This is so lovely and moving - a beautiful glimpse into their relationship!

Lovely, So much conveyed with so few words.

I like the many ways that you likened her to the shielding rain cloak, yet at the same time slowly healing him.

Absolutely lovely. I love that she's there to protect and comfort him when he needs it the most.

lovely and evokative.  yoou can get so much emotion into so few words.  thanks and mucho smoochies

I like the rain. I mean, I don't love the actual stuff- it rains far too much in my home city for me to love it in reality, but I do love the imagery.  A good, clean rain.

I found it really moving, especially the part where he considers ending it all. I like reading of a Hermione who is matured and responsible. I find reading her attempting pranks and such very out of character.

Oh, very nicely done. Hermione is there through everything, isn't she? Always at his side to comfort and support him. Lovely set of drabbles.

I simply loved it...exquisite!!!!! Thanks for sharing this exceptionnally moving drabble.

HLH

Oh my, what a wonderful read...Crying now..Bless Hermione for taking care of Severus.. I'm adding this to my faves...well done..I love it!

The beauty of language is its abilty to conjure images and emotions.  Your words were wonderfully evocative of both.

Great idea, a spell to remove the venom! She's smart and brave..she stood by him no matter what!