Addressing the Apparent
Chapter 3 of 4
Ladymage SamikoHermione observes the result of her handiwork.
ReviewedHermione smiled with a deep, visceral satisfaction, the sort that comes from knowing that one’s efforts are well-appreciated— and from knowing that one can make a surly Snape smile in sheer bliss.
He apparently had a weakness for éclairs. So did his nose, which inevitably acquired a decorative dollop of cream. The hazards of physiognomy, she surmised— and why he never ate them in public. Difficult to be intimidating with chocolate smears on one’s fingers and cream on one’s nose.
Hermione stared, disconcerted, when his tongue slipped out to lick those chocolate smears.
Ye—es. Impossible to be intimidating like that.
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62 Reviews | 6.24/10 Average
This little series is cute! And I agree, Hermione would want to look after him. Maybe Severus needs some exercise to offset the meals...
Charming! Thank you.
Hmm, Hermione's getting ideas.
Hmm, looks like someone else is the lucky b*** here.
lol. Nice start!
"He’d be fatter than Slughorn by the time she was done."
But it's not stopping him. (snigger) Well done & thanks for sharing!
Cute. I find this story an amusing and light diversion to read. Glad to see you updated! Here's hoping the next update will be soon... :)
I would like to read more about Hermione's efforts to put weight on Snape. I would also like to be the one to lick the chocolate and cream from his person.
Ahah, lovely, and very much in Christmas' spirit :D
I think Hermione must have been channeling Molly Weasley! Nicely done.
And that's when he knew, "Someday I'm going to marry that girl." Slytherin Plotting commences... 
WONDERFUL ADDITION. JUST RIGHT. HOPE YOUR BUNNIES COME UP WITH LOTS MORE FOR US LIKE MAYBE BREAKFAST IN BED OR A MIDNIGHT SNACK IN THE LIBRARY OR BATHROOM? LOVE IT, THANKS A BUNCH, JIM
Glad to know that Severus is up for a hearty meal. Tuck in, indeed! Thank you for the continuation.
LOL.. That was funny!
Great ficlett! That was a very believable reaction and just as curiosity, what will se make for him? Better yet, how will she feed him?
Please oh please, continue this wonderfullness? You're one of my favorite authors on here... and it'd be so lovely to see her going in without a schoolgirl crush, just the need to FEED him.
this is a wonderful start to an interesting story. Oh, I know it is a one shot, but can't you continue it a little bit?
Another worthy cause for Hermione to pursue. Well done.
you were right, someone with Hermiones will to take care of people would be able to see more, or different things.
thanks for sharing.
and changing the view.
Lovely! Soemone need to look after him and evryone knows that the way to boy's heart is often through his stomach.
Oh, definitely, that man needs feeding. I've noticed the trend in a couple of other fics lately as well. ^_^
LOL! That must be the most realistic reaction I could imagine Hermione having! Hehehehe poor Snape.
Love it.
I love it!
LOL.... that was so apt! Loved Hermione`s reaction... Thank you.