

Oh, lovely.  The sadness is palpable, but there is some hope there.

I think you showed the difficulties for Hermione and Severus in a very good way. Looking forwar to follow their way to a hopefully better life

I have really enjoyed this glimpse into a post-War world where people and things are still broken and in need of healing, very realistic and heartfelt.
I hope the rest of the journey for Hermione, Luna and Severus will be an optimistic and purposeful one. THank you very much and looking forward to more (please, and soon!).

I am absolutely trilled to find a new chapter to this story, you have me hooked, lined and sinked, I am completely intrigued. You did a very good job with this meeting between Hermione and Severus, your meeting between two war veterans who both are lost and hurting from the war was excellently done and avoided being cliché. I am so looking forward to follow this story!

This is a wonderful story. Very different. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

Interesting start. I'm ready for more. :)

A fabulous and intriguing beginning, and having Luna and Hermione as main characters always make for a great story! Looking forward to more! Thank you.

Well, a fine start.  Looking forward to where this will go.

What a wonderful beginning.

What a great beginning!  I am completely hooked and cannot wait for more on this.  I love Luna (and Hermione too), so I'm always on the lookout for stories which feature her significantly.  I'm looking forward to seeing how Luna's purchase of the house will wind up helping lots of survivors of the war...

Lovely start. Keep up the good work.

Oh my. This story is the kind that will trap my heart with the sorrow to know that much of a person's character is defined by their childhood. I really enjoyed this piece as a first chapter I commend you. Thank you for sharing!

This is sounding like its going to be a fablous story.  Truley, and excellent start.  

Wow, truly intriguing first chapter. Not only are Hermione and Luna my favourite girsl, but your story deals with what happened to all the children left alone after the war. Very well written and I am very much looking forward to read more.

Wow what a start!  

Ack! A cliffhanger on chapter 1!  I hope you plan to continue this story because I'm sucked in and want to see where it's going to go.  It looks very promising.

Intriguing beginning!  I found it interesting that you chose to have Luna think differently about her father after his betrayal - it makes sense, but I don't think I've ever read a story that voiced it before.   And poor Severus - although it's a very believable backstory that fits right in with canon.  I look forward to more.

Very impressive beginning! It sounds like Luna and Hermione are slowly making their way through a long time of darkness and hoping to do the same for those around them. I very much look forward to reading where they go on from here. :)