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Observing the Obvious Chapter 4: An Apparent Obsession
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Observing the Obvious

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4: An Apparent Obsession

An Apparent Obsession

Observing the Obvious

Chapter 4 of 4

Ladymage Samiko

Severus finds himself slightly perturbed… but not enough, apparently.

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An Apparent Obsession

Snape stared at the table in consternation. Crumpets, clotted cream, cake, cucumber sandwiches… Strawberries. Some eggy, pasty things. Several tins of tea next to a pot of boiling water and a cream jug. No sugar, according to his preference.

Miss Granger had developed the oddest obsession with feeding him. Breakfast, elevenses, lunch, afternoon tea… Several times a day he was met with small mountains of food of all shapes, sizes, and cuisines. As well as Granger, egging him on.

It was disturbing.

He’d be fatter than Slughorn by the time she was done.

“Another éclair, Professor?”

“Yes, thank you, Granger.”


ANs: And I return to this series after… a long time, brought back by GS100s 'afternoon tea' challenge. Will I continue? I hope to, but it depends on such things as inspiration, time, and the encroachment of longer projects, both fanfic and original. Still, as always, a small token in the little box below is always appreciated, even if the author does act like a miserly hermit.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Observing the Obvious

62 Reviews  |  6.24/10 Average

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On his terms

This little series is cute! And I agree, Hermione would want to  look after him.  Maybe Severus needs some exercise to offset the meals...

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dashzap

Charming! Thank you.

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Jinxie

Hmm, Hermione's getting ideas.

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Jinxie

Hmm, looks like someone else is the lucky b*** here.

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Jinxie

lol.  Nice start!

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Jinxie

"He’d be fatter than Slughorn by the time she was done."

But it's not stopping him.  (snigger)  Well done & thanks for sharing!

10/10

anniet

Cute.  I find this story an amusing and light diversion to read.  Glad to see you updated!  Here's hoping the next update will be soon... :)

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FruGal

I would like to read more about Hermione's efforts to put weight on Snape.  I would also like to be the one to lick the chocolate and cream from his person.

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cabepfir

Ahah, lovely, and very much in Christmas' spirit :D

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aurora borealis

I think Hermione must have been channeling Molly Weasley!  Nicely done.

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indigo_rose

And that's when he knew, "Someday I'm going to marry that girl."  Slytherin Plotting commences... 

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JIMBOPATTERSON

WONDERFUL ADDITION. JUST RIGHT. HOPE YOUR BUNNIES COME UP WITH LOTS MORE FOR US LIKE MAYBE BREAKFAST IN BED OR A MIDNIGHT SNACK IN THE LIBRARY OR BATHROOM? LOVE IT, THANKS A BUNCH, JIM

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tenoh27

Glad to know that Severus is up for a hearty meal. Tuck in, indeed! Thank you for the continuation.

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immortalbliss

LOL.. That was funny!

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cenicienta

Great ficlett! That was a very believable reaction and just as curiosity, what will se make for him? Better yet, how will she feed him?

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HermioneJeanSnape

Please oh please, continue this wonderfullness? You're one of my favorite authors on here... and it'd be so lovely to see her going in without a schoolgirl crush, just the need to FEED him.

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sharris

this is a wonderful start to an interesting story.  Oh, I know it is a one shot, but can't you continue it a little bit?

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quaffswinegaily

Another worthy cause for Hermione to pursue. Well done.

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salvamea

you were right, someone with Hermiones will to take care of people would be able to see more, or different things.
thanks for sharing.
and changing the view.

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snitchette

Lovely! Soemone need to look after him and evryone knows that the way to boy's heart is often through his stomach.

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MsTree

Oh, definitely, that man needs feeding. I've noticed the trend in a couple of other fics lately as well. ^_^

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KingPig

LOL! That must be the most realistic reaction I could imagine Hermione having! Hehehehe poor Snape.

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AdeliaMaggot

Love it.

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mimmom

I love it!

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tenoh27

LOL.... that was so apt! Loved Hermione`s reaction... Thank you.

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