New Chapter for Darkness Past
Darkness Past
Annabun74 Reviews | 5.76/10 (74 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
Luna, her soul still damaged after the final battle, has bought an old Children's Home outside a grubby mill town. Hermione is helping her turn it into a refuge, but someone who had been there as a child comes back. EWE, Opaljade's TPP bid win
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Tall, incredibly gorgeous redhead, story-writer and recently got into drabbles and fanfic in a larger way.
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AHHHHHHHHHH!! EVIL CLIFF!!!! EVIL!! lol must read more!!!! Love it!
Great chapter and now I am craving takeout Indian...
The description of the painting is idilic and hope somebody whith talent can recreate it for all of us.
Thank you for a great update. I really like this Severus who accepts and aknowlegde that having friends and accept the possibility to start a new turn of life is something that he not only needs, but also deserves. I am very much looking forward for more.
What a wonderful update! Luna`s presence always light up the pages, and you have definitely done her credit by your characterisation.
Thank you and looking forward to more!
Such a lovely chapter. Keep up the good work. ^_^
I love it! I'm so glad Hermione and Severus crossed paths in this way. It will help them all. A lovely story so far!
That was adorably awkward and I'm glad he opened up a bit.
Ooh, thanks for sharing this! You don't need me to say it, but it's good. Love the characters, the dialogue, the description -- I'm hooked! Can't wait to see what else you have in store... :)
Wow. Another fabulous chapter. Although I do kind of hate them for hating on the lipstick -- some of us feel we have appearances to keep up, rational or not. Nice characters. Loved the change of pace when Severus let her have her moment and that shared intimacy. I love this!
Please continue. Excellent!
Poor Severus. How sad. Hermione better watch the road!!!
I love the story so far. I'm off to read the next chapter!
What a wonderful ending to such a lovely story!
Response from Annabun (Author of Darkness Past)
*Bows* Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Well, that didn't take long (yay!). I love them getting dumped on the floor. We'll see if that cools things off and brings them back to reality, or if they shrug their shoulders and keep going?
Well, the car ride was a little awkward, but they recovered quickly and now that is all out of the way.
I loved Luna's painting and the praise she received for it.
And does Severus have to stay the night? Darn it! ;)
I'm glad they are being friendly straight away and that Severus let her help him. I wonder what sort of reaction he will have to the home, and if Hermione was too caught up in the moment to even consider it.
I'm not sure why I haven't read this yet. Better late than never. I'm loving the beginning and suspect it will only get better. Off to find out ...
I AM NOT SURE IF I LEFT A REVIEW BEFORE, BUT I AM NOW. SAW IT WAS A FEATURED STORY AND READ IT AGAIN.
WONDERFUL STORY, & HATED TO SEE IT END.
WOULD LOVE TO SEE YOU CONTINE IT IN A SEQUEL WITH OTHER CHARACTERS TO SEE WHAT THEY THOUGHT OF SEVERUS & HERMIONE GETTING TOGETHER. RON WOULD BLOW UP & HARRY WOULD FAINT (OR MAYBE NOT?)!!
I love this story and have been reccing it around. Any update soon?
Response from Annabun (Author of Darkness Past)
Alas, it's complete as it lies. I did, however, participate in the SSHG_Exchange this year. I won't say whether my story has or hasn't been posted yet, but once the reveals are up I'll put it on TPP as well as the Pit.
Am I mean to chuckle at the trick the bed died to perform? It's timing was excellent. I love a good interruption at an inoportune moment - when it happens to others, of course.
Luna is great in this story. She is understanding and empathic, which makes her an ideal protagonist here.
I read this months ago and loved it then. Congratulations on getting selected as a featured story this month.
Response from Annabun (Author of Darkness Past)
OMG! Thank you for the review - and thank you for the heads up! *Goes off dancing with happiness for the rest of the day*
Not many will try and do something good for someone else. Even though they had to fight and inflict damage in the war...they still have good souls. I bet your story made a lot of us thinking of what can we do with our lives to make thing better around us. Thank you.
Response from Annabun (Author of Darkness Past)
That's very sweet of you to say so! And yes, I had seen something about people damaged by war in one way or another, and that went into the prompting for this.Thank you for your review.
Response from Annabun (Author of Darkness Past)
That's very sweet of you to say so! And yes, I had seen something about people damaged by war in one way or another, and that went into the prompting for this.Thank you for your review.
bwhahahahaha xD love it
LOL (at the ending).... but a truly captivating chapter. Thank you and looking forward to more!
Well, that's no way to end the evening.
Oh no casualties with that collapsing bed I hope? I don't want the two of then end up with a hernia..