Yay!

I had to read this with no sound bites (no speakers on the work computer). I think this piece worked well without them. I'll have to go home and listen to them now, to find out if they add to the story.

This was absolutely exquisite! Though, in all honesty, I'm not sure the 'sound bites' actually improved it; rather, for me personally, they kind of detracted from it.  The words you have written portray such beauty and depth in themselves - I didn't feel they needed anything else really.  Clearly Snape is AR & vice versa - so hearing his voice helps in some way to enforce it in the mind (not that AR/Snape's voice is ever out of my mind much any way!) But neither Alan Rickman's nor Emma Thompson's roles in The Song of Lunch seem to really fit in with the feel you've got here of Severus & Hermione (IMHO), much as I love Christopher Reid's wonderful poetry (so much so that I actually bought the book of it!) However, 10/10 for the whole concept - and even more for the story itself - poetically beautiful!

Yay! Brilliant, you managed to get it to imbed here"nibble it" ~sigh~