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The Wages of Sin Chapter 2: Sloth
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The Wages of Sin

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rosewood

This is a series of drabbles based on the Seven Deadly Sins that was originally written for the LJ "Snape Last Drabble Writer Standing" competition. Each chapter is meant to be a stand-alone snapshot.

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The Seven Deadly Sins: Sloth

Epitome


The Potions master swirled the tea in his cup as Dumbledore happily chattered by his side at the Head Table. He glanced toward the Gryffindor area and watched the dynamics unfold between Boy Wonder and his two cohorts. An ever-indulgent cynic, he often contemplated how in the hell that particular rag-tag trio of youthful blunder would manage to somehow defeat the Dark Lord. It was no small wonder they had managed to survive thus far – despite their careless antics and unwavering need to foolishly rush headlong into any fray without forethought. Merlin only knew he rescued their ungrateful hides more times than he could count.

Despite his misgivings he had to admit that at least Potter made an effort to prepare for the task ahead. It was a good thing he managed to befriend the school’s resident know-it-all or he would surely be lost. At least she had a decent head upon her shoulders and could steer him in the proper direction lest he wander astray. He needed to remain focused, and she would undoubtedly play a vital part in his success.

Then there was Weasley. The boy was nothing more than a nuisance. There was no doubt that his approach to life was half-arsed at best. If he would only make the effort to apply himself – even a fraction as much as he expended in pursuit of Quidditch or skirt chasing – he might actually become an asset to the Light. As it was he was an indolent, slovenly and borderline imbecilic petty little whelp.

Dunderhead.

“I do believe your confidence in Potter’s choice of companions is sorely overrated, Albus,” Severus stated nonchalantly. “Take Weasley, for instance. He’s much like a worn quill – shabby, unreliable and utterly pointless.”


A/N: Originally written for the LJ "Snape Last Drabble Writer Standing" challenge.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Wages of Sin

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moiramountain

You've captured Snape's "voice" perfectly - both in his internal dialogue and that deliciously acerbic summation of Ron.  Nicely done !!

Response from rosewood (Author of The Wages of Sin)

That is a mighty high compliment! Thank you! :)

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quaffswinegaily

I like Snape's assessment of Ron.

Response from rosewood (Author of The Wages of Sin)

In all honesty, inspiration for that last line was from watching my son repeatedly sharpening a rather worn pencil. Hahaha!Thanks for taking the time to review!

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hexgirl

Now that is exactly how I expect him to react. Not enough has been dealt with in terms of the utter bile Snape would feel towards Lily's betrayer. I think he would probably feel almost as much anger towards himself too. Good job.

Response from rosewood (Author of The Wages of Sin)

There are so many different avenues Snape could have taken to exact his revenge against Pettigrew, and every one of them would have been cold and calculating. I thought it fitting that a hands-on non-magical form of death would be the perfect way to go.Thanks for the great review!

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snitchette

That is quite a show of cold rage. not that I expect Severus to shout and cast things to the ground. Very well done.

Response from rosewood (Author of The Wages of Sin)

Severus has had years to dwell upon this single act of revenge. That's a hell of a lot of pent up rage.Thanks for the review!

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quaffswinegaily

Brutal retaliation.

Response from rosewood (Author of The Wages of Sin)

I have often wondered what Severus would do if he ever had a chance to exact revenge on Pettigrew.Thanks for the review!

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snitchette

That's nice to know someone cared, that he was not totally alone.

Response from rosewood (Author of The Wages of Sin)

Young Sev needs someone in his corner. I'm glad you enjoyed this little drabble. :)Thank you for your kind review.

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snitchette

Snape's perception of Ron is so true. As for Hermione a "decent head" is probably the best she'll ever get from him.

Response from rosewood (Author of The Wages of Sin)

This was an enjoyable writting exercise. It's fun to smack around the Golden Trio on occasion. :)

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