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Potions Under Duress There, Where I Can Never Find You
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There, Where I Can Never Find You

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

There, Where I Can Never Find You

shefa

47 Reviews   |   47 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 29,083 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

You disappear into a moonlit night, and I might have seen you go, if only I'd been paying attention.

Written for the Summer SSHG Exchange.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11


About shefa

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shefa

Member Since 2007  |  24 Stories  |  Favorited by 151  |  73 Reviews Written  |  944 Review Responses

Relatively longtime reader of this OTP, fervent SSHG shipper. 

Author Website
http://machshefa.livejournal.com/
Also Archived At
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Reviews for There, Where I Can Never Find You

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0/10

Ljpjcg

A sigh of relief finally. What a ride!  Severus words of devotion are romantic and emotional. So another sigh from me, this time wistful. 

0/10

Ljpjcg

This chapter makes me cry and cry and cry. I'd like to know what you were feeling when you wrote this.  I feel both despair and elation. You've written a powerfully emotional scene.

0/10

londonlupin

Just read and truly enjoyed

0/10

KingPig

I normally try to leave a review for each chapter as I read through the story, but I was so engrossed in the tale that simply clicking on the arrows to advance to the next chapter had me frothing with impatience. Even so, now that I've reached the end, I still cant find the right words to adequately express how this story moved me. I love the twists and turns of the storyline, I love your portrayal of Ron, I love how *real* the dialogue is... I am deeply in love with this fic!

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

This was so wonderful to wake up to. Thank you! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this story so much that you had to continue reading rather than pausing to comment. :) That's the best response, ever, I think. It was an interesting story to write. It's such a pleasure to hear how much you appreciated it. :)

10/10

SituationalExtrovert

Brilliant.  Beginning to end, flat out brilliant.I'm kind of sad that I waited until it was complete to read it, because the cliffhangers within were marvelous.  I can't tell you how many times I actually gasped out loud.  It was kind of funny; my husband would be startled every time I did, and ask "what's wrong?"  ANd I would answer, "Nothing!  This story is just that good!"Thanks for writing it!

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Oh, yay! Thank you!  I'm so happy you enjoyed this story--it's not an easy one, I don't think.  I appreciate you dropping by to let me know your response.  :)

10/10

sunny33

Awesome. Loved the beautiful graphics and poetry as well. :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)  I appreciate your reviews...

10/10

sunny33

So, he saw Lily after all. :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

He did, in a manner of speaking.  He saw the version of Lily he'd been carrying around all the while inside himself. :)

10/10

sunny33

Imagine what Lily will have to say... :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Heh.  Indeed... :)

10/10

sunny33

Interesting how he didn't say who the assailants were at any point. :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

They were masked... but something about them does niggle...

10/10

sunny33

perhaps the harshest memories come through stronger? :0

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Wouldn't that be harsh...  Poor Severus.

10/10

sunny33

mMaybe he just doesn't remember how to use his magic. :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Could be :)  It's all tangled up at the moment... magic and memory...

10/10

sunny33

Interesting how the idea of magic is more threatening than finding out he has a wife. :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

LOL!  So true.  I think it's because, odd as it is, he feels comfortable with her... familiar.  But magic?  That's something else, entirely. :)

10/10

sunny33

He sems to have some distant recollections. Maybe all is not lost. :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

He is still himself, no matter that his narrative memory has gone missing.  It's what shocked Hermione the most, I think.  How *familiar* he still is.

10/10

sunny33

Ginny is one smart cookie. :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

She is, isn't she?  *grins

10/10

sunny33

Aha.  The plot thickens.  No memory of magic or his past relationships in the magical world.  Was it done to him, or is it psychological? :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

*hums innocently...  Excellent questions you ask.

10/10

sregner

I just read this through again and it is seriously the very best story ever.  Now it'll be one of my favorites (I've probably told you this a million times but just wanted you to know again).

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

*beams  Thank you for taking the time to not only read, but let me know once again how much you love this story.  I'm *so* thrilled!  Having readers like you fuels the muse, that's for sure!  I hope that you're enjoying my other stories, too... King of Swords is posting its last two chapters today and tomorrow :)

10/10

sunny33

Did he go off on a mission of his own, or was he abducted? :)

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Excellent question :)  So glad you're reading!  Thanks for commenting :)

8/10

lmm

enjoying your story!!Keep the chapters coming!

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Thanks! This story is complete, but there are many others of mine posted here that you might enjoy :)  Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

PHONELADY

OMG THATS LOW DOWN AND DIRTY POOR THING IM GLAD SHE FOUND HIM GEES SOME PEOPLE!!!!!!

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Agreed!  :)  

10/10

ClayPotter

So heartbreaking, yet hopeful.Beautiful. I anxiously await the next chatper.

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Thank you!

10/10

ClayPotter

Oh dear! Whose dark and evil spell work could be responsible for this Muggle Severus who can't even remember his beloved wife or his magical life? What a sad existence.She simply must find him.I'm glad to know he is not suffering from some form of dimentia.This tale becomes yet more intriguing.

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Good questions!  I'm so glad you're enjoying this.  Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

10/10

ClayPotter

This is a fascinating beginning. Part memory loss, part kidnapping? Could his memory have been modified? Could he have wandered off into the night and been led astray by some malignant force? The possibilities are endless. Guess I'll have to wait for the rest of the story.

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

All excellent questions!  Glad you're so engaged :)  I hope that you continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds.  Thanks so much for reviewing.

0/10

darkeyedreamer

The story was not only beautiful, but extremely well-written. I only wish there were more fan fiction writers like you.

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

*beams  Thank you!  There are others who write beautiful and well-written stories... and I also have other stories if you like my style!  I hope you enjoy them.  Thank you so much for letting me know how you felt about this one.  *hugs

Response from darkeyedreamer (Reviewer)

*hugs back* I have actually been really enjoying a few of your other stories. I plan on reading all of them, but I will probably have to wait until the weekend because of all my schoolwork. I'll try and review the other ones too. 

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Oh, good!  I'm so glad you're enjoying them.  Schoolwork always comes first, but you'll have them waiting for you when you take breaks. :)

10/10

persefone

Once I read the two first chapters I just couldn't stop!The characters are colorful and perfectly credible, and the story - in my opinion - reaches just the right level of angst.Thank you for such a beautiful fic!

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

Oh, yay!  Thanks so much for letting me know.  I'm so happy that you found it just right. :)  I hope you enjoy my other stories, too!

10/10

sregner

I've been waiting for this to be somewhere so I could read it again.  Bless you again machshefa for this glorious story.  I'm so glad I already know what happens (but will keep silent so everyone enjoys it as much as I did).  Your muse..."your the god"

Response from shefa (Author of There, Where I Can Never Find You)

*waves... I'm so glad that you're rereading this here!  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it the first time around and that you're enjoying it a second time through. :)  *hugs and thanks for your enthusiasm 

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