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Potions Under Duress Rain
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Rain

1: One-shot story

Rain

chivalric

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Potions Under Duress 323 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Severus Snape

Harry bumps into Snape in the middle of a thunderstorm...

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chivalric

Member Since 2007  |  65 Stories  |  Favorited by 776  |  213 Reviews Written  |  4,182 Review Responses

Located in Germany. Female, around 40. The first chapters of my published novels/novellas can be found here on the archive.
Other than writing, I am reading, cycling, running, and singing in a choir.

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10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Beautiful but so very sad. ~sniffs~

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

The prequel should go into queue soon. Although... it is just as sad, in its own way...Thanks and hugs for reviewing!

8/10

ConstantVigilance

This is well written, but I can't imagine Snape ever shedding tears in public. :D

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Did I say he's crying? No, I didn't. I said it looked like he's crying because of the rain on his face. the rest is up to the reader.Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

sregner

Oh...that was so sad!  Well done for angst

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Thanks, dear!

0/10

Ravenscara

Aww, that's so sad. It was a really great one-shot though. hope you post the prequel soon.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Got to find it first. I'm sure I wrote it, at least... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

GryffKat

Lovely and Lyrical. Happy New Year!

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Lyrical...  thanks fot the compliment! And a happy new year to you too!

10/10

braye27

Oh, this is beautifully written, but I sure hate that it is Severus who is crying and not Ron.  *sniff sniff*Well done, Chivalric!Beth

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

There was a time when I thought I would write a sequel... sadly enough, I don't have the time for it at the moment. But many thanks for reading and liking!

10/10

mimmom

Oh dear.  Poor Severus.Excellent!

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

hexgirl

I have to agree with ClayPotter, I really can't see Hermione with Ron. I don't have any feelings of animosity towards Ron, but he is just too juvenile for her. Severus is her man. This was beautifully written, achingly sad and yes, I do want to read the prequel.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Oof, that means I have to search my harddrive... haven't seen it in ages. Agree with you and ClayPotter: H and R are just a no-go. But occasionally I am in the mood for canon :-)Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

Severus49

Oh, no! You're breaking my heart!

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Sorry :-) I'm well for doing that occasionally... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

tenoh27

Poor Severus. Nicely written, thank you.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

10/10

HBAR

Oh, that is heartbreaking.  Nicely done.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

I must have been in a dark mood the day I wrote it... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

ClayPotter

My hsuband has finally agreed to sit down with me and our children and watch the movies. He has made it through the first four so far. It would be too much to ask for him to ever read the books. But even with what little he has seen so far, even he can't see Hermione with Ron. I'll never understand why JKR insisted on putting those two together.Snape has every right to cry. I feel like it when I read the epilogue.Beautifully written. Very moving.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Ah, well, imo the epilogue is just one out of many possible endings. And not the one I like to read. H and R? Silly idea. Which is why I usually pair her with Snape.Got to find the prequel... Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Snape's silent sorrow was very moving.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Thanks, dear!

9/10

Jinxie

How beautiful and bittersweet, thank you for sharing!

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

linlawless

Awwww, poor Severus ... Nicely written, though! :)

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

At least he's not dead... got to find the prequel. I'm pretty sure I've written it...Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

sunny33

Aww. *sniff*  :)

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

*g* He's not dead. There's always a chance as long as you are not dead...Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear!

10/10

sevibaby

This was a wonderful shorty.  Very well done.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

Thanks, dear! Glad you liked it.

10/10

snitchette

Yes it's a wonder Snape is crying at the sight of these two! Harry should be crying at the sight too as everyone in the world. And if you find it I'd love to read the prequel.

Response from chivalric (Author of Rain)

I swear I will look for it at the weekend. I know where it should be, but then, I am not even entirely sure I have actually written it... If I find it, I will post it soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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