this is gorgeous. i love HP/DM, but rarely have i found such depth. this is what these characters were meant to do and i love it. my only criticism is that it ended! i just wanted to keep reading! thank you so much, keep it up

I very much liked the way your story was written, the small "chapters" and using of present tense made it very intense!

Insanely amazing. I love the mix of ranchy with the post=war emotional turmoil.

Great stuff :) x

I really liked the structure of this story. The emotional and post-war content was fantastic. Very intense!