It did all work out well!  And I might be a bit of a sucker for an adult detention scene.  Thanks for sharing such a fun little take.

I didn't expect him to know what was going on and interrogate the creepy peeping Toms, but so glad he did.  And I think they can both do passion just fine.  When he loses control ... *dies a little*

Yowza, that's good stuff!  *fans self*. The best part is when real Severus is bossing the TV couple around, and also when they are staring open mouthed at the real couple before he clicks them out of existence.  Steamy and funny is a great combo!

How have I not read this?!  It is very fun so far and I'm sure that won't change.  I mean, at least I hope the room has it in for them the entire trip.  I'd feel sorry for them if I wasn't so amused.  Off to read more!

I think I love the last bit about detention the most lol.

Hmmm.  I like the humour but can't buy into the 'no wands' rule.  It's completely OOC for the wizarding world, like asking  a muggle to go without clothes.  And honestly?  As soon as I read the word 'okay' in a HGSS story being spoken by a British character, that's it for me.  It's very much an Americanism.

The ending made me laugh. I enjoyed the story, it was very creative. Thank you.

This was such a great little story, wonderful job :)

oh I know I'm going to love this story! I loved the charmed tv giving pointers, incredible imagination!

What a delightful tale.I loved the last two lines. Detention, indeed! A fantasy they both shared, apparently. ;)

Very enjoyable!  I especially love when I am following a story that I really like and I don't have to wait months between updates - thanks!

WOW! And . . . there's MORE??

Oooo, I love it when Snape utterly loses control!

wow - that was just - wow

Another great chapter...and I do love your way with words, Ron having left Hermione "shaken and unstirred." I daresay after tonight Hermione must feel as though she was tossed into a blender!   As fun as the times in the stateroom have been, I can't help but wonder what's really up with that?  Is it really an accident, or is it something more?  Brad and Brianna don't seem to be much help, and they don't seem terribly sorry about the fact either.Can't wait until the next chapter!

I may have smoke pouring from my ears. *whistles*

Soooooooooo smexy... 

So far, this story is a riot! I love stories where everything is working to push those two together, no matter how unwilling they seem to be at first ^^

Great first chapter!  I really enjoyed reading the dynamics of their working relationship before the cruise, especially the line,Actually, he’d said that she looked like the underside of a fish. He was one to talk.LOL!   Natually, Severus can't show concern without cloaking it in a snarky comment!  But now that they've mastered The Kiss, I can't wait to see how things progress from there.  Their partnership will never be the same, true, but hopefully it will become even better.

It seems a long since we talked.  But is this story finished ?  It sounds like it is or should be.   But it says in the summary that it is not.  Could you clarify that ?  It is great, I always find it fun when an inanimated object suddenly decides it is sentient LOL.   Can't wait to hear whether it is finished or not.  It just feels like it is.   Talk to you soon, keep on writing.

Wow... So hot!!! They are really good together! >//<