Chapter 6
Chapter 6 of 11
tonksingerEverybody learns slightly more than they wanted to know, but not as much as they need.
ReviewedAN: As always, thanks to astopperindeath for fixing the things my writer-brain missed. Also thanks to the ghost of John Milton for not haunting me in revenge.
Chapter 6
Each perturbation smoothed with outward calm,
Artificer of fraud; and was the first
That practised falsehood under saintly show
~Paradise Lost, Book IV
"So Harry's in Italy? Lucky." Hermione drummed her fingers against her thigh, trying to think of anything else to ask Severus.
She'd been right about Harry and Dumbledore. Apparently Italy was a very safe place at the moment. Voldemort had tried and failed to gain purchase there during the first war. While pure-blood prominence was a popular idea amongst the ancient blood of the Italians, doing anything to harm the legions of Muggle touristas was not.
"Are we quite done, Miss Granger? I have things to do, many of them unpleasant even in comparison to this."
"One more question, actually," she said, and smirked as he heaved a long-suffering groan.
"Why are there no books on the Dark Arts or dueling in the cottage here?"
"I...don't know," he said. He looked...startled, surprised, two emotions she had never seen on him.
"It makes our task a bit tricky, don't you think?"
"Yes. Well," he said, "should it come to it, I have a very large collection of such books at my home."
"You...you would grant me access to your library?"
He snorted, and the excitement that had flared up in her wilted.
"Indeed not, unless truly extraordinary circumstances gave me no choice. Any volumes I require you to read, I will bring here. Now," he continued, drawing his wand, "I really must be leaving."
He sketched out the portal and left without another word.
"Good day to you, too," she muttered. She turned on her heel and stalked back towards the cottage.
As she stepped through the front door, she heard Ron's voice in the sitting room. He stopped talking when the door, heavy and oaken, closed with a thud.
"Hermione?"
"Who else?" She looked into the living room, curious as to what would make Ron call out to her.
"Harry!"
Both of the boys winced at her squeal of greeting. Ron was sprawled on the hearthrug, taking up as much space as possible with his lanky limbs. Harry was peering through a mid-air widow exactly like the one Severus had used to call upon Dumbledore the week before. Behind him, she saw white stucco walls, bathed in sun. He was rather pink around the cheeks and nose, and the latter was peeling a bit.
"Oh, Harry, how are you? We were worried when you weren't here with us, but Dumbledore's letter explained that you were safe. Have you talked to anyone else? Do you know anything about what's going on?"
"Hermione," Harry said, laughing, "hold on a second."
"Sorry," she said. "But I have been worried."
"I'm fine, really. I'm over in Italy looking for Horcruxes."
"Looking for them?" Ron said, frowning. "Is there one over there?"
"No. I'm just piecing together the clues." His face clouded over. "Just doing the paperwork, and then it all gets relayed to S...someone and they do the actual hunting and destroying, while I stay here, nice and safe."
He spat the last words. Hermione was reminded of a lion at the London Zoo, pacing its enclosure and growling at passing birds.
"And at least you two have each other to talk to and whatnot,"...Hermione and Ron exchanged awkward glances..."I'm stuck here by myself, and I don't speak any bloody Italian. It must be really bloody nice to not be me and to be allowed to at least live without D...people breathing down your neck and keeping you wrapped in cotton wool--,"
"Harry, stop it, mate."
Ron's voice, firm but quiet, put a pause in Harry's rant.
"Let's not repeat fifth year, eh?" Ron continued. "It's not our fault, and at least you knew a bit more about what the bloody hell was going on."
"We don't like this any more than you do, Harry. You know that," Hermione said.
It was nice to be united with Ron again, even if it was uncomfortable and probably momentary.
Harry sighed. "Sorry. But I've really no one to talk to and everything I say gets something about 'it's all for the best'. It's just...I thought he trusted us to make our own decisions, after he..." Another storm cloud rolled over his features.
No one had to ask who "he" was.
"We'll figure something out, see if we can get out or help you somehow," Ron said. "Or Hermione will, anyway, and you and I will do as she says."
That got a weak laugh from all three of them.
Harry glanced to his left, and nodded to someone outside the mirror's view. "I've got to go," he said, and Hermione heard a mountain of resentment in his voice. "I'll try to talk to you guys soon, but we're right on the brink of discovering where some damn teacup is, so I can't say when I'll be free."
"Okay. We'll try to find a break somewhere between sitting around and doing nothing so we can pencil you in." Ron's infectious grin was back in force, and they all shared it.
"Goodbye, Harry. Please don't do anything heroic and stupid."
"Thanks for the vote of confidence, Hermione. Bye."
The sunny scene turned to a mirror and then winked out, leaving Hermione in the same room with Ron for the first time in a week.
He coughed. "Well, I...I think I'll go get some lunch." He got to his feet and paused to study the rug next to his trainer.
"I'll join you, I think," she said. She went to the door, and looked back to see if he was following.
"We're... okay, then?"
"Yes, Ron. We're okay."
We really have no choice. With the fate of the wizarding world resting on Harry and Dumbledore...a restive teenager and an idealistic schemer...it was no time to make enemies of one's friends. It was no time, in short, to be alone.
Severus stared at his sitting room, empty but for books and his cooling coffee.
Dumbledore had said he'd be in contact by Saturday afternoon, and here it was Sunday morning. The clunky church-bell tolled eleven, probably shaking bits of plaster onto the heads of those few who still attended. It wasn't a town to inspire much faith in fellow humans, much less anything you couldn't see.
Lily had attended, every Sunday when she wasn't at Hogwarts. He'd gone with her once, in the summer before fifth year. The shining happiness in her face as she sang the hymns and recited the psalms had made him ache for what he could never have. Always aspire to, in some corner of his mind, but never attain.
With a growl, he seized the coffee mug and downed its lukewarm contents in a gulp. A dark sludge of sugar and silt, oversweet and muddy, hit his tongue and he grimaced as he swallowed it.
And then his arm burned.
"Accio mask!" It was a routine he had long ago got used to: drop everything and go. Loyalty and punctuality were rewarded by the Dark Lord.
The air shimmered; a mirror appeared. "Severus? Are you--,"
"Not now, Albus!" he bellowed, snatching the silver mask from the air and placing it to his face. It shifted, molded, and attached itself to his brow, leaving his mouth uncovered.
He took a precious second to look Dumbledore full in the face, to see the silver mask reflected in his half-moon spectacles.
Dumbledore nodded solemnly. "When you can, then, my boy. Good luck."
Clutching his arm and feeling it tug him to the Dark Lord, Severus spun and let it pull him to his Master.
He reappeared in a circular room. Stone walls covered in empty portrait frames surrounded him, pierced by an occasional window that let in the summer sunlight.
Voldemort stood next to a huge oak desk, examining an intricate globe made of brass cogs, which clicked and spun to a rhythm all their own. To his right, Bellatrix and Rodolphus Lestrange held Minerva McGonagall against the wall, their wands pressed to her throat.
"Ah, Severus," Voldemort said, "thank you for joining us. I do hope my summons did not interrupt your breakfast?"
His red eyes were focused on Severus' left hand. Severus followed his gaze to find his empty coffee mug.
"I apologize, my Lord," he said, dropping to one knee and placing the cup on the ground. "I was eager to obey your summons."
The mug exploded, snowing ceramic shards. Severus felt the heat of the spell on his face.
"Your zeal is commendable. Stand."
Severus obeyed, trying hard not to look at Minerva. She seemed unhurt, and he could have bounced Galleons off her rigid spine. Proud to the end. An end that he hoped he could delay.
"I believe you know our host, Severus. Deputy Headmistress and Head of Gryffindor House, Professor Minerva McGonagall."
He was always so polite. It was always so terrifying. "Well, my Lord."
"Obviously, she will no longer be useful Headmistress of Hogwarts. The question is, Severus, will she be of use at all?"
Severus stared back at that unblinking red gaze and tried to work out how to save her.
"My Lord, she is an excellent Transfiguration teacher."
Voldemort studied Minerva with his head cocked to one side, toying with his wand. The pose was so calculating, Severus half expected him to examine her teeth.
"But she has a history of being ferociously loyal to Albus, and, I would suspect, continues this in his memory. I will not endanger my plans by harboring possible traitors." His demonic gaze returned to Severus, not implacable, but in need of very good reasons.
You could cut the irony with a knife, Severus thought. Aloud, he said, "My Lord, she is very protective of her students, particularly the Gryffindors."
"Meaning?"
"Meaning she will not risk their well-being for personal vendettas. If she thinks...knows...that her obedience, and only that, will keep them safe, then she will bow to you. The other professors will follow her example."
Voldemort considered Minerva for an interminable moment. She stared straight back at him, though her face was white and drawn; Severus could see her hands shaking at her sides. Her bold front was a gamble. Either the Dark Lord would be impressed with her courage or offended at her defiance.
"A mind is a terrible thing to waste, I suppose," he said at last. Severus suppressed an exhalation of relief.
"Step aside," he said, gesturing the Lestranges out of the way. "Now, Professor McGonagall, to seal this bargain, I think you should fulfill Severus' promise: that you will bow before me."
She stood ramrod straight, eyes glittering hatred.
"Bow, I said." He was hissing now, the sibilant sound chilling in the absolute silence.
If possible, her chin went a little higher.
"Severus, if you would?" Voldemort stepped back, and extended his arm.
I'm sorry, Minerva. Damn her Gryffindor pride.
Severus leveled his wand at Minerva, and she turned to face him, lips thin and hard.
"Imperio!"
She twitched as the spell took hold, eyes now blank and empty, jaw slack. Severus swallowed his disgust at the sight, hating himself for doing this to her.
Bow, Minerva. Bow to your master. He bore down on her with his thoughts, battling his will against hers. She fought him bravely, but the spell did its work. Vertebrae by vertebrae, her back bent and bowed her before Voldemort.
"Who says an old dog can't learn new tricks?" Voldemort's high laugh, joined quickly by Bellatrix's mad cackle, pierced the air as Severus released her from the spell. She straightened, her back creaking.
"Crucio!"
The only warning had been the cessation of his laugh, and now Minerva writhed against the wall at the point of Voldemort's wand. Severus stared at the oak desk, trying to block out her cries of agony.
"You will bow when I command it," Voldemort hissed. "You will live when I allow it. And you will die when I wish it."
She collapsed into a tartan heap when he released her, gasping for breath.
"Come," he said, as calmly as if he not just tortured an elderly witch. "There are other things to deal with. To the Manor."
Severus did not allow himself to stay.
They appeared outside Malfoy Manor, upon a long, manicured path lined with tall hedges.
"You dealt with the old bitch perfectly, my Lord." That was Bellatrix, looking at Voldemort with hot eyes and parted lips. Rodolphus stared stoically at the path ahead of them, ignoring his wife's blatant lust. Severus suspected that no love was lost between the couple; if snake-babies started popping out of her, it was likely that Rodolphus would not blink. She moved closer to Voldemort, heaving deep breaths that forced her breasts tightly against their scanty enclosures.
"Calm yourself, Bella," Voldemort murmured. "You are making a scene."
She flushed an ugly mauve and looked away.
"I shall fly to the Manor. Join me in the skies, Severus." With that, Voldemort lifted from the ground like a bat out of hell, black robes swirling in the wind as he rose fifty feet.
Severus drew his wand and muttered, "Corpus avis!" He jumped and the spell caught him midair, lifting him until he was level with the Dark Lord.
"Nothing dampens her cunt like torture," Voldemort remarked, gazing down at the witch on the ground, who had turned her predatory attention to her husband.
Severus declined to comment on the state of Bellatrix's cunt. Instead, he asked, "Was there a private matter you wished to discuss with me, my Lord?"
"I require a Headmaster for Hogwarts, Severus."
Fuck.
Hours later, Severus Apparated into his sitting room. The couch coughed up a puff of dust as he collapsed onto it, head in his hands.
"Accio whiskey."
He snatched the bottle from the air and ripped out the glass stopper, flinging it across the room. Gulping the liquor down was like drinking turpentine.
"Severus?"
He had forgot the mirror that hung in the air. As he glared up at it, Albus's face came into view, concern etched in every line.
"I have news, Headmaster," Severus spat. "Oh, sorry, would you care for a drink first?" He waved the bottle in Albus's face. "You might need it."
"Severus, what is going on?" His soft voice was unusually sharp.
"More for me, then." Severus took another swig. "Well, Albus," he said, rasping slightly from the burning alcohol, "what is going on is the Dark Lord needs a new Headmaster for Hogwarts. Minerva's job interview didn't go so well, so he wants a lovely Death Eater to churn out little minions with each diploma."
Albus might be old, but he was still quick. "You?"
"Possibly. I am, and I quote, 'a top contender.'"
"Who are the others?"
"The Dark Lord did not bless me with that information." Severus stared at the amber whiskey, sloshing it back and forth in its bottle. "But whoever they are, I suggest you hurry up and find the remaining Horcruxes."
"Why?"
"Because I refuse to be Headmaster of bloody Hogwarts."
"Severus, it would be for the cause, for the best...,"
"I do not want to be drawn further into your plots and plans, Albus!" Severus snarled. "I do not wish to be another lapdog in that school, to be the blame and locus of hatred for every parent and every student. I'm having a hard enough time staying alive as it is without worrying the house-elves will stab me in my sleep with the steak knives!"
"Severus!" Albus's voice was cold, now, cold as it had been seventeen years ago when he had looked down at a young man begging for a woman's life.
"You will do it, if he asks you. I know you will."
Such faith, Albus. Touching. "We shall see. Perhaps he won't pick me. I will endeavor to make myself useful to him in other ways."
"Indeed. Now, I do have some good news." Back to the sunny, smiling man with twinkling eyes.
"Do tell." Severus considered the whiskey, and then he placed it to the side. It was warming his veins well already.
"We have found the location of the locket."
"Let me guess...I get to pick it up? Cash on delivery?"
Albus sighed. "Mundungus Fletcher has it, we think. Use your contacts to meet with him, and yes, Severus, you will have to pay for it. And before you bemoan your financial situation," he added, seeing Severus's scowl, "I will Floo you the money once you have secured a meeting."
"Very well. What do I to destroy it? Drop it down the loo?"
"The Sword of Gryffindor, which hangs in my office--,"
Tacky fucking cleaver, Severus thought, suppressing a tipsy snigger.
"...will destroy it with a blow. Or, you can cast Fiendfyre, though I would do so from a distance and with plenty of water on hand."
"Very well," Severus said, standing up and nodding emphatically. "Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to piss. Good day, Albus."
One last sigh of resignation and then the mirror scattered. Severus considered the empty air where it had been, then reached for the bottle again. A hot bath to mull things over sounded nice. Pity there wasn't enough whiskey to bathe in, but so it went.
With the exaggerated care of the inebriated, Severus headed for the toilet.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Paradise Forsaken
34 Reviews | 8.74/10 Average
Argh! No next chapter button! This is brilliant, so brilliant in fact that I've read it in one day, and I've not done anything but read! I can't wait to see what happens next - I love how there's no 'camping and being depressed and not much else' storyline :D Yay!!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Thank you very much!
What is that old saying?"This will not end well."--??I have a feeling more than one fire is about to hit the fan.Oh Lord, he's drunk....and here it comes....
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
I love, love, love writing Severus drunk. Talk about yer loose cannons...
Severus hoped that the scar on Potter’s head would prove to be the last of them, and that it would have to be removed from his head prior to destruction. Possibly with a blunt knife.Ha! One guess as to who he envisions on the handle end of the knife.Bellatrix Lestrange? I would have never guessed her to be the administrative type :) I'd think even Voldemort isn't insane enough to put her in charge of the school, but I suppose he has his reasons. It isn't going to be pretty, anyway.Drunken Snape? Well, that's a good thing in my book, so long as he sets himself to planning the post-Horcrux-destruction-shag, and leaves the casting of Fiendfyre to Hermione. I sure hope you will be back with the next chapter soon *flashes you my pathetic eyes*
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Bella might not be the administrative type, but if anyone's going to keep order through sheer terror, it's her. And Voldemort likes to play these little games with his minions. I love writing drunk Snape--it's such fun. :)
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
I love writing drunk Snape--it's such fun. :)You're such a tease!
Oh wow. What a chapter. I could never have dreamed of mad Bella as Headmistress.
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Hee. Ebil, ebil me. :)
Hermione is a more competent duelist than I had predicted and is remarkably skilled with Dark Arts, which I pray gives you a heart attack when she boils Dolohov’s blood in his veins.Ha! I'm certainly not a Dumbledore hater, but it does amuse me to think how much pleasure Snape would get from flaunting his corruption of the star Gryffindor in front of the Headmaster.Ron seems to be taking their non-relationship in stride. I hope for both of their sakes, it lasts.It occurred to her, as she turned to him, that hers were not the only hands that could, hypothetically speaking, of course, end up in her knickers. *soaks drool up with towel before keyboard shorts out*
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
*non-hating high-five*I think Dumbledore gets a lot of undeserved hatred in this ship. I love, love, love that you're differentiating between "Snape hates Dumbledore" and "Dumbledore is the root of all evil." Character perspective: it makes a difference.
What a chapter! There is really no explicit content and yet it was very steamy. Which is something that you always excel at, by the way. When he finally does get the girl, look out.They have a fantastic dynamic here. He is clearly in a position of power over her, and yet as he has noticed, she is gaining on him a bit. Just a short time ago, he was cold and harsh and she was intimidated by him. She is getting bolder, he is getting softer, and soon they will meet somewhere in the middle and sparks will fly (in a good way, I hope).I especially liked the part where she was using the boiling spell. Her immersion into feelings- fear, curiosity, and desire- along with his fascination in watching her experience such a thing was wonderfully done.But my favorite line has to be:And if you drool on the books, I will hex you all around this blasted fairy-tale forest, is that clear?”Ha! Does he know her or what?
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
The power dynamics in this fic were a blast to write--always changing, shifting, never quite solid. I'm so glad people are picking up on that. I am rather proud of that line. And it's not kindofsortofwhatIwoulddo. At all. Nope. :PThanks for reviewing! New chapter is in the queue.
an extremely interesting story...oh sev! give in now while you still can! you will be hers before you know it, not the other way around!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Sadly, Severus isn't the giving in type... He's more the self-torturing type. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from keske (Reviewer)
^^ yes i s'pose he is!
Yes, the cold hard plan of seduction is quickly turning into something more. And Severus, even though he keeps telling himself that he is in control is loosing it rapidly. Beautifully done.
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
There's always something more, if you know where to look. The question is, how will that something be resolved? :)
She is so ready for a challenge. :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
She always is. :)
Poor, clueless Ron. Of course. he'll be wanting sex every five minutes now, so perhaps I should save my sympathy for Hermione. :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
My sympathies lie with Ron, actually. He's the one who got used. Poor man.
What, Albus, no chaperone? How remiss of you! :p
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
All part of the Great Plan for the Greater Good. How can they fall in epilogue-destined love if they have a chaperone? :p
Okay, I snorted at the last line. Just as well no-one was passing by my office just then! :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
*giggles* Tonksinger: getting people odd looks since 2008.
Like the trick with the sand. Smartass that he is. :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Hee. I stole that from somewhere. It seemed like a nice Slytherin move. When in doubt, use the landscape.
Minerva's pride could be her undoing. Hopefully, she eventually realises Severus just saved her life. :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Oh, she'll realise it. Won't get him off the hook, though, wonderful woman that she is.
Now she finds Snape preferable to Ron. Which, of course, was his plan. ;)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
All things according to plan... for now, anyway.
Really enjoy the detailed inner-thoughts of Hermione -- her being troubled by events and surroundings, along with her awareness and sensing that some unforeseen things are amiss, as well as having to deal with a randy Ron, on top of everything else!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Thank you! Hermione's got such a wonderful mind; writing it is a lot of fun.
Haha, I loved the part where the Dark Lord is saying how Bellatrix reacts to torture. :p Reminds me of Titus Pullo in the TV series Rome, counselling Lucius Vorenus to give Niobe a warm beating heart of an enemy...he claims it will make her "wet as October". :pAnd also: what HBAR said.
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Good old pure, psychotic sadism. Bella is such fun. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Love your dynamics with Draco & Severus, and the trio, all the indepth details and nuances; and Severus, as always, in control and steps ahead of everyone else; love the banter and humour between Dumbledore and Severus!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Thank you very much! These characters are such fun to pit against each other, with very different personalities and goals.
Nice to see Harry is faring well (although he doesn't think so) and that Ron and Hermione are on the mend. The scene with Snape and Minerva, and Voldemort was a little unnerving, but thank goodness it all worked out ... for now. Looking forward to more.
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
*hugs Minerva* I hated doing that to her. I love McGonagall, but that was the natural progession of Voldemort's thought process. Poor Severus didn't come out of it unscathed, either.
wow - this is great! Ron's "performance" in the last chapter reminded me of a boy long long ago in my life. Ugh. Poor Hermione. Can't wait to see what Severus is up to!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Heheh... yeah. Been there, sister. Poor Ronnikins. I'm mean to him. Thank you!
Poor Hermione! Left with more questions than answers...I did enjoy Snape's remark of "No, I will not tell you which books contain the procedure for creating golems." And how much of what he told her regarding Albus' plans for her is actually true? Is she correct in her hypothesis regarding Harry's whereabouts? What will Severus' next move be? I do so love this story! Look forward to the next chapter (soon, please?)!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Soon, I promise. And I apologize for the wait for these; life hit me like a tornado. But the final chapter is being written at the moment, and then after some retroactive smoothing, we can get back on track. Thank you for your patience!
Another great chapter! I really enjoyed the description of Voldemort's mercurial mood-swings and its parallel to the mutability of the Dark Arts; also Hermione's decision to have sex with Ron simply because she was bored. It's not pretty or admirable, but it is so very human. And I almost feel sorry for Lavender if Ron's less-than-stellar performance was what she had to put up with while they were together!I can believe that Severus would laugh until he cried hearing Ron's attempts at pleasing a partner--what a meanie! Hermione is just a tool to his mind right now, but I sincerely hope that he winds up getting more deeply invested in the planned seduction than he counted on. The look on his face when he does so is always priceless.Off to read the next chapter!
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
"It's not pretty or admirable, but it is so very human."That was exactly what I was going for--in bad situations, anyone can make stupid decisions. I hate it in fanfic when Hermione never sets a foot wrong; she's a flawed character and those flaws go farther than being a know-it-all. Thank you very much for your thoughful reviews!
Great start, looking forward to more :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Thank you! I'll be posting more soon, I promise!
Promising very Promising :D eagerly awaiting the next partsCheers :)
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
Thanks!
Uh oh! The plot thickens...and this time, Hermione gets some brilliantly snarky lines/thoughts, which is fabulous. My faves were: without her there to solve puzzles and provide walking dictionary service, he probably wouldn’t get very far and Pushing Dumbledore into an oven was looking better by the minute. Poor Dumbles--even "dead" he manages to royally irritate others. After her near heart attack, Minerva might very well assist Hermione with the pushing!This is great--looking forward to the next chapter to see how things progress with all our intrepid heroes...
Response from tonksinger (Author of Paradise Forsaken)
LOL! I love writing snarky inner thoughts for her and Snape. And the third chapter is being submitted to the queue tonight! Sorry for the wait--college has that affect.