Ever the gentleman.

I like both versions but I think the second is the best.

clever and funny.  thanks

I read both versions, and enjoyed both, though I prefer this one.  Thanks for including it!

I love your writing. I'm always amazed at how much of a story can be conveyed in a 100 word drabble.

Well she should have known better, but for her sake I'm glad she didn't.  Nicely done, as always.  Incidentally, I think both versions of this scene work just fine.

Yes, the clipped version is good, but the longer take is better. I loved the phrase, Voldemort-take-them heels. Very nice.

Absolutely wonderfully written:-))

I agree with you: I also prefer the longer version.

I'd be delighted to read about the morning after...

A very gentlemanly thing to do...not :D