Shadows on the Wind
Chapter 4 of 14
Velvet SongHermione is returning to Hogwarts to teach Potions, and finds something dark and mysterious in the forest.
ReviewedShadows on the Wind
There was carnage as far as the eye could see. Corpses were scattered everywhere. So much blood had been spilled, that it now stained the ground. You could gaze in any direction, and all you would see were pale and emotionless faces, empty eyes... death.
It was a gruesome, horrifying sight.
Now the Death Eaters’ masks were off; they were revealing their faces now that the War raged furiously. They were proud of the innocence they destroyed, the lives they took. They were proud to be serving such a disgusting monster; the knowledge that someone could take pleasure in being associated with such horror was enough to make her nauseous.
Hermione was glancing around, looking to see where she might be needed next. Her eyes fell upon people she knew, people on both sides.
Remus was locked in a duel with Bellatrix. Susan Bones was sending a hex toward Pansy Parkinson.
Her eyes continued to scan the chaotic scene, and she felt the world tilt temporarily as her eyes landed on his face.
How could he betray us? she thought to herself as she ran backwards, throwing a hex across the field at a random Death Eater. She watched for any opening to attack, but suddenly blinked when she saw Snape inconspicuously curse a Death Eater that was standing close to him.
Was she seeing things? Surely Severus Snape, Death Eater and murderer of the beloved Headmaster of Hogwarts, did not just attack one of his own?
Her momentary lack of concentration almost cost her, and she dove out of the way of a stream of green light.
“Hermione!”
The witch glanced up to see Remus shooting glances towards her.
“Are you alright?” he shouted above the noise.
Neville, who had been close by when she had fallen, caught her by the wrist and hauled her to her feet. They both took off running towards the werewolf as another hex was sent their way. “Are you hurt?”
“I’m fine,” she called back at their former teacher, as she nodded to her friend. When she glanced across the field, she could see Gregory Goyle lifting his wand toward them, and raised her own in response.
A blast of red shot out beside her, and she watched as the young Slytherin was lifted off his feet and slammed into a Death Eater behind him. She glanced at Neville, who had seen the impending attack, and smiled. “Thanks.”
“HARRY!”
A scream from Ginny Weasley caught her attention, and both she and Neville turned to see Harry go down.
“NO!”
With Neville’s cry in her ears, she took off across the grounds, the muscular boy passing her as he rushed toward the fallen wizard. But she did not have time to consider Neville’s odd reaction, because something caught her attention: a uniformed shout. It came from the opposite side field.
Hermione skidded to a halt at the sight of Severus Snape, Lucius, Narcissa and Draco Malfoy running backwards, sending hexes and curses at Voldemort and his followers.
There was suddenly silence from both sides, and the only voices were from the four that were scrambling across the field, over the dead bodies and carnage created from both Good and Bad.
No one moved. No one spoke. No one could believe what they were seeing, and the silence was almost painful.
The Malfoys were in the lead, with Snape just behind. They were so near; Draco was only a few yards away from McGonagall!
Was it a trick? What if they were just trying to get into their ranks to take them from the inside? What if this was a way to get to The-Boy-Who-Lived?
They were closer now, so close in fact, that you could make out the silver colour of Draco’s irises from the white.
Hermione was just beginning to think their luck was changing, that with these four on their side that they could take down Voldemort for good. She even allowed the corners of her mouth to twitch, pride shining in her eyes.
It was a brave thing, turning your back on the feared Dark Lord.
They were so close!
A hideous shriek filled the air.
It was a curse, and it was streaking its way like horizontal lighting to the Potions master!
She did not move; it was like she was rooted to the spot.
Everyone watched in horror as the black and purple made contact with Snape, hitting him square in the chest. Instead of a flash of light, there was a deafening pop that left her ears ringing painfully as a thick, massive black cloud of smoke began expanding.
Hermione watched in horror as the cloud grew twelve meters in every direction. Sweet Merlin! There was no way that Snape could survive whatever Voldemort had done, but still she prayed to every deity known to man that when the thick cloud disappeared, that the Slytherin would be there.
Voldemort could have attacked then, but the witch detachedly noticed that he did not. Apparently, Snape’s betrayal and punishment were more important to him.
After what seemed to be an eternity, every trace of the cloud was gone. And so was Snape.
Hermione could only blink, her mind going into shock.
She did not know of any curse or hex that could make a person completely disappear like that. It was then that Hermione realized the curse had been spoken in a language that she had not recognized, and her mind was flipping through languages like a rolodex. If she could pinpoint what language it might be, she could look up the translation later.
Hermione could vaguely hear Narcissa screaming, the start of more chaos, but she did not heed any of it. She was still staring blankly at the spot where Severus Snape had been, as if watching the empty air would bring him back.
Surely, he could not be gone.
She did not know how long she had been there, but her attention was pulled away by a dark shadow that passed behind her. She turned to see who was behind her, and saw Justin Finch-Fletchley a few yards away. He was the closest person to her at that moment.
Hermione turned her eyes to the sky, and saw nothing.
She had always thought that Hogwarts' grounds were slightly creepy at night. You could never tell what was hidden in the starlight darkness; the sounds you heard were equally as terrifying, and not knowing what might be lurking near the edges of the forest was enough to scare her half witless.
She was drained from the long train journey; after all, hours spent on a train, with nothing to do, was intensely boring. She was surprised that she was not in a coma.
Shhwooogh.
Hermione’s head snapped up to the sky, where the noise was coming from. She could have sworn she heard wings flapping; she knew she was somewhat tired, but she did not think she was crazy.
However, as she peered up into the darkness, she saw nothing.
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I felt the urge to read this story again from the beginning. I'm hoping that your health issues have been cleared. My prayers have been with you all these years. Blessings on you for opening this world to us. May you continue to touch many lives through your works.
I love this story, too. Thank you for making it possible for Ms. Tree to complete your wonderful work. It has been on my "to read" list for a very long time, and I'm so happy to now finally have the time to read it.
Beth
For what it's worth I would like to tell you, Velvet Song, that you've me hooked up with your terribly clever thought out and well written story. Thank you for sharing it and also thank you for allowing another one to continue. I dearly hope your RL is looking up and that you're feeling better nowadays.
Thank you so much, for your wonderful story. I hope you are feeling better now. You have shown great courage, in turning over your baby to someone else to finish. Thank you.
What a ,frightening, lovely, Dragon.
Was it really an accident, that Marigold gave her, that book?
It isn't her mind, speaking to her, is it?
Bloody Dragon, indeed, she just can't shake Severus.
Making his rounds, old habits die hard.
Something wicked, this way comes.
I love the way , she has made the speech her own.
How dreadful, tobe reliving his loss. poor Hermione.
Neville & Harry, interesting, love Harrys teasing, but sad for Hermione.
It's aways what we didn't do, that hurts most, when looking back, but I think I like your Hermione.
I'm so sorry you are so ill, I have a spinal injury myself , & the cramps are hell, specialy when thay grab while you are asleep. Hope you are better soon. I will continue to read, & review, then move on to MsTree's page, for the rest. Thank you for a new POV, in the HP Fan-Fic world.
I loved this story when I first read it several years ago and I'm now excited that it will be finished. Thank you for your wonderful plot. It is a testimony to the brilliance of your story that Ms Tree wanted to finish it.
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. I really do wish I could have finished, but life gets in the way and mess with inspiration. But Ms Tree did an absolutely amazing job with it, and I truly believe she gave it the best ending! I never could have done something that remarkable.
I thank you for starting such a wonderful story. I thank you for finding another writer for it. I remember reading part of this story some time back but I don't think I got this far, and I think I hadn't had a chance to bookmark it when the browser crashed, so I had lost it. I have thoroughly enjoyed what you've written so far and I wish you the best!
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you, hun. I was very fortunate that Ms Tree wanted to continue on, and I personally think she gave it a much better ending than I ever could.
:( at least there is a continuation. im sorry that you felt you couldn't finish it, but your reasons are sound. all in all, what you DID write was very good and im looking forward to what MsTree will do with it. :)
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
Thank you. There's so much that I wanted to do, but couldn't. Ms Tree, however, stepped in and add so much more than I could have ever imagined. She did a lovely job, and I was so impressed that I have read it several times already.
Can't wait to see where she takes it. This is really a charming, unique plot. I hope to read more of it soon.
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
I'm sure you know this by now, but she did. She did a FABULOUS job. I was thrilled.
Well, I hope she puts two and two together soon. Lucius couldn't have dropped a bigger hint. I enjoyed this chapter. Didn't even catch on to the name manip. It was nice to hear something from Severus' pov, even if it was second hand information. And what a something!
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
She does, but not in this half. Ms Tree had that section. LOL! And she did a much better job with the reveal than I would have.
A little flare for the dramatic Professor Granger?
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
*giggle* I'm a drama queen! LOL!
What a terrible thing to be repeating that final battle over and over again. Poor Hermione.
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
Oh, you'll be so glad I gave it to Ms Tree when I did, because before life interrupted my writing, I was planning on showing his transformation to Hermione and it was EXCRUCIATING. That was worse than seeing the battle.
Ah so Hermione's pining away over the potion master was not quite as private as she thought. Harry and Neville together are so cute!
Hermione hasnt moved on much emotionally in the last 7 years has she? Maybe working where Snape used she can lay to rest some of her demons? Maybe?
I love the idea that Severus was Albus' son. Thats a great twist that i have not read before. Your AN makes me worry. Are you updating more frequently now? Feeling better?
Response from Velvet Song (Author of Damsels & Dragons)
Long story short. Between illness and having been away from the story so long, I've moved on from it. However, I am turning it over to the most generous writer ever: MsTree. She is brilliant and creative, and more than that she is generous. I've given her the few notes that I have and despite having said that she has free reign, she is keeping contact with me about it. She's an absolutely sweetheart. So keep a watch on her profile, because she will be continuing it.