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Second Chance
Pyttan35 Reviews | 5.63/10 (35 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Severus is, against all odds, still alive. But he's not exactly the way he used to be. And a second chance is diffcult to handle.
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I came upon this story through the 'random' button as its not a category I would normally read. The premise of a mature but young looking Severus compelled to be at school with Harry and co was a first for me, and I was enjoying it. Very sorry to see that it hasn't been updated for many months and that you appear to have moved onto other stories. Would have loved to see how this one developed
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you for your lovely review. I made a newbie mistak and published this one before it was finished and unfortunatly painted myself into a corner with the timeline. However, it isn't quite as abndoned as it seems. I just want the whole thing finished before I start publishing again.
Oh my goodness, I just found your story and read it in one go. It is lovely. I really like Severus' interaction with Draco and am really curious how his tendre for a more subdues Lavender continues. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm so glad you like it. It is my first attempt at writing fan fic, and I have made a few newbie mistakes that are giving me some difficulties. And Lavender has matured a bit, hasn't she? But she has a good sense of fun, that girl, something I think Severus needs very much. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hopefully I will post the next chapter soon.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm so glad you like it. It is my first attempt at writing fan fic, and I have made a few newbie mistakes that are giving me some difficulties. And Lavender has matured a bit, hasn't she? But she has a good sense of fun, that girl, something I think Severus needs very much. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hopefully I will post the next chapter soon.
This is excellent. I hope you update soon.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm glad you like it, and I'll try. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Enjoying Minerva and Severus' continued relationship depicted, such interesting dynamics; also, enjoy Severus being re-sorted into Slytherin, but with a twist this time, he's no longer an underdog, insecure, dependent on others for approval/acceptance -- he's asserting himself with confidence and a feeling of rightful self-worth.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I had hoped he would go to another house but, alas, it wasn't meant to be. He refused.Now it begins ...Thanks for reviewing.
Comparing to some other second chance stories this really is a second chance earned the hard way. With Minerva on his side and after a good rest and some food I hope Severus will feel that Bellatrix' punishment actually turns out to be a blessing in disguise.I'm glad you replied at another reviewer that the 3rd chapter will be up soon, since you really got me hooked.It's not just the content of your story that I like very much, you also have a very flowing and pleasant writing style and I wouldn't have guessed you are not a native speaker in English. Keep up the good work!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
It never sat well with me that Sev never got a break, never got to triumph and never got the chance to have a normal life, and this whole idea was a result of that. And I'll try to keep going. It's very slow work writing in your second language ... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)
Well, you are really giving him a clean slate: not just a second chance but also in a younger and healthier body. I do understand writing in your second language will be slower than in your first but on the other hand it seems to me you really have nothing to fear. Your writing is impeccable and your story line is perfect. Please don't be insecure about your talents. You really shouldn't and real life is too short and too precious to do so. Leave that to our beloved miss Granger :-)
O this is a creepy start for our poor potionsmaster... and for me as well since I didn't know after finishing this chapter if you would stay true to canon and if he would indeed end up in the future. I needed to read more. Very well done!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I bit of a cliff hanger there wasn't it? I'm glad I lured you in. Thank you so much.
Good. He's got Minerva on his side. I can't wait to see how Harry reacts to the news of Sev's reappearance. Great start.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Minerva is very happy to have him back. He has a special place in her heart I think. Thank for reading and reviewing, third chapter is soon to come.
Extremely original concept. I am really looking forward to seeing how this story progresses.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I was very uncertain about this idea but went with it anyway. Now I'm glad I did. Thank you so much.
Oh, those poor people. To have been through so much and still not be sure who to trust or how much to trust them.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Trust is a very fragile thing isn't it. Now they can build again. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts with me.
Hagrid is such a love - enjoy his protective, assertive side being shown. The scene with Minerva and Severus is so spot-on portrayal -- such intriguing portrayal of Minerva dealing with a younger wizard, a younger Severus. and the clenching memory before the Sorting Hat went on (as well as all the other prominent recollections) and the powerful realisation and acceptance of him truly still being with her/alive, 'You fought to kill, and I couldn't do that, could I?' - left me breathless! Thanks!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm so glad you liked it. I have always felt that Severus and Minerva have a special bond and I'm so happy that came through. Thank you so much for telling me!
Well done - his exhaustion and frustration are so tangible - and the bit about the Sorting Hat was so poignant. Imagine what's racing through Minerva's mind right now !!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm glad you liked the Sorting Hat. It was one of the last things added to the chapter. Severus was terribly close to being hexed into oblivion. Closer than he realises probably.
I'm glad that's sorted! Oooh, I hate bellatrix. She's so awful.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I feel the same way. We have had quite enough of Bellatrix. I'm still feeling somewhat guilty about exposing poor Sev to her in the first place ...
Really captivating and powerful dynamics, descriptions, portrayals -- the contrast from Lily to Bellatrix in Severus' dwindling moments of life - god, to be found barely alive by Bella - poor Sev! Can't wait for more!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I liked that contrast myself and I'm very happy you noticed it. And yes; dying in the presens of Bellatrix is possibly the worst imaginable death. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Hurrah - you've posted!!! I didn't know you had until now - so much fun to read this again - it was my pleasure to have the first look at it a few months ago !!! Keep up the great work - it's a fine story.'
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm glad you still like it. And I'll try.
Very interesting idea, and a well written beginning. This is going to get dark and violent, and we'll see how unstable Bellatrix Lestrange can be.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm so glad you think so. Thank you for reviewing. And about Bella: you'll see.
This is a creepy start to things.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you. Bellatrix without creepy, just doesn't work does she?
What an intriguing start you've woven! Can't wait for the next chapter! *applauds*
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. Second chapter is in vq.
I must admit I felt a bit sad that he deliberately choose Slytherin house, but I think it's very much in character for him. After all we can't expect him to cast aside his former negative experiences, he really needs to experience that this time things are different.I expect he will have double potions with the Griffyndors? Hope he will see things have changed.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm glad you say that, since I find it sad too. He wasn't supposed to get sorted into Slytherin when I started writing this story. The only problem was that he refused to cooperate. I tried to place him else where but no. Eventually -- odd as it sounds -- I had to write this chapter his way, but it left me with a somewhat bitter aftertaste.
Response from orlando switch (Reviewer)
It doesn't sound odd at all, since characters tend to write themselves in a way you can't always influence as a writer. And as I said: I do think it is very much in character for him to only trust what he already knows and to mistrust everything else by default. After all he hasn't really had time to contemplate his past and to think about what he would like to do different this time.The only thing I do hope is that he will be able to start trusting better experiences when he has them. Because then it will be up to him -as a concious decision- to either continue to view the world as he always did or to allow himself to get some new experiences of life. I think until now he views this second chance only as a way of having a different career without having difficult masters to obey. But still with the same mindset and the same feelings towards others and towards the world.I hope that along this way, he will discover that he can have a second chance on a more personal and psychological level als well. He can have friends if he want and he can learn to trust the world. He can become whole again. He only needs to see all these possibilities.. and get some guidance of course.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Oh, I would like to respond so much to this! I love to talk about this story!Thanks for reviewing and I'll try to post soon.
very interesting. I look forward to more
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you very much. I'll do my best.
I have to say that I passed this story by several times as the characters listed on the summary page included Bellatrix. I find stories with Bella as a main character tend to be on the dark side and those don't entice me. For some reason I did look at your story and am glad that I did. If find it fun and sweet. I like the angle of Severus as a wandmaker and having to deal with the likes of Hagrid and Luna as a student. I look forward to what happens next. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm glad you did read my story after all, and I'm very pleased that you enjoyed the read.Bellatrix becoming Severus's savior was really my prompt to start writing this story in the first place. I liked the irony of her saving him, and I couldn't let the idea go, even if I do realise that the first chapter ended up a bit different from the rest of the story.Thank you for reading and reviewing and I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too.
Oh, I love this so much! It's delightfully wild and wonderful! The vision of Severus having to sit through Trelawney and Hagrid's NEWT level classes - wonderful! *Grinning like the Cheshire Cat!* Love Mr Ollivander and the beautiful revelation of the wands singing to Severus! Really lovely!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Thank you so much! And I'm working on one of those chapters right now. I hope you will enjoy it.
Really enjoy the revealing dialogue between Minerva and Severus; you've captured so well their comraderie and nuances - it's really delightful in this scenario with Minerva facing the now younger Severus persona; lovely wisdom and premise for having a 'second chance'! If only he wasn't so stubborn... oh, Severus!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
For some reason I have always pictured Minerva and Severus as friends of sorts. Very competitive towards each other of course, but still friends. I also think they both have a pragmatic streak -- that sometimes is a bit scary -- in common.And he is stubborn, isn't he? But so is she.Thank you for the lovely review. It makes it so much easier to continue writing.
O I'm glad you updated and offered us again such a delicate treat. What I like very much is the complexity of your characters while at the same time they do feel completely canon. I especially like Snape's dry wit and Minerva's fierceness. We don't see her often like this but I think this is also part of her personality and apart from that, the war must have changed her as well.I think Snape should accept Minerva's offer, though I do understand his reluctancy completely, since he doens't have good memories of the school system, both as being a student and a teacher. But I also understand Minerva's POV that the best clean slate for him includes a finished education with diploma and good grades, so I'm curious what he will choose.. But first a new wand. Will this one have the same qualities as his old one? And will Luna buy this story of him being Snape jr.? On the other hand we know her as being a very discrete person, so she wouldn't do anything to embarass him.I hope Snape will soon find someone of his own age that he can trust, someone with whom he doesn't share already a long history as being old collegues. Having a clean slate as such is nice, but having real friends and people to share your new life with would be a welcome addition to it, I suppose.So as you already might have guessed I'm very intrigued how this story will develop. Though I totally understand craftmanship takes time, I do hope you'll update soon. I also wish you more reviews since I really think both you and this story deserve that.. if I could wield my magic to make this happen, I would.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm very pleased that you think that Minerva and Severus feels cannon. I'm a huge fan of the books, so that is very important to me. I do have a couple of chapters ready to go, so more is coming up. I post one at the time though, since it takes me so long to write.Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you like my story. Reviews like this makes it so much easier to carry on.
Hello, I hope that you continue w/ this well written story.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Hi! I painted myself into a corner, but I'm slowly working my way out of it. I do plan to continue and I have a chapter that is almost finished now. Thank you for your encouragement.
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
Hi! I painted myself into a corner, but I'm slowly working my way out of it. I do plan to continue and I have a chapter that is almost finished now. Thank you for your encouragement.
LOL. This is fun! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from Pyttan (Author of Second Chance)
I'm happy you think so and thank you for telling me. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter ...